高考基础英语写作公开省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

Grammar Filling(语法填空语法填空)Close Test（完型填空）（完型填空）Writing（写作）（写作）Reading&comprehending（阅读了解）（阅读了解）高考题型：高考题型：第1页 平远中学平远中学 谢舒娜谢舒娜第2页以高考作文为例以高考作文为例,谈谈怎样经过使用正谈谈怎样经过使用正确、规范语言提升基础写作。确、规范语言提升基础写作。第3页内 容：公共场所禁烟实施时间：1月1日起实施范围：全国目 标：全部室内公共场所无烟办法：张贴禁烟标志相关数据：（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿（2）分布：男性75；女性：25（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超出10万/年以下是一以下是一则则关于中国政府决定关于中国政府决定禁烟禁烟报报道主要内道主要内容。容。高考基础写作第4页基础写作推荐步骤：基础写作推荐步骤：1 1、认真审题、认真审题 2 2、归纳、整合信息点、归纳、整合信息点 3 3、确定短语和句型、确定短语和句型4 4、连词成句、连词成句5 5、组句成篇、组句成篇6 6、检验修改、检验修改 第5页时态：时态：文体：文体：应用文（通讯稿）应用文（通讯稿）现在完成时（现在完成时（Present perfect）普通现在时普通现在时（Simple present）普通未来时普通未来时（Simple future）第6页1.中国大约有3.5亿人吸烟,其中男性75%,女性25%.2.受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿，而且每年有超出10万人因二手烟死亡。第7页3.中国政府决定从.1.1.起全国范围内禁止在公共场所吸烟。4.到时，政府会张贴一些禁烟标志。5.大家一起行动，我们才能使全部室内公共场所无烟。第8页1、3.5亿：2、受到影响：3、二手烟：4、全国：5、禁止做某事：6、室内公共场所：7、张贴：8、无烟：affected by350 millionsecond-hand smokeall over the countryforbid doing sth.indoor public places put up free of smoke第9页使用正确、规范句子，使用正确、规范句子，确保句子成份完整。确保句子成份完整。第10页1.公共场所禁烟。公共场所禁烟。Forbid smoking in pulic places.The government will forbid smoking in public places.主语主语谓语谓语宾语宾语(No subjuct)第11页.全部室内公共场所无烟全部室内公共场所无烟.All the indoor public places no smoke.(no predicate)There will be no smoke in all the indoor public places.第12页3.中国政府决定禁烟中国政府决定禁烟The Chinese government decides forbid smoking.(double predicates)The Chinese government decides to forbid smoking.第13页4.每年受二手烟影响人数约每年受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿亿.Every year because second-hand smoke affect people number abuot 540 million.(Chinese English)About 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke.第14页小结：小结：正确、规范句子意味着它要有主正确、规范句子意味着它要有主语和谓语（必要时还要有宾语语和谓语（必要时还要有宾语)。A correct sentence is a beautiful language.第15页二、尝试灵活多变句式，防止通篇单一句式二、尝试灵活多变句式，防止通篇单一句式第16页方法一：使用非谓语动词，使句子简练时尚。方法一：使用非谓语动词，使句子简练时尚。每年受二手烟影响人数约每年受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿亿.About 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke.（ordinary sentence）The number of people is about 540 million.affected by second-handsmoke第17页方法二：使用复合句（尤其是定语从句），使方法二：使用复合句（尤其是定语从句），使句子信息容量大句子信息容量大,紧凑连贯。紧凑连贯。中国大约有中国大约有3.5亿人吸烟亿人吸烟,其中男性其中男性75%,女性女性25%.There are 350 million smokers in China.75%of them are men,and 25%of them are women.There are 350 million smokers in China,_ _ 75%are men,and 25%are women.of whom第18页方法三方法三.巧用倒装结构增强句子表现力巧用倒装结构增强句子表现力 make all the indoor public places free of smoke.we can make all the indoor public places free of smoke if everyone takes part in it.Only if can weeveryone takes part in it第19页2.受二手烟影响人数高达5.4亿，而且每年有超出10万人因二手烟死亡。The number of people affected by second-hand smoke is about 540 million and more than 100 thousands of them die each year.3.中国政府决定从.1.1.起全国范围内禁止在公共场所吸烟。The Chinese government has decided to forbid smoking in public places all over the country from January 1st,.4.政府会张贴一些禁烟标志。Signs will be put up to forbid smoking.第20页_,there are about 350 million smokers in China,of whom 75%are men and 25%are women./The number of people affected by second-hand smoke is about 540 million _ more than 100 million of them die each year./_,the Chinese government has decided to forbid smoking in public places all over the country from Jan1st,./_,signs will be put up to forbid smoking._everyone takes part in it,can we make all the indoor public places free of smoke.As it is reportedFace with such a situation,ThereforeBy then Only ifandby then only if therefore As its reported because and第21页 检验全文是否用五个句子表示，文章检验全文是否用五个句子表示，文章当中单词拼写是否正确、时态利用是否当中单词拼写是否正确、时态利用是否恰当，短语搭配是否规范，前后人称是恰当，短语搭配是否规范，前后人称是否一致等，尽可能防止低级错误。否一致等，尽可能防止低级错误。第22页Now please try using your correct language to write your beautiful compositon.第23页A possible version:According to a report by the Chinas government,there are about 350 million smokers in China,of whom 75%are men and 25%women./People affected by second-hand smoke add up to about 540 million and more than 100 million of them die each year./Faced with such a challenging situation/therefore,the Chinese government decides to forbid smoking in public places all over the country from January 1st,./By then,signs will be put up to forbid smoking.Only if everyone takes part in it,can we make all the indoor public places free of smoke.第24页 射击最初只是生存工具，射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。成为一项体育运动。Shooting was originated as a means of survival.It developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.Shooting,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.in the late 19th century _ _ develop into a sport from a means of survival.which was originated as a means ofsurvivalOnlydid shooting第25页1896射击第一次成为奥运项目射击第一次成为奥运项目;1904、1928曾经中止（曾经中止（suspend）;The sport,was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.which first appeared in 1896,第26页Write a competition using the six steps第27页 广东高考基础写作广东高考基础写作 你很荣幸地成为北京奥运会一名志愿者，负责编你很荣幸地成为北京奥运会一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目标英语介绍。写奥运比赛项目标英语介绍。写作内容写作内容请依据以下汉字提要，编写射击项目标英语介绍：请依据以下汉字提要，编写射击项目标英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目：第一次成为奥运项目;1904：中止：中止;1928：中止：中止;1932：重回奥运会；：重回奥运会；1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛；：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛；现实状况：稳步发展，现实状况：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有目，现今有17项。项。第28页第29页