高考英语全国卷分类汇编之书面表达-2014说课讲解.doc

精品文档2008-2012年全国卷之书面表达书面表达评分原则：1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。写作建议：注重书信格式：如开头第一句话直接交代写信目的，可借鉴使用I am writing to+寻求帮助类表达方式，如seek（or ask）for help for/appeal to/resort to/turn to+需要帮助的事情；或者更地道的The purpose of my writing is to1. 慎审题，开好局仔细慎重审题，充分根据试题的所有提示材料，审清要求，审清体裁，明确人称、时态及内容要点等。2. 巧谋篇，拟提纲，写关键词列出需要使用的主要词汇、短语、句型等主要要点3. 过渡词，文紧凑为使自己的书面表达上下连贯，行文紧凑，考生在写作时，可以在文中穿插使用一些连词、副词、短语和句型等。如，and, or, but, then, in a word, after all, neithernor, so that, in other words, for example, namely, that is to say, for instance, 等。5. 细复查，核误点是否有笔误、标点、拼写、时态等方面的错误。发现错误，不要乱涂乱改，以至于影响卷面整洁，得不偿失。修改时，可以像短文改错做题那样，使用缺词、删除符号来加以改正。2008全国卷（I）假定你是李华，从小喜欢大熊猫（Panda）。一直通过有关网站（website）关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信： 1.自我介绍；2.祝贺苏琳生日；3.感谢工作人员；4.索取苏琳三岁生日照注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Sir/ Madam,Greetings from Chian!Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website. Now shes going to be there. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua2008. 全国卷（II）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。要点：1参加中文学习班；2看中文书刊、电视；3学唱中文歌曲；4交中国朋友。注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes2009全国卷I假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： 1外出购物 2替房东还书 3Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消 2）此事已告知Susan 3) 尽快回电 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Mrs. Wilson, Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Li Hua 2009.全国卷II假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容： 1. 简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺； 2. 位置：天安门广场南面； 3. 交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线； 4. 特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。 参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。4.【参考范文】Dear Sarah,Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it. Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tiananmen Square, its very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. Im sure youll like it.2010年全国卷同新课标卷假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest)希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。词数100左右。Dear Ms Smith, Im Li Hua. Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your University. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1st. It will start at 2:00 pm and keep for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and the Nature”. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655. if you have any questions. I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes,Li Hua2010年全国卷假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter 曾表示希望来中国教书，你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括： 1、教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等。 2、授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3、工作量： 每周12学时，任选三门课 ,担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问advisor注意： 1、词数100左右； 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、开头语已经为你写好 Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experience. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students English club or our schools English newspaper. Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions, Id be more than happy to help.2011全国新课标卷假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1本人简介；2求助内容；3约定时间；4你的联系方式 (Email：lihua；Phone：[phone])。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3结束语已为你写好。Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Im writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua；12345678.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua2011全国II（满分30分）假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1说明你是该报的忠实读者2赞赏该报优点 1)兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事3提出建议： 刊登指导英语学习的文章注意：1词数100左右，开头语己为你写好；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on,the,5h anniversary, of Global Mirror!Im a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.Sincerely yours,Li Hua2012新课标 (满分25分)同全国1 假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:I.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准.注意:1.词数100左右:2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, IJI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!Regards,Li Hua2012年全国2 (30分)假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括： 时间：周五晚8点至9点 地点：学生俱乐部 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 要求：备小礼物注意： 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；可以适当增加细节。Hi, Susan,Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday Wed like to invitee you to the partyWe want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about itWell gather at the Students Club at 8 p.mthis Friday, after the evening classesAnd its going to last about an hourWe each will prepare a little presentWhen he comes, well light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for himThen the cake will be cut and well sing songs and play gamesItll be nice to see how excited he will beIm sure youll have a good time at the party, too.Yours,Li Hua2013年新课标1假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Peter, How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that my uncle LiMing is going to your city for a conference, and Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese paintitng you have asked for before.Also, Id like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the US. Thank you in advance!His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and hi is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua2013新课标2假定你是李华， 自制了一些中国结（chinese knot）,给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点：1. 外观（尺寸，颜色，材料） 2. 象征意义 3. 价格注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter， How are you doing？2014大纲卷一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、家庭工作业余生活注意：1、次数100左右； 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好年“碧芝自制饰品店”在迪美购物中心开张，这里地理位置十分优越，交通四通八达，由于位于市中心，汇集了来自各地的游客和时尚人群，不用担心客流量的问题。迪美有多家商铺，不包括柜台，现在这个商铺的位置还是比较合适的，位于中心地带，左边出口的自动扶梯直接通向地面，从正对着的旋转式楼梯阶而上就是人民广场中央，周边、条地下通道都交汇于此，从自家店铺门口经过的的顾客会因为好奇而进去看一下。I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.4、宏观营销环境分析2014新课标II一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、1、 家庭2、 工作3、 业余生活注意：1、次数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好（二）DIY手工艺品的“热卖化” I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.手工艺品，它运用不同的材料，通过不同的方式，经过自己亲手动手制作。看着自己亲自完成的作品时，感觉很不同哦。不论是01年的丝带编织风铃，02年的管织幸运星，03年的十字绣，04年的星座手链，还是今年风靡一时的针织围巾等这些手工艺品都是陪伴女生长大的象征。为此，这些多样化的作品制作对我们这一创业项目的今后的操作具有很大的启发作用。sincerely,四、影响的宏观环境分析上海市劳动和社会保障局所辖的“促进就业基金”，还专门为大学生创业提供担保，贷款最高上限达到万元。 Li Yue二、大学生DIY手工艺制品消费分析2014新课标I假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）关于DIY手工艺制品的消费调查注意：1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3参考词汇：住宿-accommodation十字绣 编制类 银饰制品类 串珠首饰类要点：1.你计划去英国学习英语；2.看见了对方的广告，引起你的注意。想询问具体信息。3.该校培训班的开始日期，班级规模，周课时，费用以及食宿方式。4.期待对方的回信。Dear Sir/ Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad, and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. First when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply. 1、作者：蒋志华 市场调查与预测，中国统计出版社 2002年8月 11-2市场调查分析书面报告Yours faithfully,Li Hua精品文档