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英文地质论文写作中常见问题英文地质论文写作中常见问题池国祥池国祥里贾纳大学地质系里贾纳大学地质系University of Regina第1页Importance of Publication-Scientific records-Communication with international community-Contribution to scientific advancement-Social-economic impacts-Career development写作过程也是科研一部分：激发思维，推写作过程也是科研一部分：激发思维，推敲研究结果意义。敲研究结果意义。审稿和修改过程对科研有促进作用。审稿和修改过程对科研有促进作用。第2页英文地质论文写作常见问题英文地质论文写作常见问题结构及格式问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题语法和用词问题其它问题其它问题投稿注意问题投稿注意问题第3页科技论文写作主要问题是论文结构及格式问题，科技论文写作主要问题是论文结构及格式问题，而不是英文问题。而不是英文问题。结构好而英文不好论文很轻易修改，而结构不结构好而英文不好论文很轻易修改，而结构不好论文则极难改。好论文则极难改。第4页Highlight 只说做了什么，没说发觉什么只说做了什么，没说发觉什么Detailed petrographic work carried outImportant constraint on U mineralization recognizedXenotime coeval with uraninite in Athabasca BasinOnset of U mineralization related to volcanism and brine formation第5页引言关键是引言关键是 What Why How不要把研究结果在序言里讲出来第6页没有分清目(purposes)和目标(objectives)This paper aims to carry out detailed field,petrographic,stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit.This paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processes of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit,through detailed field,petrographic,stable isotope and fluid inclusion studies.第7页空洞文件总结空洞文件总结Empty Review:The sedimentary and stratigraphy of the Viking Formation have been studied by Smith(1978)and Walker et al.(1990).Little work has been done on diagenesis,except a stable isotope study by Lee(1998).The petroleum system has been evaluated by Cook(1989),.Informative Review:The Viking Formation has been interpreted to have formed in a wave-dominated shoreface and transitional zones(Smith,1978;Walker et al.,1990).A diagenetic study of calcite cements by Lee(1998)yielded d18O of-18 to-15%o(PDB),which were interpreted to indicate第8页参考文件引用不恰当参考文件引用不恰当有些地域前人已做了大量工作。但这不意味这有些地域前人已做了大量工作。但这不意味这你要引用全部工作。引用什么和不引用什么要你要引用全部工作。引用什么和不引用什么要得当。得当。引用要放在恰当地方。引用某文（或图）等于引用要放在恰当地方。引用某文（或图）等于告诉读者告诉读者“请看请看”。要把要把 Credit 给该给人。给该给人。第9页Cite references in chronological orderThere are a number of previous studies in this field(Smith,1999;Andes et al.,;Sun et al.,1988).There are a number of previous studies in this field(Andes et al.,;Smith,1999;Sun et al.,1988).There are a number of previous studies in this field(Sun et al.,1988;Smith,1999;Andes et al.,).第10页For first author of the the same name,the order of listing references is single-author first,two-author second,and multi-author last(in chronological order)Li,S.,Li,S.,Anderson,K.and Wang,L.,.Li,S.and Baker,A.,.Li,S.,Wang,N.and Zhu,C.,1989,.Li,S.,Li,S.and Baker,A.,.Li,S.,Wang,N.and Zhu,C.,1989,.Li,S.,Anderson,K.and Wang,L.,.第11页区域地质背景没有依据本文内容进行取舍区域地质背景没有依据本文内容进行取舍区域地质背景介绍是很有考究。不能千篇一律区域地质背景介绍是很有考究。不能千篇一律地描述全部地质背景，要依据本文重点有所侧地描述全部地质背景，要依据本文重点有所侧重。重。第12页现象或数据描述与解释混杂在一起现象或数据描述与解释混杂在一起We have detected high concentrations of CO2 in the fluid,which is most likely derived from the mantle.However,some crustal CO2 has also been detected,as reflected by its carbon isotope composition.The ores are characterized by laminated structures,which are likely of syngenetic origin The syngenetic structures are commonly found in all the deposits in the study area,suggesting that these deposits are probably of SEDEX type.第13页缺乏详细地质描述缺乏详细地质描述第14页缺乏详细岩相学描述缺乏详细岩相学描述第15页把前人或自己已发表数据列在结果部分把前人或自己已发表数据列在结果部分Data sourcesLiang et al.Liang et al.Zhu et al.This studyThis studyThis studyThis study第16页展示数据图表出现在讨论部分展示数据图表出现在讨论部分第17页展示数据图表出现在讨论部分展示数据图表出现在讨论部分第18页5.Discussion5.1.Ages of mineralization5.2.Sources of ore-forming components5.3.Ore precipitation mechanisms5.4.Ore genesis矿床类型不等于矿床成因矿床类型不等于矿床成因:Ore genesis:Based on the geological and geochemical characteristics,this mineral deposit is considered to be a MVT deposit.把矿床成因和矿床类型混肴把矿床成因和矿床类型混肴第19页讨论部分没有与引言呼应，没有以事实为依据讨论部分没有与引言呼应，没有以事实为依据Introduction:This paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processes of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit,through detailed field,petrographic,stable isotope and fluid inclusions studies.Discussion:In this section we will focus on the origins of gold deposits in southwestern New Brunswick,especially on the role that crustal evolution may have played in mineralization.第20页讨论部分把在引言部分说过话又说一遍讨论部分把在引言部分说过话又说一遍Introduction:The origin of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit has not been well understood.Some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids,whereas others thought.Discussion:The origin of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit has not been well understood.Some researchers believe it formed from magmatic fluids,whereas others thought.第21页讨论部分与结果部分小标题重复讨论部分与结果部分小标题重复2.Results2.1 Oxygen isotopes2.2 Carbon isotopes2.3 Fluid inclusions3.Discussion3.1 Oxygen isotopes3.2 Carbon isotopes3.3 Fluid inclusions3.Discussion3.1 Sources of mineralizing fluids3.2 Ore precipitation mechanisms第22页图例说明没有直接标在图例旁边图例说明没有直接标在图例旁边第23页参考文件格式没按要求参考文件格式没按要求作者没列全错字太多名字缩写不统一期刊名称缩写或不缩写不统一卷号及页码格式不统一多出空格第24页英文地质论文写作常见问题英文地质论文写作常见问题结构及格式问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题语法和用词问题其它问题其它问题投稿注意问题投稿注意问题第25页“The”用与不用用与不用Jinding deposit is a large Zn-Pb deposit.There are many Sn deposits in the southern Hunan.The Jinding deposit is a large Zn-Pb deposit.There are many Sn deposits in southern Hunan.There are many Sn deposits in the southern Hunan area.第26页“the”,“a”及复数使用及复数使用-要依据上下文而定要依据上下文而定-“The”含有含有“那个那个”或或“那些那些”意思意思第27页没有必要副词没有必要副词VeryDefinitelyObviouslyExtremely Strongly第28页放在句子前面，可有可无副词放在句子前面，可有可无副词Basically,Actually,If fact,第29页不客观必定语气不客观必定语气The deposit must have been formed from fluid mixing.The deposit may have been formed from fluid mixing.The deposit was likely formed from fluid mixing.第30页不可数名词不能用复数不可数名词不能用复数This conclusion is supported by many evidences.This conclusion is supported by several lines of evidence.Researches,equipments,第31页Zircon and zirconsWater and watersWork and works有些词可当可数名词或不可数名词，但意思不一样有些词可当可数名词或不可数名词，但意思不一样第32页“-”与与“”区分区分Fault-controlledcm-sizedRegional-scaleIce-melting1020 cmquartzpyrite assemblageNESW trendingFigs.ac 第33页The Huanglong FormationThe Huanglong and Qiziqiao formationsFormation 还是 formation？The Huanglong formationThe Huanglong and Qiziqiao Formations第34页有些汉字专业词汇可译为多个含义不一样英文词汇有些汉字专业词汇可译为多个含义不一样英文词汇成矿：成矿：Metallogeny;Mineralization测试：测试：Test;Analysis指示：指示：Indicate;Suggest依据：依据：According to;Based on包含：包含：Contain;Include勘探：勘探：Prospecting;Exploration区：区：District;Area带：带：Belt;Zone矿体：矿体：Ore body;Orebody特征：特征：Features;Characteristics第35页不要用不一样名词描写同一个东西或地方不要用不一样名词描写同一个东西或地方The Shizishan orefield is located in the Lower Yangtze metallogenic belt.There are numerious Mesozoic granitic intrusions in the Shizishan district.Different types of mineralization occur in the Shizishan area.The Shizishan deposit is interpreted to have formed from.第36页“between and”和和“from to”区分区分25333644555677888990The Th values are between 25o and 90oC.The Th values range from 25o to 90oC.第37页空间副词和时间副词空间副词和时间副词Often,frequently,sometimes,occasionally 等表示时间概念词不能用来描述地质现象出现普遍性或偶然性。正确用词应该是 commonly,generally,locally,in places,等等。Gold often occurs in fractures in quartz,but sometimes it occurs as inclusions in pyrite.Gold commonly occurs in fractures in quartz,but locally it occurs as inclusions in pyrite.第38页防止过长或过短句子防止过长或过短句子过长句子轻易造成误解。过短句子给人感觉信息量太少，效率太低。长句短句相结合读起来比较舒适第39页防止主动句和被动句重复交叉使用防止主动句和被动句重复交叉使用A number of mineral deposits have been discovered in the study area.Many researchers have studied the mineralogy and geochemistry of the deposits.However,the origin of the deposits has not been well understood.A number of mineral deposits have been discovered in the study area.Many of them have been studied for mineralogy and geochemistry.However,their origin has not been well understood.第40页两个句子之间不能用逗号分开两个句子之间不能用逗号分开The Red Lake gold deposit is located in northwestern Ontario,it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage.The Red Lake gold deposit is located in northwestern Ontario;it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage.The Red Lake gold deposit is located in northwestern Ontario,and it is well known for its high grade and large tonnage.第41页美式英语与英式英语不可混用美式英语与英式英语不可混用Colour vs colorMetre vs meterCentre vs centerVapour vs vapor第42页英文地质论文写作常见问题英文地质论文写作常见问题结构及格式问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题语法和用词问题其它问题其它问题投稿注意问题投稿注意问题第43页不要用阿拉伯数字开始一个句子不要用阿拉伯数字开始一个句子145 fluid inclusions were measured for homogenization temperatures,of which 98 were also measured for ice-melting temperature.One hundred and forty-five(145)fluid inclusions were measured for homogenization temperatures,of which 98 were also measured for ice-melting temperature.第44页数据小数点用不对数据小数点用不对The homogenization temperatures of the fluid inclusions range from 100.2o to 190.8oC,and the salinities range from 27.88 to 35.69 wt.%NaCl equivalent.The homogenization temperatures of the fluid inclusions range from 100 to 191oC,and the salinities range from 27.9 to 35.7 wt.%NaCl equivalent.第45页不要用不要用 1010-6-6 做单位做单位The concentrations of Cu and Zn in the porphyry are 33.8 10-6 and 45.6 10-6,respectively.The concentrations of Cu and Zn in the porphyry are 33.8 ppm and 45.6 ppm,respectively.第46页英文地质论文写作常见问题英文地质论文写作常见问题结构及格式问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题语法和用词问题其它问题其它问题投稿注意问题投稿注意问题第47页Submission for Publication-Editor:Why should I publish your paper?-Always have the readers in mind.-Do your homework;do not leave things for reviewers and editor to clean up for you!第48页尽可能防止低级错误尽可能防止低级错误低级错误会被认为是个态度问题，轻易引发编辑及审稿人反感。投稿前用 Spelling Checker 过一道。空格不是可有可无，如“xxxx(xxx),xxx”不对，应为“xxxx(xxx),xxx”。不要太不把参考文件当回事。第49页回答审稿人问题回答审稿人问题Dear Editor,I have addressed most of the reviewers comments and revised the manuscript accordingly.For details of revision,please see the revised manuscript.Dear Editor,I have addressed all of the reviewers comments and revised the manuscript accordingly.Below is a list of my replies to each of the reviewers questions.假如不一样意审稿人观点，要说明为何。第50页文件格式文件格式全稿用12号（英文）字体。全稿用双行距。正文内不要插图，插表。图表说明列在参考文件之后。每张图或表都存成独立文件。不要把几张图放在同一个文件里。第51页图上文字不能太小图上文字不能太小以打印到纸上能看清为准，而不是在计算机屏幕上能看清为准。把图设计成最终打印大小，字体大小最少要在6号（英文）以上。第52页感激审稿人及编辑感激审稿人及编辑在致谢部分不要忘了感激审稿人和编辑贡献。详细怎么写要视他们实际贡献而定。第53页怎样提升英文地质论文写作水平？怎样提升英文地质论文写作水平？多读好文章花点时间领会他人写作技巧要细心，不要重复低级错误第54页总结总结英文地质论文写作最大问题是结构问题英文地质论文写作最大问题是结构问题What Why How 是引言根本是引言根本描述与解释混杂在一起是最致命问题描述与解释混杂在一起是最致命问题讨论与引言呼应是基本讨论与引言呼应是基本“套路套路”常见语法和用词问题必须认真对待常见语法和用词问题必须认真对待重视细节是对审稿人及读者尊重重视细节是对审稿人及读者尊重第55页