星火英语写作课模板.doc

星火英语写作课模板
一、社会现象类第一段
第一句：（任选一句背诵即可）
1. The past several years have seen a (common/ favorable / undesirable/social/campus … ) trend that___________.(句子)
2. Recently, the issue/topic of______ (名词)has been brought into focus/to public attention.
3. With the rapid growth of______ (名词), ______(名词)have/has become increasingly important in our daily life/studies.
第二句：（任选一句背诵即可）
1. Taking a look around, one can find many examples easily: individuals are doing sth.（ving+名词）
2. After a good many years of enthusiasm for _____（名词）, people began to______（动词原形）.
二、对比选择类第一段
第一句：（任选一句背诵即可）
1 Individuals’ opinions about _____（名词）vary from person to person.
2. There is a public discussion on_____ .（名词）
第二句：（任选一句背诵即可）
1. While it is widely noted/stated/claimed by a majority of people/civilians/folks that___,（句子）others consider it differently.
2. Though quite a few people regard_____名词）as_____（名词）, the rest claim that the former/the latter is more advisable.
第三句：（任选一句背诵即可）
1. As for me, I believe_____（名词）is favorable.
2. However, in my opinion, the advantages of___（名词）outweigh those of_____（名词）.
三、图画作文第一段：
第一句：（简单描述图中内容）（任选一句背诵即可）
1. In the picture/cartoon/drawing, there be sb. doing sth …（图中人物在做的主要动作）+地点+（时间）.
2. As we can see from the picture, there be sb. doing sth …（图中人物在做的主要动作）+地点+（时间）.
3. The picture above depicts （a/an）___(名词), which/who is doing sth+地点+（时间）
第二句:（描述图中具体内容）
With sb1 doing sth (and doing sth), sb2 does sth (and does sth) (语言，道具，神情)…
第三句：（点明图中主题）（任选一句背诵即可）
1. Obviously, such a picture draws attention to the fact that___________.（句子）（图画表达的现象/道理）（题目中找）
2. Obviously, the painter reminds us of a common social phenomenon: ___________.（句子）（图画表达的社会现象）
3. Obviously, this picture demonstrates a vital theory of philosophy : ___________.句子）（文章想表达的道理）（题目中找）
四、评论谚语第一段
第一句：（引入名言）（任选一句背诵即可）
1. Nowadays an old/famous/interesting saying/remark “…”comes into vogue.
2. There is a widespread/…/ saying goes like that …
3. As an ancient Chinese saying goes, ”…”
4. “…”sb. once said …
第二句：（你对谚语的理解）（任选一句背诵即可）
1. Simple as the saying is, it informs us that/of …
2. Obviously，what we can make of this remark is that/the significance of …
3. Obviously，the saying tells us that/of …
五、应用文
格式：
Dear xxx ,
Yours ,
Your name
书信第一段: （任选一句背诵即可）
1. I am writing this letter to do …
2. I am writing this letter in purpose of doing …
3. I would like to extend my n. …
书信第二段：（根据题目要求写不同类型的信件）
建议信：
v. give/offer/render
adj. useful/practical/conductive
n. suggestions/proposals/recommendations
投诉信：
v. express/air
n. dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern
关于. regarding/concerning/as regards
n. the canteen/library/bookstore
感谢信：
v. express
n. thanks/gratefulness/appreciation
对于. to
n. you/my teacher
书信第三段：
私人信件
第一句:（任选一句背诵即可）
1. In a word，my appreciation to you is beyond words.
2. At last, I’d like to express my great appreciation for your help.
第二句: （任选一句背诵即可）
1. Best wishes.
2. Give my best regards to …
写给机构的信件
第一句：表示感谢（任选一句背诵即可）
1. In a word, my appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words.
2. I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you render me
2. 期待回信 （任选一句背诵即可）
1. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

2. I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest
convenience.

六、第三段模板
第一句（引出现状）：
There is a growing tendency for people these days to do sth, which I believe is unfavorable/wrong/favorable
最近有一个趋势大家去…,我认为这个趋势不好/错误/好。
第二句 （提出建议）（题目要求中有how时可在这句适当扩充）
Therefore, what we should do is to do
因此，我们应该做的是…
下面是第二句可以扩充的部分：
1）扬善去恶：（两面性问题，比如手机彩票等等）
encourage the merits of sth. and avoid its demerits.
鼓励某事物的优点避免他的缺点
2) 大家联合起来：（一般用在解决学生的问题，心理健康，网瘾等等）
It is high time that sb. should make combined efforts to put an end to this situation.
大家是时候团结一起来结束这个局面
3) 个人意识：（提高环境保护的意识等等）
The public should enhance the consciousness of sth
公众应该增强…的意识
4) 加强教育：（一般用在涉及面比较广的社会问题）
A large-scale education campaign should be launched to inform the public to do sth/not to do sth
一个大型的教育活动应该被展开去告知公众去做…/不去做…
5) 政府出台：（一般用在比较大的，比较严重的社会问题，如节约问题，浪费问题等等）
The authorities should work out and implement relevant laws and regulations to impose a heavy penalty on those who do sth.
政府应该制定和实施相关法律和规章制度来惩戒那些做某事的人。
6) 呼吁相关部门加强监管：（一般用在比较大的，比较严重的社会问题。如质量问题，假冒产品问题）
The relevant administration departments should strengthen the supervision on sth.
相关部门应该加强在…上的监管。
第三句（总结）：（任选一句背诵即可）
1. Thus，it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that + 结论（句子).
因此，不难得出结论…
2. From what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that + 结论（句子）.
从上面讨论中，我们可以安全的得出结论…
3. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that + 结论（句子）.
把上述所有因素考虑后，我们可以得出一个结论…
举例子的方法
1. Examples abound in history/our daily life ：+ 句子(主谓）
2. An instance occurred recently in which+ 句子（主谓）
3. A legend/Gossip/A rumor/Words/A theory/ A piece of news/ A saying has it that+内容
4. Consider/Imagine/Suppose/Say/Assume sb who is doing sth，and he will do sth.
5. How could sb, a legendary/ famous scientist/ inventor/ entrepreneur, did sth(成就) and won the respect and love of millions of people without A(品质)（名词）?
万能论据
健康：
• Sth contributes to our health by giving us some physical exercises
某物能有助于身体健康通过给我们一些身体锻炼。
• Sth relaxes sb physically, which help them work out mental problems more actively
sth可以让人们在身体上得到放松，这能使他们更加积极的克服心理问题。
• sth is harmful to/bad for/detrimental to health 某物对健康有害
• sth exerts great pressure on sb 某物给某人施加重压
• sth bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children
某物对孩子们的身体发育是不利的
• It is important for sb to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances
在任何环境下保持一个好的情绪是很重要的
• sb may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness
他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理疾病
• Exercise can build up one's resistance to disease 锻炼可以增强人的抵抗力
• Exercises can enhance immune function 锻炼可以增强人的免疫力
• adopt a healthy and meaningful life style 采取一个健康和有意义的生活方式
• keep fit and healthy 保持健康
• keep their body shape 保持好体型
• lose weight 减肥
• release pressure 减压
乐趣：
• sth, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes sb contented, with no time for boredom.
某物很有建设意义的占据了某人的空余时间，使得他很满足，进而没有时间来觉得无聊。
• stimulate one’s interest 激发兴趣
• Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of everyday life.
某物可以使我们的生活更加有乐趣，也就是说，某物为我们每天枯燥的生活增添了一些色彩
• Sth has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment
某物已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源
能力:
• sth will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.
某事会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
• By doing sth, sb is able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.
通过做某事，某人可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识，当他们长大后，这些对他们就业是大有好处的。
• By doing sth, sb can not only improve one’s academic studies, but gain many abilities which he will never be able to get from the textbooks.
通过做某事，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到的能力。
• sth contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities
某事能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。
• tap one’s potential 开发潜能
• sth will help people foster one’s independence 某物帮助人人培养独立
• sth bring one’s abilities into full play 某物把某人的能力发挥到极致
• help strengthen one’s sense of responsibility 帮助加强某人的责任感
• achieve one’s goal /accomplish one’s objectives 实现某人的目标
• a sense of accomplishment 成就感
• surmount difficulties 战胜困难
• create a favorable impression 留下好印象
交流：
• Sb have more opportunities to communicate with others, which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character
某人有更多机会和别人交流，这对他们个性的培养是有利的。
• make eye contact 做眼神交流
• lives only in the virtual world 仅仅生活在虚拟世界
• hinder communication 阻碍沟通
• The over-dependence on mobile phones can harm the relationship among friends and family
过度依赖手机会伤害朋友以及家人的关系
• At dinner tables, instead of chatting and laughing with each other, many people choose to chat with other friends online.
在饭桌前，人们不是相互聊天谈笑，而是选择和朋友在网上聊天
• The Internet enables more effective communication in some situations, but over-dependence on it actually pulls people apart.
网络在一些情况下使交流更有效，但是过度依赖它实际是使人们更疏远。
知识：
• Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened
逐渐的，我们的知识会得到增加，我们的视野将会大大的拓宽。
• It is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.
找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老
• reduce study load 减轻学习负担
• Sth can broadens people's minds to the extend which may not be reached previously
某物可以扩大人们的视野到一个之前不能到达的程度
• Sth can save sb a great deal of time, so sb would be able to concentrate more time and energy on one’s academic work.
某物能节省大量时间，这会使他们有更多的时间和精力放在学习上。
• Sth is bound to bring us great convenience in many aspects of our daily life
某物必定会给我们生活的诸多方面带来巨大便利
• Sth has brought people great convenience in doing sth
某物在人们做某事时带来了巨大的方便
• There is no denying that sth have greatly enhanced work/ study efficiency
毋庸置疑，某物很大的提升了工作/学习效率
• relieve their families’ financial burden to some extent
这在一定程度上可以缓解家庭的经济负担
• achieve more independence through work 获得更多经济上的独立
• the welfare and salary have been improved greatly 福利和收入得到了巨大的提升
• Money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed.
钱在生活中必不可少，没有了钱，也就谈不上物质享受和幸福了
• Money doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being. 钱不一定能保证幸福
• With the development of economy, people in increasing numbers become better off
随着经济的发展，越来越多的人们变得富有起来
• Can afford the huge cost of sth 能够承担某物的高额
• alleviate the burden on sb 减少某人身上的负担
安全：
• sth poses a great threat to one’s safety 某物对某人的安全造成巨大威胁
• governments should set safety requirements 政府应该建立安全要求
• impose more rigid safety standards 实施更严格的安全标准
• ensure the safety of sb 确保某人的安全
• sth adds to the safety of sth 某物增加了某事的安全
• food safety 食品安全