英语作文利弊选择型省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

观点论证型观点论证型第1页 观点论证型模板（一）观点论证型模板（一）观点论证型模板（一）观点论证型模板（一）观点论证型模板（一）观点论证型模板（一）(1)论点论点.(2)For论点包括对象论点包括对象，/For anyone/At any time,whether 论点包括对象所属范围一论点包括对象所属范围一or论点论点包括对象所属范围二包括对象所属范围二，正确性表现一正确性表现一.(3)No doubt,正确性表现正确性表现二二.(4)Many remarkable reasons contribute to thisargument./There are many facts which can support this argument.(5)Above all/First of all,论据一论据一.(6)深入说明论深入说明论据一据一.(7)Whats more,/moreover,论据二论据二.(8)For example,支持论据二事例支持论据二事例.(9)In addition/Besides/Moreover,论据三论据三.(10)(ALL mentioned above tell us that(ALL mentioned above tell us that/Judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw the conclusion that重申观点重申观点.(11)But(what is worth noting is)需要注意问题需要注意问题./违反该观点可能影响违反该观点可能影响.(12)To conclude/Therefore,指出正确做指出正确做法或态度法或态度。第2页 Work Is a Necessity1)在当代社会，工作对于一个人来说意义在当代社会，工作对于一个人来说意义 重大重大2)论证工作必要性论证工作必要性第3页Work Is a NecessityPara 1:(1)Work is becoming more and more indispensable to mans existence.(2)For modern people,whether men or women,work is more than a means of making a living,but is a necessity.(3)No doubt,without work,one will feel senseless.(提出观点段）提出观点段）第4页Para 2（4)Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument.(5)First of all,for most people,work is a source of happiness and satisfaction.(6)They apply their talents and knowledge to their work,in which they realize their personal values.(7)Whats more,many facts prove that the more one uses his brain,the more active and efficient he is in thinking.(8)For example,scientists always have sharper minds than ordinary people.(9)Besides,work also offers ambitious people chances to realize their dreams.(观点论证段）观点论证段）第5页Para 3:(10)All mentioned above tell us that work is of great importance in modern society.(11)Those without work for a long time will find life boring and miss many wonderful things from work.(12)Therefore,there is no denying that everyone should work to realize his personal value.(总结观点段）总结观点段）第6页（原因）列举：1）first,second,third,last but not least2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly4）to begin with,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）5）to start with,next,in addition,finally（强烈推荐）6）first and foremost,besides,last but not least（强烈推荐）7）most important of all,moreover,finally第7页 PracticeThe Ability to Make a Public Speech Is Important1)演讲能力十分主要演讲能力十分主要2)试论证该观点试论证该观点第8页（1）The ability to make a public speech is of great importance.(2)For anyone,whether ordinary people or statesmen,the ability to make a public speech directly decides whether they could attract the listeners attention.(3)No doubt,it also reveals the speakers charming personality and can help the speaker establish a good image第9页(4)Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument.(5)Above all,the good ability to make a public speech can precisely convey the speakers thoughts.(6)Therefore,he can successfully make himself understood.(7)Whats more,a persuasive public speech can help the speaker win support from the audience.第10页 (8)For example,every four years in America,president candidates compete to win votes by making speeches around the country.(9)In addition,an inspiring public speech can lighten the audiences mood.第11页(10)All mentioned above tell us that an excellent public speech has tremendous power.(11)The lack of this ability may result in ineffective communication.(12)Therefore,there is no denying that the ability to make a public speech should be fostered and attached great importance to.第12页观点论证型模板（二）观点论证型模板（二）(1)It is well-known/generally accepted/acknowledged/believed/held that论点论点.(2)正确性表现之一正确性表现之一,(3)Besides/In addition,正确性表现二正确性表现二.(4)There are numerous examples supporting this argument./Many remarkable examples contribute to this argument.(5)A case in point is例证一例证一.(6)This is close to suggest例证一道理例证一道理.(7)For another example,例证二例证二.(8)深入说明例证二深入说明例证二.(9)Moreover,例证三例证三/其它其它 论据论据.(10)Judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw the conclusion that重申观点重申观点.(11)But(what is worth noting is)需要注意问题需要注意问题./违反该观点可能影响违反该观点可能影响.(12)To conclude/Therefore,指出正确做法或态度指出正确做法或态度。第13页Practice Makes Perfect 1)怎样了解“熟能生巧”2)比如：在英语学习中 3)又如第14页Practice Makes Perfect (1)It is well-known/generally accepted that“Practice makes perfect”.(2)It tells us that if we practice unfamiliar things again and again,well be able to perform it perfectly.(3)The truth of it is deep and profound.第15页 (4)There are numerous examples supporting this argument./Many remarkable examples contribute to this argument.(5)A case in point is in order to learn English well,we need extra practice,such as reading English books,listening to English broadcast,or communicating with foreigners.(6)This is close to suggest people can grasp English only if they follow the saying“Practice makes perfect.”第16页(7)For another example,if we want to be skilled at using computers,we also need to practice more often.(8)In that case,you can acquire more knowledge about computer and then you may become a computer expert yourself.(9)Moreover,in other areas of our life,practice is also necessary,and we can hardly do things well without practice and preparation.第17页 (10)Judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw the conclusion that continuous practice and efforts will lead to final success.(11)But what is worth noting is that if there is mo right theoretical direction,practice might go towards a wrong direction.(12)To conclude,both practice and theory are very vital to achieve our goals.第18页Where There Is a Will,There Is a Way 1)怎样了解“有志者事竟成”2）试举例说明第19页 (1)The proverb“Where there is a will,there is a way”has been generally accepted.(2)It tells us that as long as a person possesses a strong will he will certainly accomplish a task no matter how difficult it is.(3)The truth of it is deep and profound.第20页 (4)There are numerous examples supporting this argument.(5)A case in point is that Karl Marx,who spent five years on his greatest work Das Kapital,won the respect of people all over the world.(6)This is close to suggest that a strong will is a vital factor to ones final success.(7)For another example,Cao Xueqin was confronted with great hardship in his pursuit for literature,but he finally completed his world-famous book Dreams of Red Chamber.(8)If he had given up on the half way,we would have no opportunity to appreciate such excellence.(9)Moreover,among college students,those who persist in studying hard and make it eventually are also good examples.第21页 (10)Judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw the conclusion that if we wish to succeed,we must firstly have a resolution and remember the saying“Where there is a willthere is a way”.(11)But what is worth noting is that a strong will should be accompanied by a right direction leading to the success.(12)To conclude,whatever you do,please remember“Where there is a will,there is a way”.第22页观点论证型模板（三）观点论证型模板（三）(1)Nowadays still many people believe/For years many people have such thought that/Nowadays there still exists/there are still many people who与论点冲突背景观点或现象.(2)深入说明背景观点或现象.(3)However,论点.(4)The following reasons can support the argument.(5)Undoubtedly,论据一.(6)深入说明论据一.(7)Furthermore/Moreover,论据二.(8)For example,支持论据二事例,/深入说明论据二.(9)In addition/Whats more,论据三.(10)All mentioned above tell us that重申观点.(11)深入阐述论点.(12)Therefore,we should正确态度或做法。第23页It Pays to Be Honest 1)当前社会上存在许多不老实现象 2)老实利人利己，做人应该老实第24页 Nowadays there still exists many dishonest phenomena,such as cheating,overcharging,producing or selling fake commodities,etc.(2)The main reason for these dishonesties is only to make a huge profit.(3)However,in the long run,dishonesty can not bring any profit and it pays to be honest.(4)The following reasons can support the argument（提出观点段）第25页 (5)Undoubtedly,being honest is not only beneficial to others but also to ourselves.(6)If you are honest,those who associate with you will certainly profit from you and in turn you will win trust and respect from them.(7)Furthermore,honesty can build up a more stable and harmonious society.(8)For example,Singapore,which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity,has a comparatively low criminal rate.(9)In addition,being honest is essential for a countrys survival in the modern world,since only an honest country would have won support from other countries if it w e r e i n t r o u b l e.（观 点 论 证 段）第26页 (10)All mentioned above tell us that it pays to be honest.(11)Only in an honest society can people enjoy their life really.(12)Therefore,we should foster the spirit of honesty and let dishonesty have no place to stay in our society(总结观点段）第27页 Practice Wealth and Happiness 1）每个人都想取得财富，财富似乎就是幸福，其实不然 2）世界上有许多东西是财富换不来。试论证说明该观点第28页 (1)Nowadays still many people believe that wealth equals happiness.(2)They deeply believe that they will surely lead a happy life with a great amount of money.(3)However,wealth is not necessarily associated with happiness.(4)The following reasons can support the argument.第29页 (5)Undoubtedly,good health is more important than wealth to a happy life.(6)For example,if someone is diagnosed with an incurable disease,he can only buy pills and medical treatment to extend his life no matter how much money he has,but cannot regain the health.(7)Furthermore,there is a kind of happiness that is indispensable and priceless,but it can not be bought by money.(8)For example,love,no matter in what kinds of forms,can only be won by your genuine emotion.(9)In addition,too much wealth,if not properly used,may encourage its weak-willed owner to be addicted to some harmful habits and bring about his ruin.第30页(10)All mentioned above tell us that wealth does not equal happiness.(11)We cant only count on wealth to obtain happiness.(12)Therefore,we should take a proper attitude towards wealth and make best use of wealth to pursue happiness.第31页句子翻译练习（观点论证型文章惯用句式造句）（）我认为玩电脑游戏不但浪费时间，而且危害身体健康 As far as I am concerned,playing computer games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.（）就我个人经验来看，大多数企业倾向于雇佣高学历人 According to my personal experience,most companies are inclined to employ the people with high diploma.（3）我深信预防比治疗更主要。I am greatly convinced/assured/I firmly believe that prevention is better than cure.（）在众多观点之中，我偏向于知识比文凭更主要观点 Among various kinds of viewpoints,I prefer the one that knowledge is more important than diploma.（）依我来看，这种观点站不住脚 In my opinion/To my mind,this point of view doesnt hold water.第32页（）对于这些不诚信行为，有很多原因能够解释 There are many reasons explaining these dishonest behaviors.（）主要原因是很多人在追求他们本身利益过程中忽略了传统道德标准 The main/chief reason is that countless people neglect the traditional moral principles in pursuit of their own interests.（）更主要是我们缺乏有效法律和监管制度，所以很多不诚信人能够逃脱处罚 Whats more,we lack effective laws and regulations of supervision so that a great many dishonest people can escape punishment.（）所以不诚信问题变非常严重 As a result,the problem of dishonesty becomes very serious.（）不诚信行为有以下几个原因 The reasons of dishonest behaviors lie in several aspects./Many factors contribute to 第33页观点论证型惯用句型（1）Its fairly well known thatplays an important role in/Its fairly well known thatis of great/vital importance to 众所周知，起着主要作用。(2)There are many reasons explaining 解释有很多原因。(3)Many reasons can be figured out to prove 证实有许多原因。(4)I feel that it would be beneficial if 我以为假如将会很有好处。(5)There is no denying that无庸置疑。(6)We have good reason to believe that 我们有（充分/正当）理由相信。(7)The above analysis naturally leads us to the following possible conclusion that上面分析很自然地使我们得出结论第34页(8)Considering the possible reasons,it is rational for us to conclude鉴于以上可能原因，我们能够得出结论。(9)Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/be aware that现在越来越多人开始意识到/接收。(10)Obviously,If we want to do sth,it is essential that显然，假如我们想做，是很必要。(11)There is no evidence to suggest that没有证据表明。第35页(12)Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that可能到了重新认识态度/看法时候了。(13)It may be true that,but it doesnt mean that可能.是正确，但者并不意味着(14)It is natural to believe that,but we shouldnt ignore that认为是很自然，但我们不应忽略。(15)It is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of该是采纳提议，并对进展给予特殊重视时候了。第36页利弊选择型要求：对一个论题正反两个方面加以阐述分析，深入做出选择，推导出自己认为合理处理该问题模式第37页 写作步骤Para 1：简述事件Para 2：阐述提要中列举第一个看法，给出理由或者举例说明 主题句理由/举例1理由/举例2理由/举例3 Para 3：阐述提要中列举另一个看法，给出理由或者举例说明 主题句理由/举例1理由/举例2理由/举例3 Para 4：表明自己观点，结束全文。第38页模版一提出观点段 (1).When it comes to 谈论主题,there is no complete agreement among people./When asked谈论主题,different people will give different answers/offer different views/have different choices/preferences.(2)Some people take it for granted/believe/claim/choose 一个观点/选择/倾向.(3)However,others maintain/argue/prefer/would rather 另一个观点/选择/倾向.第39页对比论证段（4）Those people who hold the first opinion/make the former choice/have the first preference believe 观点/选择/倾向一理由一.(5)(In addition,)in their eyes/they insist/they maintain/they point out观点/选择/倾向一理由二.(6)However,still others think differently/do not agree this/have different choices/preferences.(7)In their opinions观点/选择/倾向二理由一.(8)Besides,they argue观点/选择/倾向二理由二.第40页总结观点段(9)Weighing up these two arguments/choices/preferences或其它详细选择/倾向,I prefer/am inclined to/would rather choose the former/latter one 或两种详细选择之一.(10)(For one thing,)理由一(11)For another/Furthermore/Moreover/whats more,理由二/深入说明理由一.(12)Considering these/Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration,we/I may reasonably conclude/I suggest/I think 重申观点./In a word,提出提议。第41页12月作文:Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不一样 3我认为 第42页 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?(1)When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists,there is no complete agreement among people.(2)Some people take it for granted that university campus should embrace tourists across the country.(3)However,others maintain that the university campus should be closed to tourists.（提出观点段）第43页(4)Those people who hold the first opinion believe that refusing tourists is contradicting universities proclaimed spirit of openness.(5)In addition,they insist that no university has the right to reject taxpayers to enter its grounds because it is public land.(6)However,still others think differently.(7)In their opinions,too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university.(8)Besides,they argue that these tourists will destroy the quiet environment and influence students normal study.（对比论证段）第44页(9)Weighing up these two arguments,I prefer the former opinion.(10)For one thing,it can enable high school students to get more information about the university and have better preparation for their choosing to get into the university.(11)For another,a university should be an open place and impart the spirit of openness to its students.(12)Considering these,I may reasonably conclude that the university campus should welcome all tourists.(总结观点段)第45页Letters or Discussions?1)有些学生认为讲授式教学模式更适合自己2）另一些学生则更喜欢讨论式教学方式3）我看法第46页（1）When i