湖北省武汉为明实验学校中考英语作文辅导专题人教新目标版.doc

作文辅导专题
五种类型：
一、利弊分析（手机的使用、网购、电子课本、网上交友、请家教）
结构：
Part1： As we all know，… is becoming more and more…，different people have different opinions on it/every coin has two sides.
Part2： The advantages of it are（on the one hand）…First of all… what’s more… besides… last but not least…。. The disadvantages of it are(on the other hand )…To begin with,… next… finally…
Part3: In my opinion， …= To my mind， …= As far as I am concerned， …= I am of the opinion that in short; briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, in a word，
加分句子：
shopping on the internet is becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.
In my opinion，it’s not wrong to follow the fashion， but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others。
二、写人、记事类
结构：
Part1: Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind, …is the most unforgettable one。
Part2： On a sunny/rainy morning, while I was …First of all… Then… After that…In the end…
Part3： he/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/experienced， I will remember him/in forever。
加分句子：
Sth impressed me greatly
What impressed me most is that…
I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life。
Developa better relationship between each other。
Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action。 Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement。 We feel it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment。

三、计划类（暑期计划、高中计划）
结构：
Part1： The summer holiday is coming。 I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself。
Part2: First of all… Then… After that…In the end… I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge。 I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society。 If possible， I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit。
Part3: I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
加分句子：

四、图表类
结构：
Part1： As can be seen from/in the chart/diagram/table/graph..。/ It can be seen from the chart/diagram/table/graph/figures/statistics that。.。
Part2： We believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon./I believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon./ To start with，…What’s more… Last but not least…In the end… I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge。 I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework。 I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society。 If possible， I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit。本文为互联网收集，请勿用作商业用途
Part3： In conclusion/ in short/riefly/ in brief
加分句子：
From the chart we can see clearly that the average number of hours a student spends on Internet per week has increased from less than two hours in 1998 to nearly four hours in 2000, and then to 20 hours in 2004。
In my mind， the reasons why the overseas students are on the rise are as follows。
it is not difficult to find traveling an effective way to relieve people’s stress and get relaxation

people prefer to go traveling rather than stay at home during holidays
五、操作性知识（地震、火灾）
使用操作：户外活动受伤,如何急救。
1 首先检查受伤部位是否严重。
2用绷带包扎,尽量别活动。
3 帮助受伤者平躺,尽量放松。
4拨打 120 或者999
加分句子：
earthquake, kill, wound（致伤)， relatives, destroy, lonely， homeland, loveliest, whole—heartedly（全心全意地）,donate, overcome （克服)， confidence, firm will （坚定的意志）
十个话题：
一、环保类(绿色出行/节水）
　　1。 It's our duty to save water
　　2 we can’t live without water。
　　3 The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.
　　4 But some people don’t care about it 。
　　5 Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution。
　　6 If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment， the world will become much more beautiful.
　　7We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.
8There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem： the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.
9。 If everyone does one thing for our school, we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in。
10.elieve that by doing all these small things we can improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
11。we all know, the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse 。 In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink,no fresh air to breathe， no quiet places to live in。
二、烦恼类
三、压力(如何减轻学习压力的)
四、包容（inclusiveness）（通过一件事情体现你是如何包容的)
五、课外、休闲、健康（近视的原因及措施
In my opinion， all of us students should have a proper plan for our weekends。 We should make good use of our time, learning more knowledge， developing our interests，。。。We should also learn to relax， but I don’t think it's a good idea to spend too much time watching TV ， chatting online or playing computer games.
六、友谊（通过一件事情二建立的友谊）
七、失败与成功（失败与成功的经历及其从中得到的启示）
八、励志（刘伟）课外阅读（通过刘伟的事迹或者课外阅读得到的启示）
九、语言学习
Learning English can help broaden our mind and enrich our school life.
Satisfy people’s desire。
Practice makes perfect。
Firstly it’s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later。 Secondly， try to catch every chance to practice speaking， both in and out of class。 Don’t be afraid of making mistakes。 Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. What’s more, you'd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.
Above all， you should be confident in yourself（有自信） and don't give up(放弃)whenever you meet with difficulty（遇到困难）. I’m sure you will succeed through（通过…而成功） your hard work.
十、介绍地方或者名胜古迹
63. 根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
今年暑假，你们学校将迎接来自澳大利亚的学生。请你写一篇短文,向他们介绍你心目中的北京:北京最大的变化是什么；介绍两处以上的北京名胜古迹；作为北京人(Beijinger）应该怎样做。
提示词语：change， build， modern city, places of great interest
北京中考预测题目:
假设你是某校初三（1)班学生李华。下面是你校布告栏里张贴的“征集接待家庭”的通知,请根据其内容用英语写一封申请信。词数不少于60。
注意：信的开头和结尾已经给出（不计入词数).

HOST FAMILIES WANTED
Teachers and students from Central High School Phoenix will study in our school during the summer vacation。 Host families are wanted to accommodate our friends。
REQUIREMENTS：
◇ Good English。
◇ Good communication skills。
◇ A SEPARATE room.
◇ Convenient transportation。
◇ …
If interested， please send your APPLICATION IN ENGLISH to the International Department before THURSDAY。 Please consult us for any further information。

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One， Senior Two。 _________________________________________
____________________________________________________
I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account。
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Sir/ Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two。 I’m writing in reply to the notice for host families。 I think I have several reasons to accommodate one foreign friend. First， I believe my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners。 Also, my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others。 As for accommodation， my family live in a 4—room apartment and there is always a spare room for the guest. In addition, my home is very convenient in transportation。 Its location makes it easy to take either subways or buses to most places。 I have also got support from my parents, who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish. 个人收集整理，勿做商业用途
I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account。
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作类型分布

海淀
西城
东城
朝阳
丰台
2011一模
图表（零花钱)
My favorite gift
Best friend
宣传交通安全知识
学习建议
2011二模
A/An…Person in My School Life
灭火
在中国居住的风俗习惯
建议（学校餐饮）
How to spend your free time
2011中考
建议，（借钱）
2010介绍北
京公交

2012一模
记事，环保
记事，微笑
记事，thank you
介绍中国学校生活
My Best Friend in Middle School Life