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(word完整版)托福独立作文开头模板经典 托福独立作文开头模板经典托福独立写作中，很多人都会在开头或者结尾使用模板。开头让人眼前一亮的经典模板有哪些？下面就是 给大家整理的托福独立作文开头模板,希望对你有用!托福独立作文开头模板1、According to the first graph， it can be seen that _, it can also be concluded from it that _。2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: _。3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over _。 Many people like _, while others are inclined to _。4、Nowadays， it is common to _。 Many people like _ because _. Besides， _。5、 _， just like many other things， are preferred by _. While being attacked by the idea that _， some people consider _. They point that _.6、Everything has two sides and _ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages。7、For years _ had been viewed as _. But people are taking a fresh look at it now。8、It has stipulated by the government that _. To this stipulation， many people respond actively because _.9、_ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, _ can&39；t be avoided.10、_ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young， and heated debates are right on their way.11、Recently， _ has become the focus of the society， and in this way。. People swarm to _.12、_ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.13、Man is now facing a big problem-_， which is becoming more and more serious. First, _ second, _.14、Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of _。15、It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that _。16、There is an old saying， _. It&39;s the experience of our forefathers， however， it is correct in many cases ever today。17、The English proverb says， _. This is quite true because _。18、_ is now_, and at the same time _。 These two factors have caused _. Then what shall we do to solve _ in the face of such a situation.19、One of our ancient philosophers said, _。 Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality。20、One of the great early writers said that _。 If this is true， the present situation should make us ponder over _。托福独立作文七大写作原则1. 审题，抓关键词，关键词多为名词和形容词，最重要的是一些限定词。全文都要围绕题目展开论述,紧紧扣题。考生粗心看错题也是常有的事儿,比如“Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching.”这道题,有人就会误解为“只有电影能够教会我们关于真实生活的东西，而本题有两个限定部分，一个是only,一个是that引导的定语从句。再如“Solving environmental problems is the best way for the government to improve public health.这道题，有人写着写着就忘记了主角“government”，论述的时候应该要从政府的角度出发，政府能都怎么做来改善公民的健康?也不能把public health理解为“小众的的健康”(比如“patients’”)，不能写“政府可以资助医院，让医院更新医疗设备，提高病人的治愈率”。medical facilities的话只针对病人。那怎么写“医疗”这个角度呢？其实在后面补充一句“减少疾病的传播,不会传染给健康的人”,范围就扩大为“the public”了，而不再仅仅是“patients。“审题一定要审清楚,题目限定对象、限定范围时，一定要在这个范围内去讨论;没有限定时，就没必要自己曲解题意，自己限定在一个小范围内论述，没有给定范围时，什么情况都可以讨论，言之成理即可.审题花3到5分钟,把全文思路想清楚再动手写，比你边写边想要好很多.”2. 文章结构最好为四段式，字数400字以上。很多人会觉得写五段比较好，两正（支持观点)一反(反对观点)或者两正加一让步段，而且让步段都是让步观点点到为止(说出了好/不好的一面，但是即刻又马上回到自己的主立场)，不多做解释，这样其实不太好把握，让步段对考生的逻辑思维要求较高，稍不注意会被考官误认为立场不坚定。凡是有观点，最好都要给出具体的解释,不展开解释人家就会疑惑“为什么?”。如果三个观点都展开论述的话，大多数学生就会觉得时间不够用。所以,主体段落最好就写两个理由段，段与段之间的逻辑关系阐述清楚就可以。3。 理由段落结尾 进行段落点睛。中间主体段落的论述，最好是“观点句+理论解释+例子+总结句”，总结句其实跟观点句一个意思,“举的例子说明了XXX道理”，这个道理其实就是topic sentence啦。那么写总结句的时候就要对观点句进行改写了，用不同的词汇和句型表达同一个意思，这就体现你的语言功底了。4. 理由段论证一定要体现严密的逻辑，思维不能跳跃。比如“Improving schools is the most important factor in successful development of a country. ”这道题,为什么改善学校会对国家的发展有帮助？纯粹的美化能起到作用吗？到底怎样改善学校才能对国家的发展起到积极作用?所以第一步就先要解释“how to improve schools”;然后才是第二步improving school的好处是，可以培养更多的优秀人才。学生可以有很好的条件学习，有助于他们学习知识(学到什么样的知识，锻炼出什么样的能力)，对于国家的发展有很大帮助。括号内的内容也是不能缺失的，否则就会有思维GAP.A(改善学校）rarr；B(培养人才)&rarr；C(国家成功发展)，每一步都不能缺失.缺了A，how to improve没有解释清楚的话，B可能就不会发生；缺了B，没有说明改善学校可以培养出什么样的人才，C也不会实现。所以论述一定要详细充分。5. 切忌大量模板，尤其在论证过程中出现大量繁琐的没有实质内容的模板句。独立写作不要背别人总结的模板句,想想评卷老师看到一模一样的开头会有何感想?第一印象肯定不好，还会觉得“这学生不大会写文章啊，都是抄别人的”。6。 学会发散思维，不要就事论事。不要仅仅围绕给的点去论述，比如我们前面提到的improving school那道题,不要仅仅围绕着“改善学校这个因素来论述，“改善学校好啊，好在这方面，好在那方面”，这样论述就偏题了，仅仅证明了它是一个很重要的因素（说明education的重要性），并没有说明它是最重要的。要完整充分地证明自己的观点，必定要提到其他因素，比如说政治、经济、文化等。7。 短期与长期短期(目标分24分以下),靠思路/逻辑思维提分；长期（基础好，目标24分以上的)要修炼高级词汇&长难句。托福写作要提神的雷区1。结构不平行例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots ofbooks.当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。2.不知所云例：Many companies began using computers mouth.3。段落过长,不分段,主语与动词一致问题She are a good friend of mine that I has known foralong time.主语和动词在数方面不一致.4。句子别扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the containerchanged.措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。5。不要使用缩写在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(canquot;t，don"t，it"s,we"；ll，theyquot；ve等等)，而应当使用单词的完整形式（cannot，do not,it is，we will，they have等等）。6。关联词语重复Since I want to go to a good school，therefore I am trying to raise mytestscores.不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词.7.句子不完整Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. Forexample， my friend in high school。句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。8。不要使用getWhen I got home， I got tired， so I got a book and got into bed。Get太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词,如become,receive，find， achieve, 等等。9。书写难以辨认，信息不正确I would like to study in America because all moderntechnologyoriginated there.传的信息不正确,或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确（如果确实是正确的，应当解释为什么这样，因为读者不认为是正确的）。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百;我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，应当使用many或most.非英语单词Computers are very helpful andadvantageable. 尽管看起来象个单词，其实不是，至少不是个英文单词.使用这个单词的另一种形式.10.介词多余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned abouttome during yesterday。 We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch。 When I first came tothe US,I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class， my classmate never mentioned aboutherhusband.在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown,home,there,here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。7