英语作文提分技巧省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

范文赏析范文赏析Today,moreandmorestudentsgotoschoolwithmobilephones.Studentsattitudestowardsthisvaryfrompersontoperson.Thosewhosupportthissayithelpsstudentstokeepintouchwiththeirparentsandfriends.Moreover,usingmobilephonescanbefun.However,otherstudentsholdtheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthatusingmobilephonescancauseproblems.Firstly,studentswithmobilephonesatschooldonotconcentrateonstudyingduringclass,butplaygamesorsendtextmessagesinstead.Besides,itcostsalottouseamobilephone.Asforme,thereisnodenyingthatusingmobilephoneshasitsadvantages,butIdstillpreferstudentstousethemathomebecausestudyshouldcomefirst.第1页书面表示系列讲练书面表示系列讲练 之之 赢取高分策略赢取高分策略第2页NMET书面表示评分标准书面表示评分标准1、先依据文章、先依据文章内容内容,语言和整体语言和整体感感觉初步觉初步确定档次确定档次。第五档第五档.2125分分第四档第四档.1620分分第三档第三档.1115分分第二档第二档.610分分第一档第一档.15分分0分分第3页语言地道，语言地道，规范规范覆盖全部内覆盖全部内容关键点容关键点2、主要内容：、主要内容：内容关键点；内容关键点；词汇和语法数量和准确性；词汇和语法数量和准确性；上下文连贯；上下文连贯；语言得体性语言得体性应用了较多应用了较多语法结构和语法结构和词汇词汇有效地使有效地使用了语句用了语句间连接成间连接成份份第4页3、拼写和标点拼写和标点是语言是语言准确性一个方面，评准确性一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际分时，应视其对交际影响程度给予考虑。影响程度给予考虑。第5页4、词数、词数少于少于80和和多于多于120，从总分中减去，从总分中减去2分。分。5、如、如书写较差书写较差，以至影，以至影响交际，将分数降低一响交际，将分数降低一个档次。个档次。第6页技技巧巧1.使用较高级词汇使用较高级词汇3.使用恰当连接词使用恰当连接词词汇反应你知识贮存量多词汇反应你知识贮存量多少，也是衡量英语水平一少，也是衡量英语水平一个主要标志。个主要标志。利用得当句子结构能够给利用得当句子结构能够给文章增色不少，从而使整文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章所以而生辉篇文章所以而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”文章很主文章很主要，能使文章上下衔接自要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。然、紧凑。增强书面表示效果技巧增强书面表示效果技巧2.使用较丰富句式使用较丰富句式第7页1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedntpayfortheirbooks.5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather,ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎样使用较高级词汇一、怎样使用较高级词汇Weallthink highly of him.A good idea occurred to me./A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.第8页二二丰富句式：丰富句式：(惯用到句型结构）惯用到句型结构）利用不一样句型来表示同一个意思，能增加文章文采。1.感叹句e.g.HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!2.强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.第9页3、倒装句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.There comesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.4、省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.5、with短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.第10页6、定语从句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Letscometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句e.g.ThatswhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.第11页8、各种状语从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily.第12页三三高考纲领中惯用高考纲领中惯用连接词连接词1.表示递进表示递进;另外，还有：whatismore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系表示转折关系不过，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.第13页3.表示因果关系表示因果关系因为，所以，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系表示条件关系假如，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless不然:orelse第14页5.表示时间关系表示时间关系当当时候时候:when;while在在之后之后:after在在之前之前:before直到直到:until一一就就:assoonas以后，以后，然后然后:later;afterwards很快很快:soon最近最近:lately;recently自从自从:since从那时起从那时起:fromthenon常见对称关系过渡词语常见对称关系过渡词语1.Foronething,foranotherthing,2.Ononehand,ontheotherhand,第15页6.表示特定次序关系表示特定次序关系首先，最主要:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最终:finally;intheend；lastbutnotleast7.换一个方法表述换一个方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;第16页8.进行举例说明进行举例说明比如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchas9.用于陈说事实用于陈说事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth第17页10.对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword；inconclusion;.Tosumup;inbrief11.其它惯用到表示其它惯用到表示1.intermsof就而言2.asfarasbeconcerned3.inmyopinion/view4.AsfarasIknow5.Asforsb,第18页假设你是星光中学李华，将参加主题为“LetsRideBicycles”英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包含：1汽车即使便利但带来空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2骑自行车益处，如节能环境保护、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活lowcarbonlife节能energysaving注意：1.词数：120词左右；2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“LetsRideBicycles”_第19页Dearclassmates,Imverygladtohavethischancetotalktoyou.ThetopicofmyspeechisLetsrideabicycle.Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeopleslivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.Howcanwesolvetheseproblemsthen?AsfarasImconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,bicyclesdontneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywontgiveoffwastegas.Whatsmore,ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisgoodforourhealth.Therefore,letstaketheresponsibilitytobuildupalow-carboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!Thankyouforlistening!第20页春季高考作文给澳大利亚朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生学习和生活带来改变。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.1717分分第21页高考满分作文Imverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesince our homework has reduced.Before that,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwas the only thing weshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobed until11:30.Nevertheless,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuch moreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesin my spare time.Intheevening,I alsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Ino longer stayuplate;on the contrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.In short,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.第22页书面表示惯用语句书面表示惯用语句1.1.书信书信 Thanksforyourlastletter.IamwritingjusttoinformyouInreplytoyourlastletter,Iamwritingtoexplainthetwoquestionsasfollows:开头Lookingforwardtoyourreply/hearingfromyou!Thanksforyourconsideration.Doremembermetoyourparents!结尾第23页2.叙事Itisquiteobvious/clearthat(很显然)Thereisnodoubtthat(毫无疑问)Takeasanexample.(以为例）Ononehand,ontheotherhand(一方面，其次)Onlyinthiswayshallwe(只有这样我们才能)Asfarasisconcerned,Iprefer(就而言，我更)Measures/Actionshouldbetakento(必须采取措施去)Forthereasonsgivenabove,Ifeelthat(鉴于以上原因，我以为Whatthesepeoplefailtoconsideristhat(这些人没有想到是.)Undoubtedlythereisalongwaytogobefore(毫无疑问要还有很长路要走）第24页Therefore,Istronglyrecommendthat(所以，我强烈提议Allthefactsshowthat（全部事实显示)Ilikenotonlybecausebutalsobecause(我喜欢不但因为而且因为)Iamwritingtoyoutoinquireabout(我写信给你想问询)Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith/at(我给你写信表示我对不满）Iapologizetoyoufor(我为向你道歉）Iamgratefultoyoufor(我为向你表示感激）Mr.Green,mybestfriend,isteachingMr.Green,afavoriteteacherfromtheUSA,isteaching第25页