2022届高三牛津版英语一轮复习全书讲义-第三部分第九讲解读图表信息稳固构建图表作文-.docx

第九讲　解读图表信息，稳固构建图表作文

在社会经济快速进展、高度进展的今日，人们的物质生活丰富多彩，但是精神生活却存在着很多的问题，也由此产生了人们对“幸福感”的不同看法。假设上周末你校对2 000名同学就“幸福感”的看法进行了调查。请依据以下数据用英语写一篇文章。
比例
“幸福感”的来源
60%
从父母或亲友的爱、从温存的家庭生活中感受到幸福
20%
从助人、捐赠、义卖中感受到幸福
10%
从友情中感受到幸福
10%
异于上述状况，从不同角度叙述自己的幸福感
结论：调查状况反映出同学们是宠爱生活的，但是同时也反映了他们的生活经受有限、视野不够开阔
留意：1要包括以下内容：(1)调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；(2)数据的解读；(3)总体评价。
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

1．60%的同学从父母或亲友的爱以及从温存的家庭生活中感受到幸福。
(一般表达)Sixty percent of the students feel happy.They have the love from their parents and relatives，and also from the warmth of families.
(高级表达)(系表结构＋并列连词)Sixty percent of the students________ the love from their parents and relatives________________ from the warmth of families.
答案：feel happy with；as well as
2．20%的同学认为他们很兴奋去挂念他人，捐献给需要物品的人东西或参与义卖活动。
(一般表达)Twenty percent of the students think they are happy to help others，donate something to people who are in need or take part in a voluntary selling.
(高级表达)(省略结构＋宾语从句＋介词短语作定语＋现在分词作定语)Twenty percent think they ________________ help others，donate something to people________________ or take part in a voluntary________．
答案：are pleased to；in need；selling
3．除了以上这些方面，其他同学也描述了不同方面的幸福。
(一般表达)Besides，the rest of the students talk about their happiness from different aspects.
(高级表达)(高级词汇)________________，the rest of the students______________their happiness from different aspects.
(高级词汇)________________，________________their happiness from different aspects.
答案：Apart from the above；describe；In addition；the rest describe
4．基于这些数据，可以得出结论：我们的同学对生活布满爱，但他们的生活经受是有限的，他们的视野需要被拓宽。
(一般表达)As it is based on the statistics，we can draw a conclusion.Our students have deep love for life.Their life experience is limited，so their horizons need to be broadened.
(高级表达)(过去分词短语＋被动语态＋同位语从句＋并列句)________________________，______________but their life experience is limited，so their horizons need to be broadened.
答案：Based on the statistics; a conclusion can be drawn that our students have deep love for life

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One possible version：
Last weekend，a survey about “The feeling of happiness”was carried out among the 2，000 students of our school.
Sixty percent of the students feel happy with the love from their parents and relatives as well as from the warmth of families.Twenty percent think they are pleased to help others，donate something to people in need or take part in a voluntary selling.Among ten percent of them think friendship gives them much delight.Apart from the above，the rest of the students describe their happiness from different aspects.
Based on the statistics，a conclusion can be drawn that our students have deep love for life，but their life experience is limited so their horizons need to be broadened.

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图表类作文解题关键
图表类作文一般是在图、表中给出确定的内容和情景，要求考生依据图表信息，精确     、客观地反映图表内容，并加以分析，进而得出结论，旨在考查同学从图表材料中猎取信息，并转换成文字信息的力气。
1．认真研读图表。认清图表中的数字、线条、阴影等部分的变化趋势和走向，抓住其主要特点，依据图表所显示的中心信息确定主题、内容层次以及主题句。
2．确定主题段落。分析重组信息，依据信息的不同性质确定具体段落，列出各段的主题句。对所给信息的转述要使用不同的表达方法，反映在文章中也就是要使用不同的词、词组、句型等。
3．深化阐释主题。末段通常用于深化主题，对全文进行总结，发表个人看法。写此段时要留意结论的客观性、看法的合理性，不行妄加评断。