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DescriptiveEssaysDescriptionofaPerson1 DescriptiveWritingTheprimarypurposeofdescriptivewritingistodescribeaperson,placeorthinginsuchawaythatapictureisformedinthereadersmind.Capturinganeventthroughdescriptivewritinginvolvespayingcloseattentiontothedetailsbyusingallofyourfivesenses.2HowdoesaTeddybearlook?34Cuddly（想拥抱的）,soft,lovely,brown,furry,fuzzy（毛绒绒的）,adorable5CharacteristicsofDescription1.Gooddescriptivewritingincludesmanyvividsensorydetailsthatpaintapictureandappealstoallofthereaderssensesofsight,hearing,touch,smellandtastewhenappropriate.6(1).The roses fragrant perfume filled up the entire room,driftingintoourwelcomingnostrils.Iimagineitcanonlybemanufacturedinnaturesflawlessgarden.(2).Therosemusttastebetterthanthesweetestofnectars(花蜜).Atleastthebumblebees(大黄蜂)thinkso.72.Gooddescriptivewritingoftenmakesuseoffigurativelanguagesuchasanalogies,similesandmetaphorstohelppaintthepictureinthereadersmind.8Simileandmetaphor(1)Herheartislikeafire,blazingwithpassion.(2)Hishairisasmessyasabirdsnest.(3)Thechildisasnaughtyasacuriousmonkey.(4)Hervoiceisasymphony.(5)Thefatherisastubbornbear.9APoemMy Luve Is Like A Red,Red Roseby Robert BurnsO,my luves like a red,red rose,哦我心爱的人就像一朵红玫瑰，一朵红玫瑰Thats newly sprung in June.它在春天的六月初绽O,my luves like the melodie,哦我心爱的人就像那段旋律Thats sweetly playd in tune.它是如此甜蜜As fair art thou,my bonie lass,我的淑女，我美丽的人儿So deep in luve am I,我如此地迷恋你And I will luve thee still,my dear,我会永远爱你，亲爱的Till a the seas gang dry.我爱你直到大海干涸10Till a the seas gang dry,my dear,我爱你直到大海干涸，我亲爱的And the rocks melt wi the sun!我爱你直到太阳融化岩石And I will luve thee still,my dear,我将永远爱你，我亲爱的While the sands o life shall run.我的爱与我的生命同行And fare thee weel,my only luve!再见，我唯一的爱And fare thee weel,a while!再见，无论多久And I will come again,my luve,我会再次回到你身边，我的爱Tho it were ten thousand mile!哪怕我们分别天涯113.Gooddescriptivewritingusespreciselanguage.Generaladjectives,nouns,andpassiveverbsdonothaveaplaceingooddescriptivewriting.Usespecificadjectivesandnounsandstrongactionverbstogivelifetothepictureyouarepaintinginthereadersmind.12Examples:Abstract:Itwasaniceday.Concrete:Thesunwasshiningandaslightbreezeblewacrossmyface.Abstract:Thetrafficwasheavy.Concrete:Ouroldcarpuffed（冒烟）asMainStreetbecameclogged（堵塞的）withalineofclamoring（喧闹的）motorists.Abstract:Mr.Smithwasagreatteacher.Concrete:Mr.Smithreallyknewhowtohelpusturnourthoughtsintogoodstoriesandessays.134.Gooddescriptivewritingisorganized.Somewaystoorganizedescriptivewritinginclude:chronological(time),spatial(location),andorderofimportance.Whendescribingaperson,youmightbeginwithaphysicaldescription,followedbyhowthatpersonthinks,feelsandacts.14DescriptionofapersonThinkingifthedescriptionissuccessfulintellingthereaderswhatapersonlookslike.Tobespecific,thedescriptionshouldanswersomeofthefollowingquestion.1)Whatclothesisthepersonwearing?2)Howoldisheorshe?3)Howtallistheperson?4)Whatishisorherfigurelike,bigorsmall,slimorstocky?5)Whatishisorhercomplexion?6)Whatarehisorherfacialfeatures,e.g.featuresofhair,eyes,nose,lips,teeth?7)Whatmakesthispersondifferentfromothers?8)Doesthispersonhaveanyfeaturesthatstandout,suchasascaronthenose?15Height(1)Heisverytall.(2)Heisquiteshort.(3)Heisrelativelynormalheight.16BuildSheisskinny.(negative)Sheisanorexic.(medical)Sheisunderweight.(negative)Sheisthin.(negative)Sheisslim.(positive)Sheisslender.(positive)17Sheisfatnegative)Sheistubby.(negative)Sheisoverweight.(negative)Sheisplump.(neutral)Sheisstocky.(neutral)Sheisbonny.(positive)18ComplexionCharacteristicsDarkLightFairOlivePaleTanPimply（疙瘩）Freckles（斑点）SpotsPimples（粉刺）19Whats the difference?2021CharacterandPersonalityambitious,confident,dependent,passionatevigorous,aggressive,sensitive,patient,prudent,cautious,polite,rude,reckless,optimistic,humorous,sociable,easygoing,diffident,broad-minded,narrow-minded,proud,arrogant,conceited,hesitant,sentimental,pessimistic,insensitive,rigid,insolent,considerate,queer,self-important,self-centered,vain22My Boyfriend by Sang Hee ParkLetmedescribemybestfriend.HisnameisJohn.Imethim7yearsagoforthefirsttime.Ifoundoutabouthimfromaflyerpostedinthestreet.Areyouanxiousabouthim?Firstofall,helookslikewhitecake.Hishairiswhitelikefreshcream.Hiseyesareliketwoblackpearls.Hisnoseisalwaysmoistenedlikedewyflowers.Hisearsareasbigastherestofhisface.Wheneverheruns,hishairisglossyandhisearsflutter.Ialwaysembracehim.Atthattime,Ihaveasensationofgoingbehindtheclouds.Inaddition,hissmellissweetlikecandy,exceptwhenhedoesnttakeabathforalongtime.However,Ialwayslikehimanyway.23EachtimeIsay,Letseat,herunsalongpanting.Asaresult,hestrainshisears,andhelollsouthistongue.Maybe,theglitterofhiseyesisthemostpurethingintheworld.However,ifhemakesamistake,herunsunderthesofaandstaysasstiffasice.Then,hehangshishead.Inaddition,hestepsoutfromunderthesofawhilehiseyesswimwithtears.Also,heliesdowntoshowhisbelly.Imustforgivehismistake.Maybeyoucanguess.Heismydog!Heislivinginmyhometown.Asaresult,Imisshimnow.Heteachesmeabouthowtoloveanimals.Inaddition,hemakesfriendswithmewhenIamlonely.Ilovehimsomuch.Asaresult,Iwanttolivewithhimforever.24PhysicalAppearanceDescriptionMr.Bingleywasgoodlookingandgentlemanlike;hehadapleasantcountenance（面容）,andeasyunaffected（自然的，不矫揉造作的）manners.Hissisterswerefinewomen,withanairofdecided（果断的）fashion.Hisbrother-in-law,Mr.Hurst,merelylookedthegentleman;buthisfriendMr.Darcysoondrewtheattentionoftheroombyhisfine,tallperson,handsomefeatures,noblemien（风采）;andthereportwhichwasingeneralcirculationwithinfiveminutesafterhisentrance,ofhishavingtenthousandayear.252627Hischaracterwasdecided.Hewastheproudest,mostdisagreeable（厌恶的，难相处的）manintheworld,andeverybodyhopedthathewouldnevercomethereagain.28SpeechDescription“Whatishisname?”“Bingley.”“Ishemarriedorsingle?”“Oh!Single,mydear,tobesure!Asinglemanoflargefortune;fourorfivethousandayear.Whatafinethingforourgirls!”“Howso?Howcanitaffectthem?”“MydearMr.Bennet,”repliedhiswife,“howcanyoubesotiresome!”youmustknowthatIamthinkingofhismarryingoneofthem.”“Isthathisdesigninsettlinghere?”“Design!Nonsense,howcanyoutalkso!Butitisverylikelythathemayfallinlovewithoneofthem,andthereforeyoumustvisithimassoonashecomes.”2930“Oh!MydearMr.Bennet,”asheenteredtheroom,“wehavehadamostdelightfulevening,amostexcellentball.Iwishyouhasbeenthere.Janewassoadmired,nothingcouldbelikeit.Everybodysaidhowwellshelooked;andMr.Bingleythoughtherquitebeautiful,anddancedwithhertwice.Onlythinkofthatmydear;heactuallydancedwithtwice;andshewastheonlycreatureintheroomthatheaskedasecondtimeIwassovexed（焦急的）toseehimstandupwithher.Iamquitedelightedwithhim.Heissoexcessivelyhandsome!31ActionDescriptionMr.Bingleyhassoonmadehimselfacquaintedwithalltheprincipalpeopleintheroom;hewaslivelyandunreserved,dancedeverydance,wasangrythattheballclosedsoearly,andtalkedofgivingonehimselfatNetherfield.Suchamiable（和蔼可亲的）qualitiesmustspeakofthemselves.Whatacontrastbetweenhimandhisfriend!Mr.DarcydancedonlyoncewithMrs.HurstandoncewithMissBingley,declinedbeingintroducedtoanyotherlady,andspenttherestoftheeveninginwalkingabouttheroom,speakingoccasionallytooneofhisownparty.3233MentalDescriptionThemannerinwhichtheyspokeoftheMerytonassemblywassufficientlycharacteristic.Bingleyhasnevermetwithpleasantpeopleorprettiergirls;everybodyhadbeenmostkindandattentivetohim,therehadbeennoformality,nostiffness,hehadsoonfeltacquaintedwithalltheroom;andastoMissBennet,hecouldnotconceiveanangelmorebeautiful.Darcy,onthecontrary,hasseenacollectionofpeopleinwhomtherewaslittlebeautyandnofashion,fornoneofwhomhehadfeltthesmallestinterest,andfromnonereceivedeitherattentionorpleasure.MissBennetheacknowledgedtobepretty,butshesmiledtoomuch343536ScenedescriptionItwasbeautifulspringweather,butneitherdogsnorhumanswereawareofit.Eachdaythesunroseearlierandsetlater.Itwasdawnbythreeinthemorning,andtwilightlingeredtillnineatnight.Thewholelongdaywasablazeofsunshine.Theghostly（幽灵的，可怕的）wintersilencehadgivenwaytothegreatspringmurmurofawakeninglife.Thismurmurarosefromalltheland,fraught（充满的）withthejoyofliving.Itcamefromthethingthatlivedandmovedagain,thingswhichhadbeenasdeadandwhichhadnotmovedduringthelongmonthsoffrost.Thesap（树液）wasrisinginthepines.Thewillowsandaspens（山杨树）wereburstingoutinyoungbuds.Shrubsandvineswereputtingonfreshgarbs（服装，打扮ofgreen.(takenfromThe Call of the Wild)3738MovieWritingPleasewatchthemovieIfYouaretheOne,andthenwriteadescriptiveessayaboutthemaincharacters.39Marriage SeekingAprettyyoungladywassittingtherequietly.Withthesunshiningcharminghair,asenseofdesolation(忧伤)flashedthroughthebeautifulfacebelow.Awakingfromtheimaginationafewsecondslater,QinFenwenttowardsherandsaidhellotoher.Atthismoment,Qingotachancetoobserveheratsuchaclosedistance.Shewaswell-shapedindeed.Thewhiteshirtwithwell-designedV-neckband（衣领）showedherattractivechestandherlongandstraightlegsunderablackminiskirtaddedamaturesenseoffemininitytoher.Howcanthisprettycharmingladybeleft?AquestionoccurredtoQinsmind.40True LoveQinFendidntloveher,eventhoughshewasbeautiful.Shehadanarrestingface,pointed（尖角的）chin（下巴）,square（颚）jaw.Hereyeswerepaleblackwithoutatouchofhazel（淡褐色）,starred（点缀）withbristly，（短而硬的）blacklashes（睫毛）andslightlytilted（翘起）attheends.Abovethem,herthickblackbrows（眉毛）slanted（倾斜）upward,cuttingastartlingoblique（倾斜的）lineinherwhiteskin.41ABlindDateShockedbythefirstsightoftheairhostess,QinFenadmiredthebeauty:shewasdressedinawhiteshort-sleevedshirtwithV-collar,ablackknee-lengthskirt,andapairofsimplehigh-heeledsandals.Especiallyherslenderlegs,henoticed,weremuchmoreattractive.Shewassittingonsofaelegantly,withherlegscrossed.Whenshespoke,thewordsfromhersexyplumplipsweremelancholy(忧郁的).Andhereyesconveyedthatshewasinadeeptrance（恍惚，发呆）.42Oneday,hewrotedownhismarriagepersonal:“Lookingforhotguys?Dontbother.Nogold-diggerseither.To avoid mutualdisappointed.PhDs need no reply,womenentrepreneurs need no reply(except tradeswomen andpeddlers).PerfectmenlikeAndyLauandTomCruisewontbeseekingyouhere.NordoIexpecttofindJuliaRoberts.Evenifyouwereagoddess,Icouldnthandleyou.Iamnotexpectingacover-girltoblowmeawaywithyourbeauty.Justasane,healthywoman,modernoutside,andtraditionalinside.Slightlydemure(怕羞的,忸怩的)wouldbeideal.Dontbetooyoung.Dontbetoocomplicated”43Wearing a pair of sunglasses and white shirt,a manwriggled（扭动）hishipandwalkedslowlytowardshim.Witharuddy（红润的）face,helookedmuchlikeawoman,especiallyhisdressingstyle.Therewasastrangesight（眼神）inhissunken（凹陷的）eyestowardsQinFen.44Farfromhissightwasagirlwhohadslenderlegsandgood-lookingface.Walkingnearby,QinFentookalookatherfromhead-to-feet:longcurledblackhairbeautifullytwisted（扭曲）,baby-likeskinandasexymouth.Fromheruniqueclothesand temperament（气质）,we all knew she was an airhostess.45