2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习7.doc

2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习（7）及答案

【河北省石家庄市2013二模】
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分}
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Yue and Zhang Hua -went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day.
At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers
and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor.
Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for
the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very
happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience.
They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.

【参考答案】改错（10×1=10）：
Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to ∧ nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day.
a
At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. And they presented the elderly people with flowers
On/Upon warmly
and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor.
sweeping
Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for
sat
the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very
volunteers
happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience.
brought their
They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
that

短文改错 (2010·内江、广安模拟)
Last Saturday we had a party at home. Dad's friends come1.________
along with their families. Since Mom was not at home, Dad2.________
and I had to prepare everything, so it turned out such a miracle3.________
that they did make it! Everything went perfectly fine.4.________
A lot of kids who came that day. I had the most wonderful time5.________
with Steven. It was just amazed to find someone so much6.________
like me. We had a lot of things by common. The time seemed7.________
short to me, and I wished we could have had some more time8.________
to continue the conversation. Hopeful we're going on9.________
a trip together next summer, and also summer after next.10.________
答案与解析：
1．come→came　整篇文章为一般过去时，应把come改为came。
2．√
3．so→but　前后语境为转折关系，应把so改为but。
4．they→we　根据上文可知作者使用了第一人称，此处指作者和父亲俩人，因此应把they改为we。
5．去掉who　本句为简单句，去掉who。
6．amazed→amazing　主语为it，应用amazing作表语，表示“令人惊异的”。
7．by→in　固定短语have...in common表示“有……相同之处”。
8．去掉had　wish后的宾语从句用虚拟语气，谓语应用情态动词＋动词原形，因此把had去掉。
9．Hopeful→Hopefully　副词hopefully放在句首，表示“希望”副词作状语修饰整个句子。
10．在also后加the　next summer指明年夏天，the summer after next指后年夏天。

短文改错(2010·郑州质检)
We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.__
study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________
and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________
take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________
There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________
such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________
However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________
every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________
and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________
that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________
答案与解析：
1．healthy→health　这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。
2．by→on/upon　depend on/upon是固定搭配。
3．help→helps　这句话的主语是动名词短语doing sports and games。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。
4．but→and　feel tired和get sick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。
5．去掉them　这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。
6．swim→swimming　应用动名词与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。
7．去掉in　every day可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。
8．giving→given　这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。
9．take前加to　此处考查的是have time to do sth.的结构。
10．√

【海南省海南中学2013高考英语】
短文改错（共10小题； 每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is more reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer customers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at their own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.

【参考答案】短文改错：
Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people
increasingly
liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is more reliable
like But less
than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer customers to false
merchants
information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by
are
means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers
delivered what
expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at their own expense. Thirdly, the

items might be damaged during delivery. In∧word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.

短文改错 (2010·河南五校联考)
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the job­hunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案与解析：
1．去掉the　finish school是固定搭配，表示“毕业”。
2．month→months　month是可数名词，several暗示应用复数形式。
3．interested后加in　be interested in是固定搭配，表示“对……感兴趣”。
4．him→himself　calling himself Mr. Smith短语作定语，修饰a man表示“自称Mr. Smith”的男子。
5．do→did　根据逻辑可知这里表示毕业前的情况，故用一般过去时。do well in“干得好”。
6．√
7．beaten→beating　a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8．will→would　这里应考虑主从句时态的呼应，故用过去将来时。
9．surprised→surprise　to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人惊讶的是”。
10．said后加was　what he said是主语从句，“他的话是令人失望的”。句子缺少系动词。

1.（2011·陕西卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.
making actors
I didn’t have my camera
With me at that time, but I rushed back home to get ∧. Unfortunately,
So/and it
by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn’t
had
be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when
anywhere disappointed
he walked out ∧ a building. He was right there in front of me! I
of
couldn’t believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken wuth him, but
have
he signed his name on my shirt!
2.（2011·全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81．________
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82.________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．________
was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______
Yours,
Mike

【参考答案】
76.after---since 77.them---us 78.for---with
79.正确 80.去掉much 81.staying---stay
82.day----days 83.fly---flew 84.trip前a 85.better----more

（2011·四川卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改
Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66.
Morning and was always late with work.. His boss wanted to 67.
fire him if he didn’t start coming on time,but he went to 68.
the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69.
medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70.
The man did is told and slept.leally will,wake up before 71.
the alam had even gone off.He had time for a properly 72.
breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.”Boss,”he 73.
said ,”that medicine really works!””I’m pleasing to hear 74.
it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?”

【答案】
66、改troubles为trouble 67、改with 为for 68、改but 为so
69、去a 70、改them 为it 71、改wake为waking
72、改properly为proper 73、reach前加to 74、改pleasing为pleased
75、√