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书面表示考纲要求：书面表示考纲要求：依据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右短文。情景包含目、对象、时间、地点、方位、关系、内容、数据等；提供情景形式如图画、图表、提要、信函等。1.依据特定语境准确使用英语语法，选取适当词汇。2.使用一定句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表示自己意思。使用一定句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表示自己意思。新改变：新改变：去年考纲新增去年考纲新增1、依据汉语提醒、依据汉语提醒2、依据对所给漫画了解、依据对所给漫画了解今今年年考试说明对看图作文“图”做出愈加明确界定和要求。“图”不局限于某一类型图，如漫画、广告。也可包含其它图画、照片、图表等情景材料。考生可依据情景图示寓意内容或情节线索，自己组织文字、进行描述、叙述、比较或表示思想观点。作文应覆盖提醒关键点，但应防止仅依据提醒文字做简单翻译。第1页题材：题材：包含社会热点及与中学生学习和生活亲密相关话题，范围广泛。包含社会热点及与中学生学习和生活亲密相关话题，范围广泛。形式：形式：半开放式半开放式主要文体：主要文体：议论文，应用文，记叙文，说明文议论文，应用文，记叙文，说明文结论：结论：今今年年高高考考书书面面表表示示对对学学生生写写作作水水平平提提出出了了更更高高要要求求。试试题题依依然然包包括括要要考考生生发发表表自自己己观观点点和和提提议议，并并愈愈加加重重视视考考查查学学生生语语言言组组织织能能力力、逻逻辑辑思思维维能能力力和和实实际际应应用用英英语语进进行行交交际际能能力力。我我们们不不能能只只满满足足于于关关键键点点全全方方面面、语语法法正正确确，还还要要重重视视文文章章合合理理结结构构、逻辑性、上下文连贯、亮点词句合理使用逻辑性、上下文连贯、亮点词句合理使用。第2页解题技巧：解题技巧：1.审审题题（要要求求、内内容容、确确定定关关键键点点、文文体体、时时态、态、立意等）立意等）2.提要（提要（beginning;body;ending）（topic sentence of each part,if any）（concluding sentence of each part,if any）3.初稿初稿（各部分详细内容）（各部分详细内容）（覆覆盖盖关关键键点点，围围绕绕主主题题，注注意意衔衔接接过过渡，渡，恰当使用亮点词句）恰当使用亮点词句）4.复查复查（语法错误、标点、逻辑、字数等）（语法错误、标点、逻辑、字数等）（大局）（大局）5.誊录（字迹工整，卷面清洁）誊录（字迹工整，卷面清洁）第3页剖析剖析近近3年江苏省高考书面表示题年江苏省高考书面表示题第4页（0808）实现有效沟通，建立良好人际关系，不但要善于言表、）实现有效沟通，建立良好人际关系，不但要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你依据下表中所提供信息，写一篇题为更要学会倾听。请你依据下表中所提供信息，写一篇题为“BeingaGoodListener”英文演讲稿。英文演讲稿。注意：注意：1 1.1 1.对所给关键点，逐一陈说，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给关键点，逐一陈说，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2 2.2 2.词数词数150150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3.3.演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。为何倾听为何倾听表示尊重，促进了解，建立良好人际关系表示尊重，促进了解，建立良好人际关系谁来倾听谁来倾听家长倾听孩子家长倾听孩子了解孩子，消除代沟，了解孩子，消除代沟，老师倾听学生老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，了解学生，满足需求，同学相互倾听同学相互倾听促进情谊，互帮互学，促进情谊，互帮互学，怎样倾听怎样倾听（请考生联络自己确定内容，列举两至三点。）（请考生联络自己确定内容，列举两至三点。）第5页Good afternoon,everyone!The topic of my speech today is“Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect,promote understanding,and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children,so they will understand them better,and find it easy to narrow the generation gap;teachers should listen more to their students,then they can meet their needs better,and place themselves in a good relationship with their students;students should listen more to their classmates,thus they will help and learn from each other,and a friendship is likely to be formed.为何倾听为何倾听谁来倾听谁来倾听第6页 What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others.*Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk;*show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile;*be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them.In a word,good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!(151 words)怎样倾听怎样倾听第7页(09)(09)鼠标是计算机时代最正确人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便鼠标是计算机时代最正确人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们计算机操作。不过，过分依赖鼠标习惯也会带来一些不利了人们计算机操作。不过，过分依赖鼠标习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，依据下表所提醒信息，用英语写一影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，依据下表所提醒信息，用英语写一篇短文。篇短文。要求：要求：1 1对所给关键点逐一陈说，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给关键点逐一陈说，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2 2词数词数150150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。3作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。鼠标必要性鼠标必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪 鼠标便捷性鼠标便捷性 点点击击、移移动动、插插入入、拷拷贝贝、删删除除编辑文本，搜索信息编辑文本，搜索信息收发邮件，选购商品收发邮件，选购商品点播音乐，下载电影点播音乐，下载电影 假如过分依赖鼠标假如过分依赖鼠标 (请考生结合本身感受，列举两到三点请考生结合本身感受，列举两到三点)第8页 The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer For most people,its almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse,let alone surf the Internet.A well-chosen mouse is really handy,flexible and convenient in controlling the screen.With the functions of inserting,deleting,With the functions of inserting,deleting,moving and copying,it enables us to edit text,moving and copying,it enables us to edit text,browse web page and download what we want.It browse web page and download what we want.It can even bring us a flood of music,movies and PC can even bring us a flood of music,movies and PC games.games.Just imagine,all this can be done with a cute mouse.鼠标必要性鼠标必要性鼠标便捷性鼠标便捷性第9页 A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier,but it doesnt always help in a positive way.*Too much ready information on our*Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing.fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing.*Too many ready answers make us less excited in*Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth.finding truth.Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.(153 words)第10页(10)假设你应邀参加学校组织假设你应邀参加学校组织“英语学习师生座谈会英语学习师生座谈会”，请你依，请你依据下表所提醒信息，用英语写一篇讲话稿，简单介绍自己英语据下表所提醒信息，用英语写一篇讲话稿，简单介绍自己英语学习情况，并对学校今后英语教学提出提议。学习情况，并对学校今后英语教学提出提议。注意：注意：1.1.对所给关键点逐一陈说，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给关键点逐一陈说，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.2.词数词数150150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。3.3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。w_w w.k#s5_u.c o*m自自己己英英语语学习情况学习情况1.1.英语学习目标英语学习目标2.2.英语学习方法英语学习方法3.3.课外自学路径课外自学路径对对学学校校英英语语教教学学提提议议（请考生依据自己经历与感想，提出两至三点提议）。（请考生依据自己经历与感想，提出两至三点提议）。第11页 Dear teachers and schoolmates,its a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.Im interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally its very important for me to learn English well.As everyone knows,vocabulary is an important part of language,just like bricks in a building.I usually memorize 20 new words a day and put them into use whenever possible.After class,I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio.Besides,Ive learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.目方法方法课外自学路径课外自学路径第12页 Now Id like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.*Firstly,we should be given more*Firstly,we should be given more opportunities to use what we have learned in order opportunities to use what we have learned in order to have a better grasp of it.*Secondly,I hope our to have a better grasp of it.*Secondly,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read and magazines and give us more free time to read them.*Finally,I suggest we have more English them.*Finally,I suggest we have more English activities,such as English contests and festivals.activities,such as English contests and festivals.Thank you for listening!对学校英语教学提议对学校英语教学提议第13页书面表示：本学期为了改进校风，我校颁布了十条禁令。其中一条“禁止男女生不文明交往”其实就是禁止男女生谈恋爱，引发了同学们热议。有支持，有反对。请你写篇短文，叙述正反双方观点，并发表自己看法。要要求求：适适当当添添加加内内容容使使双双方方观观点点更更连连贯贯并含有说服力并含有说服力。注意：注意：1.词数：150左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。2.可能用到词汇：谈恋爱have love affairs;搂抱hug;vt.人性化human adj.赞成人认为：赞成人认为：反对人认为：1 1冲击学业冲击学业1 1处处于于青青春春期期(in(in adolescence)adolescence)同同学学喜喜欢欢异异性性(the(the opposite sex)opposite sex)很正常很正常2 2败坏学校风气败坏学校风气(ethos)(ethos)2 2处理得当能够促进学业处理得当能够促进学业你自己观点：（最少两点）你自己观点：（最少两点）第14页 To improve school ethos,this term our school has issued 10 rules and regulations for us students to obey,one of which bans uncivilized communication between boys and girls.That is to say,our school bans love affairs between boys and girls.This rule and regulation,since it was made public,has caused heated debate among us students.Some students are in favor of it.They think that love affairs between boys and girls will have a bad impact on the school achievements of both students because they wont concentrate on their studies.Whats worse,such students usually go beyond the limit and hug or kiss each other in public,which will negatively influence the school ethos.第15页 However,some students think differently.They argue that its natural for students in adolescence to like the opposite sex,so its not human for the school to do so.They also believe that love affairs,if treated properly,will be an encouragement to the school performance of both students.As far as Im concerned,*school is a place to*school is a place to learn knowledge,not to have love affairs.*Besides,learn knowledge,not to have love affairs.*Besides,love affairs and school performance,which are love affairs and school performance,which are generally contradictory,cant develop side by side.generally contradictory,cant develop side by side.If you want good school achievements,youd better not have love affairs.So I support it.(156 words)第16页当当前前，我我校校几几乎乎全全部部英英语语老老师师都都尤尤其其强强调调背背词词汇汇，这这遭遭到到了了部部分分同同学学埋埋怨怨。他他们们认认为为这这么么做做对对于于提提升升英英语语成成绩绩无无助助，因因为为词词汇汇并并非非高高考考英英语语试试卷卷测测试试项项目目；而而且且费费时时多多，占占用用了了学学习习其其它它科目标时间。科目标时间。假假设设你你是是高高二二（5）班班李李华华，你你不不一一样样意意上上述述观观点点，认认为为背背词词汇汇是是学学好好英英语语必必要要前前提提。请请你你用用英英语语写写一一篇篇题题为为“MyattitudetovocabularymemorizinginEnglishlearning”演演讲讲稿稿，赞赞成成这这一一做法并给出理由。做法并给出理由。要要求求：演演讲讲稿稿应应注注意意写写法法并并包包含含以以上上全全部部信信息息，有有适适当当发发挥挥。字数字数150左右。左右。参考词汇：参考词汇：强调强调emphasizevt.emphasisn.埋怨埋怨plaintn.高考英语试卷高考英语试卷NMETpaper项目项目item前提前提precondition第17页Good afternoon,everyone.Im Li Hua from Class 5,Senior Grade 2.The topic of my speech today is“my attitude to vocabulary memorizing in English learning”.Now nearly every English teacher in our school lays special emphasis on vocabulary memorizing in English learning,which leads to much complaint of some students.They think it does no good to improving English grades because vocabulary is not a test item in the NMET paper.Besides,it costs a lot of time,which can be spent learning other subjects.But I dont agree with them.第18页 In my opinion,vocabulary memorizing is well worth the time it costs.Its the foundation of learning English well.The The English English listening,listening,speaking,speaking,reading reading and and writing writing are are all all based based on on vocabulary.vocabulary.As As a a saying saying goes,goes,you you cant cant build build a a house house well well without without foundation.foundation.In In the the same same way,way,you you cant cant learn learn English English well well without without vocabulary.vocabulary.Building up your vocabulary is the necessary precondition of learning English well.So Im firmly in favor of vocabulary memorizing in English learning.Thats all for my speech.Thank you!(158words)第19页限时限时25分钟分钟训练训练第20页25分钟限时训练分钟限时训练1:为了帮助后进生取得进步，最近你们在部分尖子生和为了帮助后进生取得进步，最近你们在部分尖子生和后进生之间作了个调查，有了出乎意料发觉。后进生之间作了个调查，有了出乎意料发觉。请你请你简单描述调查结果，依据这一发觉分析后进生学简单描述调查结果，依据这一发觉分析后进生学习不佳习不佳课内外原因课内外原因并提出处理问题方法并提出处理问题方法。字数在字数在150左右。文章开头已经给出，不计字数。左右。文章开头已经给出，不计字数。尖子生尖子生后后进进生生学学习时间习时间9小小时时10小小时时睡眠睡眠时间时间75小小时时6小小时时Recently weve conducted a survey between some top students and some who are poor in academic performance.第21页 Recently weve conducted a survey between some top students and some who are poor in academic performance.An unexpected finding is worth paying attention to:compared to the top students,those poor in academic performance spend relatively more time learning and less time sleeping.Then why do they lag behind in their studies?The reason probably lies in the following two aspects.Firstly,for lack of sleep at night,they feel sleepy in class and cant master what theyve learned.Then,they must spend longer time finishing homework,which 出乎意料发觉出乎意料发觉简单描述调查结果简单描述调查结果分析后进生学习不佳课内外原因分析后进生学习不佳课内外原因第22页in turn leads to their staying up too late and being less energetic in class the next day.So in my opinion,to improve their academic performance,they must ensure enough sleep at night and enough energy in class.As a saying goes,“10 minutes in class is worth an hour out”.In this way they can not only have lessons attentively,but also save time for their homework and revision.In a word,the key to solving their problem is to improve learning efficiency.(157 words)提出处理问题方法提出处理问题方法第23页25分钟限时训练分钟限时训练2:高考即未降临高考即未降临,假如你们班今天下午开了个班会假如你们班今天下午开了个班会,大家在大家在会上畅谈理想会上畅谈理想,未来考什么大学、干什么工作。你有所感触未来考什么大学、干什么工作。你有所感触,晚上写下了这篇日志晚上写下了这篇日志.要求要求:1.例举例举2类同学理想类同学理想2.谈谈你自己理想并给出理由谈谈你自己理想并给出理由(最少最少2条条)3.为了实现理想你今后打算为了实现理想你今后打算字数字数150左右左右,开头已给出，不计入字数开头已给出，不计入字数.Thursday,April 24 fine With the NMET drawing near,we had a class meeting this afternoon,talking about our dream universities and what we want to be in the future.第24页 Some students hope to enter business colleges and become managers;some go to normal universities to be teachers.But my dream is a medical college.I want to be an outstanding doctor who is able to relieve pains and save lives of my patients.The reasons are very simple.At the age of 12,my dear grandma who brought me up died of cancer.Towards the end of her life,when I saw she was in great pain while the doctors and we could do nothing,my heart broke.At that time how I wished I had been an extraordinary doctor that could cure her!Now第25页Ive grown up and I know there are lots of medical problems left unsolved besides cancer.So Im determined to be one of those who will make great contributions to the development of medical science.However,Im fully aware that now my dream is only a dream.I have a long way to go to realize it.Therefore,what Im to do in the following days is to get down to my revision.I firmly believe that so long as I try my best,my dream will come true!第26页25分钟限时训练分钟限时训练3:当前，人们普遍认为现在孩子行为习惯没有他们小时候好。当前，人们普遍认为现在孩子行为习惯没有他们小时候好。请请依据下表提供信息写篇短文，简明介绍这种现象及出现这一现依据下表提供信息写篇短文，简明介绍这种现象及出现这一现象原因，并针对这种现象提一些提议。象原因，并针对这种现象提一些提议。Nowadays,a large number of children have had bad manners while their parents behaved well when they were at the same age第27页 When their parents were young,they behaved well,having good manners,respecting others and obeying rules of all kinds.On the contrary,children now are not ready to help others.Actually,they dont show respect to others and express themselves and behave freely.The reasons are related to many factors,one of which is the ill information on the Internet and TV because it has a bad influence on children.Worse still,parents and teachers pay too much attention to their scores,ignoring the fact that childrens behaviors should be 第28页their greatest concern.Considering the seriousness of this problem,effective measures should be taken.In my opinion,parents and teachers are supposed to set an example of good behaviors to children as they are role models to them.Meanwhile,the information on the Internet or TV should be under strict control.Only in these ways can we help children develop good behaviors.第29页25分钟限时训练分钟限时训练4:依据下列图，结合实际，依据下列图，结合实际，以以“Howcomesfrogsareinwells?”为题写一篇英语为题写一篇英语短文，分析短文，分析“井蛙井蛙”成因并成因并发表你看法。发表你看法。注意：注意：1.仔细品味画面内容，仔细品味画面内容，要适当发挥想象，要适当发挥想象，不要做简单叙述。不要做简单叙述。2.词数词数150词左右，开头已词左右，开头已 写好，不计入总词数。写好，不计入总词数。4.提醒词汇：提醒词汇：sprayinsecticide喷洒杀虫剂喷洒杀虫剂 “Frogsinwells”isawellknownChineseidiom,referringtothosewhoarenarrow-mindedorshort-sighted.第30页审题：该作文由三幅图画组成，第一幅图阐述审题：该作文由三幅图画组成，第一幅图阐述是工业污水被排入河中，河水受到污染，造成是工业污水被排入河中，河水受到污染，造成青蛙失去水域这块家园；第二幅图叙述是农民青蛙失去水域这块家园；第二幅图叙述是农民喷洒农药，田野受到污染，青蛙又失去了岸上喷洒农药，田野受到污染，青蛙又失去了岸上家园；第三幅图画说是人们捕杀青蛙，青蛙肉家园；第三幅图画说是人们捕杀青蛙，青蛙肉成为人们餐桌上美食。所以青蛙没有一处洁净成为人们餐桌上美食。所以青蛙没有一处洁净或安全地方可呆，只能选择水井这块相对较安或安全地方可呆，只能选择水井这块相对较安全地方。归纳起来，就是工农业污染加人为猎全地方。归纳起来，就是工农业污染加人为猎杀给青蛙造成生存威胁，由此发挥想象：杀给青蛙造成生存威胁，由此发挥想象：第31页“Frogs in wells is a well-known Chinese idiom，referring to those who are narrow-minded or short-sighted.However，it seems that the idiom has created a deep meaning in this modern society.Above are some pictures which describe vividly a common phenomenon in our country.With the development of science and technology，factories have produced many good products,but they cause much damage to nature.Meanwhile，farmers should become killers by sprayin