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2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十一）
【专项突破】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Passage 1
Nowadays, many parents expect too many of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters should study hard in order to admitted into an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict in their children. However, they don’t realize how a great pressure they had put on their children. It is the great pressure that often get their children very anxiously.
So I hope that parents can provide a proper environment for our children. Only in this way they try their best and success at last.

Passage 2
Can you imagine wear a pretty sweater made of garbage? It could not happen! A few companies across the country are making clothes from things those are thrown away by people．For example, the company makes sweaters from old plastic bottles．First, the bottles are cut into small pieces．The pieces is melted．Then the melting plastic is made into long and thin threads．The threads are used to making sweaters which are very soft and light．
Believe it not, these sweaters sell well in spite of the fact that they are not expensive at all．Many people think that these recycled clothes can help us cut up on garbage．

Passage 3
A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. She said a research on neuroscience (神经学) shows students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”

Passage 4
I love camping. It is my favouritest way to spend the summer vacation. Last year, my families and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day. We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees, and I feel so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp. What I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.

Passage 5
Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.

Passage 6
Last Saturday, Mum gave me two tickets for a film． Although she was too busy to go with me, she told me to sell the extra ticket if possibly．At the gate of the cinema I met a handsome young man who was offered to have them, but he had only an l00-yuan note, He asked me to wait a while for him change it in the cinema's store．Without much thinking, I agreed．He walked so fast that I could hard keep up for him． Soon he disappeared, I stood there without knowing how to do．Suddenly I realized the handsome young fellow has cheated me．He had saved money, but lost his honor．
Passage 7
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay with.
Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own. Apart from the convenient public transportation, our private car will make your visits difficult. Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities, I’m sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them. Above all, they hosted the American student last year, through that they gained lots of experience. In addition, the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.
Hope you enjoy your stay here.
Yours,
Li Hua

2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十一）答案
Passage 1
1. too many 改too much
2. in order to admitted…. 在admitted前加be
3. …are strict in…. in改为with
4. how a great pressure…. how 改为what
5. …they had put…. had改为have
6. …that often get…. get改为gets
7. …very anxiously. anxiously改为anxious
8. …our sons 改 their sons
9. …they try they 前加 can 或 will
10….and success at last success改为succeed

Passage 2
1.wear改为wearing 2.去掉not 3.those改为that/which 4.the改为a
5.is melted改为are melted 6.melting改为melted 7.making改为made
8.Believe it or not 9.expensive改为cheap 10.up改为down

Passage 3
第一句：1. 划去been 2. on the mornings 将on改为in
第三句：3. It will become an only school…将an改为the
4. start 前加to
第四句：5. 将grade 改为grades
第五句：6.将She 改为 He 7. 将unless 改为 if
第六句：8. 将that 改为 where 9. 将good 改为 well
第七句：10. 将adds 改为 added

Passage 4
I love camping. It is my favoritest way to spend the summer vacation. Last year,
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my families and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the excited
family exciting
experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day. We
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cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw
wonderful
lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind
and
blowing in the trees, and I feel so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp. What I
felt much
believe it’s the best way to get close ∧nature and enjoy its beauty.
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Passage 5
1. does改为is 2. go改为went 3. was改为were 4. what改为which
5. cinema前加the 6. but改为and 7.去掉been 8. moving改为moved
9. tear改为tears 10. very改为well
Passage 6
1.Althou改为As/Because 2.possibly改为possible 3.was offered改为offered 4.them改4.them为it 5.an改为a 6.change改为to change 7.hard改为hardly
8.for改为with 9.how改为what 10.has改为had
Passage 7
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I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged∧ you to stay with． for

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personalities, I’m sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them．Above all, they

hosted the American student last year, through that they gained lots of experience．In addition,
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the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
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Hope you enjoy your stay here．
Yours,
Li Hua

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