2023年四级作文复习教案.doc

模板一 不一样观点列举型议论文

开头句：
1 There is a widespread concern over the issue that ···
2 Recently a problem has been brought into focus.

过渡句：
1 Opinions vary from individuals to individuals.
2 Different people have different points of view.
3 There are different opinions among people as to```
4 The reasons are as follows
5 There are several factors contributing to this attitude as follows:
6 The following reasons can account for this issue/phenomenon.
7 Therefore, there is no doubt that```
8 First(ly), Second(ly), Finally (last but not least)
9 On the one hand, On the other hand
10 In the first place, In the second place
11 What’s more/ Besides/ In addition

总结句：
1 From my point of view, I prefer
2 As far as I am concerned, I　firmly　support　the　view　that
3 In a word/ In short/ In brief/ To conclude/ To sum up

Model (1)
Nowadays more and more people pay more attention to _____. Some people argue /consider/ believe/ that ____ while others firmly hold that _____.
In my opinion, I think this question should be probed in depth. On the one hand, the first group is not totally correct because ____. On the other hand, the second group seems ____ because ____.
In a word, we can see clearly that the key lies in ____. Otherwise _____.

Model (2)
It becomes a common tendency these days for people to ____. Many people are opposed to ____ because they think_____. They also argue that ____.
In my mind, however, I can’t agree with ____. At the same time, _____. In addition, ______.
In conclusion, ______.

Model (3)
____ has been one medium of communication that has connected all the people around world. More and more people tend to concern the ____, because it is so _____ that _____.
The advantages of ____ are obvious to some people. For one thing, in terms of ____, _____. As a result, _____. Consequently, _____. For another thing, _____.
Personally, I side with the former opinion. Because _____. However, _____.

Model (4)
Recently, one phenomenon calls for people’s attention that ____.
In general, ____ For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____.
As far as I am concerned, _____. To sum up, _____.

范文：
Whether to Hold the Spring Festival Gala Evening
Recently a problem whether it is necessary to hold the Spring Festival Gala Evening has been brought into focus. But opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person.
A majority of people believe that it should continue. First of all, that is because family members get reunited to watch it and strengthen the love among them. What’s more, it is a tradition party where we can seek kinds of Chinese tradition culture. But on the other hand, other people hold the opposite opinion that it should be dropped. In the first place, it lacks creativity and people are tired of it. And in the second place, more and more commercial programs have taken the place of high quality ones, which has made people lose interest.
As far as I’m concerned, I finally support the view that the Spring Festival Gala Evening will continue. It’s not only because it is a tradition, but also because it is acceptable as long as (it is) reformed and recreated.

练习题
1Should College Students Attend Physical Exercises
2 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?
3 Travel alone or travel with a companion
4 Does e-mail make people get closer or drift apart?

Should College Students Attend Physical Exercises
Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life. However, still some college students do not like to attend sports activities, they think those activities waste their time and influence their study. Indeed, it is very unwise for college students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise is not harmful but good to them.
　　College students can benefit a lot from physical exercise. First of all, attending physical sports can help students build a strong body, and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relief pressure and keeps a pleasant mood. Besides, by attending physical activities, students can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their social skills. Nowadays, all colleges and universities have provided many sports facilities for students to do physical exercises, students can chose freely according to their interests and needs.
　　As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained a lot, and enjoyed great pleasure. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every college students, and therefore do not hesitate to attend sports activities.

Will Phones Kill Letter Writing
Today, more than ever before, we depend on the expediency brought about by such modern devices as phones. As a result, when we feel the need to communicate with friends, instead of picking up the pen to set down to serious writing, we pick up the phone. Indeed, we speak so much and write so little that some people begin to suspect that phones will kill letter writing. However widely used it is today, the phone will not take the place of letter, for both phone and letter writing have respective functions to perform.
There are at least two reasons, as far as I am concerned, why this will not happen. For one thing, although phones admittedly have already taken over many roles traditionally played by the letter, there are certain areas such as commercial transactions and legal correspondence, in which black and white sincerity and confirmation is still a must. For another, in no way can a quick phone conversation convey and accomplish as much as a deliberate, well worded letter does. For instance, there seems to be no better device than letter writing to express deep, heart-felt, profound love, a fact underlined by the enormous love letters of great men and women.
As we know, in the 1960’s, there had been so much talk that TV would kill newspapers. And it has never happened. Today we are in a similar situation. We can be certain, for the reasons discussed above, that letter writing is irreplaceable.

Travel alone or travel with a companion
　　When it comes to a traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. Some people like to travel alone, while others prefer to travel with a companion. Of course every one has different considerations for his preference. Traveling alone one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of compromising with others Moreover, traveling alone tends to bring the traveler unexpected surprises, such as making a new friend and enjoying different scenery.
　　Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. For one thing the group members can help and look after each other on the journey. For another traveling with others who have the same interest as you, you can share experiences and pleasure with them.
　　As for me, I prefer to travel with a companion. Firstly, we can together deal with the possible problems and difficulties on the journey. Secondly, I like to share the experience of traveling with others.
In summary, both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their own attractions and you can enjoy the pleasure of traveling from either one.

Does e-mail make people get closer or drift apart?
　　Nowadays, more and more people are exchanging a great variety of imformation by using electronic mails instead of traditional ways of mailing letters. Some people think that e-mail makes relationships among people closer, while some others maintain that makes people drift apart（疏远）.
　　Those who hold the former opinion insist that the appearance of e-mail makes communication quicker and more convenient. By e-mail people can deliver more information including pictures and sounds. However, some others think e-mail with the same format and print font（打印字体）includes less emotion than traditional letters written by hand. Most people use e-mails to deliver information instead of feelings.
From my point of view, e-mail does bring great convenience for people, but it is not a better way to express our feelings than traditional letters. Our hand-writing on the paper can deliver much emotion. Therefore, when you want to express your love and care to someone, writing a letter to her or him by hand is a wise choice.

模板二 利弊型旳议论文

开头句：
1 Generally, it is believed that
2 It’s becoming more and more common that

过渡句：
1 Just as every coin has two sides, ______have both advantages and disadvantages.
2 Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception and in another word, it still has negative aspects.
3 Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.

总结句：
1 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that
2 In summary, it is wiser```
3 To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of ______ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the _______.

Model 1
It is a new thing that_____. Many people welcome this new development while others have expressed their concern about this.
Those who take sides against this new trend believe that _____ because_____.
One common argument, however, for ____ is that_____.
Of the two views discussed above, I am in favor of the _____. My reason is that____.

Model 2
As is known to all, there has been a wave of ____. There are many advantages / disadvantages of this modern way. First of all, _____. In the second place, _____. Lastly, _____.In a word, ____.

Model 3
When asked about ____, different people will offer different opinions. Some people take it for granted that _____. In their mind, ____. Besides, ______.
However, others hold that ____. They maintain that ____.
Weighting up these two arguments, I am for the first one. For one thing, ____. For another, _____. Therefore, as stated above, ____.

Model 4
____ is becoming more popular in ____, especially among ____. Today, it’s certainly difficult to think of ____.
There are several reasons for its popularity. First, ____. Second, ____.However, in terms of _____.

范文：
The Internet---A Double-edged Sword
Nowadays there is a widespread concern over the Internet. Just as every coin has two sides, the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages.
Generally, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows. First of all, the Internet provides us with kinds of information about life, studies, current affairs and so on. And secondly, we can send messages and make phone calls, communicating with friends and family online wherever they are. But on the other hand, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, the bad information on the harmful websites does great harm to children. And in addition, some students waste too much time playing computer games, which has a bad effect on their studies.
To conclude, we should try to bring the advantages of the Internet into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum by avoiding being addicted to it. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the modern invention.

练习作文
1 The advantage and disadvantage of the advertisement/mobile phone

The advantage and disadvantage of the advertisement
    Advertisement is omnipresent in our modern society. It seems wherever we go, such small ads will greet our eyes: the supermarket, the subways, the stop sighs, the walls of public buildings, the garbage cans, and whatsoever. The ads can be about everything from selling mobile phone, renting houses, treating difficult diseases to producing fake diplomats.
    (from domestic articles to machinery, from toys to aircrafts.)It’s no exaggeration that we live in the world of advertisement.
    The advantage of the ads is self-evident. They provide us with a good collection of goods and service, from which we can make our best choices. For the manufacturer, they can take advantage of the ads to project the characters of their products so as to seize the vision of the consumers and gain them huge profits.joozone
    However, we cannot belittle the disadvantages of the ads.
    To many ads do spoil our daily life and waste our time. They interrupt the TV programs, filling our letterbox, and ruin our appreciation of nature in place of interests. People often feel burdened with the ads instead of satisfying with them.
    On the other hand, some of the ads are illegal, spreading false information and planning to treat people who are eager to solve their problems.
    It’s high time we took urgent and effective measures to curb this phenomenon.
    Firstly, we should intensify the effects to supervise the ads markets. It’s crucial that we must regulate the ads market strictly to avoid someone’s availing himself or herself of the loophole of the market management.
    Secondly, whoever takes advantage of ads treating consumers should be punished or imprisoned.

    Thirdly, we should educate people to abide by the law and give priorities to honesty and credit. Only when putting these measures into practice, will our society be purified into a paradise for us to live in.

　模板三 答题性议论文/ 处理措施型
开头句：
1 Recently, we have to face the problem that_________
2 There is no doubt that a growing number of people have paid much attention to ________________.
3 Today, ___________, which has brought a lot of harm to our daily life.
4 Currently, there is a widespread concern over （the issue that）__作文题目_______. It is really an important concern to every one of us.

过渡句：
1 As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
2 As a result/ Therefore, we must take timely action to cope with the situation.
3 As for the problem, we must take effective measures to deal with it.
　　4. As we all know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.
5 First of all, ________.
In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ________.

结尾句：
1 As far as I’m concerned, I think it’s reasonable to _____________.
2 In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.

范文：
How to Reduce Waste on Campus
Recently, we have to face the problem that waste is becoming more and more serious on campus. It brings great harm to us and society. First, we have already wasted a lot of precious resources such as water and electricity. Second, our waste puts a burden on the environment and society.
To cope with the situation, we must take timely action. For one thing, we should turn off the light when we leave dorms or classroom. For another, we should not spend too much money on unnecessary things. Finally, we should stop wa