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新编实用英语写作新编实用英语写作主编主编 蒋蒋 磊磊 蔡季愚蔡季愚北京出版社北京出版社第1页ContentsBasic Skills of Eassay WritingTypes of Essay WritingEssay Writing inExamination FormCommon Models of Short Essay Writing Practical Writing General Paperwork WritingWriting on Diagrams or PicturesUsing proper WordsMaking correct and Effective SentencesParagraph Structure and QualityParagraph Types and DevelopmentUnit 1Unit 2Unit 3Unit 4Unit 5Unit 6Unit 7Unit 8Unit 10Unit 11Unit 12Comparision between English&Chinese WritingUnit 9第2页III.Whats Good Writing?II.Why do we write?I.What is writing?An IntroductionAn Introduction第3页I.What is writing?I.What is writing?Writingistheprocessofrecordingcharactersonamedium,withtheintentionofformingwordsandotherlargerlanguageconstructs.Mostoftime,writingaimstoproduceworksthataretargetofreading.Writing is often used to describe the craft ofcreatingalargerworkofliterature.Writinginthissensecanrefertotheproductionoffiction,non-fiction,poetryandletter.第4页Writing,broadly speaking,can be divided into two parts:1.Creative writing2.School Composition WritingWebeginwithfourbasicclaimsaboutwriting:pWritingmeansconstruction.pWritinginvolvesaconstantprocessofreconstruction.pWritingisawayofthinking.pWritingisdifferentfromtalking.I.What is writing?I.What is writing?第5页Research ProblemResearchQuestionsPractical ProblemResearchAnswerWRITINGmotivatesdefinesfindshelps to solveII.Why do we write?II.Why do we write?第6页 For examplePractical ProblemResearch QuestionResearch ProblemApplication to Practical ProblemResearch AnswerMy clock doesnt work well.How can I get it fixed right away?I need to find a nearby in the Yellow Pages.The Clock Shop,1401 East 55th StreetCall to see when they can fix it.第7页 III.Whats Good Writing?III.Whats Good Writing?Charles C.Colton The writer does the most,who gives the reader the most information,and take from him the least time.William ShakespeareBrevity is the soul of wit.K I S SEEPTHORT&IMPLE第8页because of the fact that at this point in timein a curious manner situated in the vicinity of in the near future in many instances has the ability to singmake contact by personal visit was of the opinion that because nowcuriouslynearsoonoftencan singvisitbelievedAvoid padded expressions第9页Avoid Chinglish Glaring error;Clumsy interlingual transfer;Dangling participle;Sentence patterns and expressions;Vaguedistinction of synonyms;Poor vocabulary;Wrong collocations.第10页I couldnt understand what the teacher is saying.I couldnt understand what the teacher was saying.I have becomed a university student.I have become a university student.Not all the things seem to be pleasing.Not all the things seem to be pleased.She is very fat,and in class she often sit on the table.She is very stout,and in class she often sits on the desk.Glaring error第11页Clumsy interlingual transfer I havent received your letter for a long time.How are your conditions?Is your work busy?Please reply me early.Here life is very nervous because we have to do many things.The teachers give us too many exercises,so we cant read when class is over.We have no method.The teachers can change the situation.How are you getting on recently?Are you busy with your work?Hope to hear from you soon.Weve been hard pressed for time.Our teachers are always assigning us so much homework that we can hardly have any time for our outside reading.We have no way out.Perhaps the teachers would do something about it 第12页After defeating the“gang of four”,Mr.Smith,a British reporter,came to Shanghai for a three-week visit.After graduating from the school,her trouble began.Dangling participle?Dangling participles“lack clear syntactic connection to another element in the sentence in which it occurs.”(Websters New World Dictionary,p.356)After the“gang of four”was defeated,Mr.Smith,a British reporter,came to Shanghai for a three-week visit.Dangling participleAfter she graduated from the school,her trouble began.第13页Sentence patterns and expressions“不知不觉不知不觉”We didnt know evening has fallen.At daybreak we didnt know we had come back to the village at the foot of the mountain.在上面两句中，在上面两句中，didnt know是汉语是汉语“不知（不觉）不知（不觉）”翻版，而其实翻版，而其实际含义是际含义是：（我们）不知道。：（我们）不知道。didnt know不含不含“不知不觉不知不觉”（即起（即起先不知，以后才觉察）意思。依据英语思维，先不知，以后才觉察）意思。依据英语思维，“不知不觉不知不觉”有其特定有其特定句型：句型：before sb.realizes;find oneself+adj.(present participle phr./prepositional phr.)Evening came before we realized it.At daybreak we found ourselves back in the village at the foot of the mountain.第14页Vague distinction of synonyms“我家有一条狗。我家有一条狗。”My home has a dog.我家我家=My home;有有=has;一条狗一条狗=a dog.HOME=家？家？(family members/the place where a person,or a family lives)In my childhood,when I did something wrong,my mother never hit me.hit=打，打击？打，打击？hit强强调调“打打着着了了”、“击击中中”，give a blow or strike to;strike an object aimed at(contrasted with miss)hit不是指用手掌或戒尺棍棒去打人不是指用手掌或戒尺棍棒去打人 We keep a dog at home.We have a dog guarding our house.In my childhood,when I did something wrong,my mother never beat me.第15页Poor vocabulary He remained alive after experiencing the car accident.After my grandfathers death,my grandmother lived 5 years.He stayed at his friends home,at first he was welcome,but later things changed.Since the boy is growing up quickly,this suit now becomes too small for the boy.He survived the car accident.(to continue to live after or in spite of)My grandmother survived her husband by five years.(to live or exist longer than)He overstayed his welcome.The boy has outgrown this suit.第16页提升英语水平提升英语水平to raise the level of English knowledgeto improve ones English;to increase ones knowledge of English浓咖啡浓咖啡powerful coffeestrong coffee强硬政策强硬政策学习知识学习知识实现自给自实现自给自足足违反他意图违反他意图啊，好票！啊，好票！strong policylearn knowledgeachieve self-sufficiencyviolate his intentionAh,good tickets!tough policyacquire knowledgereach self-sufficiencygo against his intentionAh,good seats!Wrong collocations 第17页第18页