2019高考英语改错2带答案.doc

I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.
From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.
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I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term.
confidence a
The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I
annually
was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it
interviewing them
was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the
thought and
experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.
of exciting
From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs
删除that
improving.

How to keep mental health
As we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it’s vital to keep our mental health. Here are some advice on how to do it.
Firstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health. Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It’s their comfort and support which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.
In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!
【答案】
How to keep mental health
As we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it’s vital to keep our mental health.
Therefore/Thus
Here are some advice on how to do it.
is
Firstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of
truly goals
setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health.
enjoying
Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It’s their comfort and
without

support which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts
that
bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.
will
In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!
better
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.
They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly.
Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.
【答案】
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.
writing opinions
They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher,
There consideration one
who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the
which to
foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate
because/as
with each other smoothly.

Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by
或Various改为Varieties
the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and

improve his oral English.
their
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua. I plan to take part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I had already filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.
I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua. I plan to take ∧part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I had
a have
already filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare some
Therefore advice
time to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words and
attached finding of
format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.
that或which
I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.
your
Yours,
Li Hua
The sun was just slowly come up over the mountains today as I took my dogs for its morning walk. I smiled as I watched the clouds gradually turn to white and gold. The air was cool and I wore a big smile in my face. Even though there weren’t leaf on the trees, but I could still hear birds singing songs of spring. Even my dogs seemed to notice the different in the air. They were playing instead of just do their morning business in the grass. The particular golden sun seemed to make it a beautiful day. As I headed back, I realize something. The beauty of day didn’t come from the warmth of the sun. It came from the warmth within my own heart and soul.
71. come改为coming
72. its改为their
73. in改为on
74. leaf改为leaves
75.去掉but 或but改为yet
76. different改为difference(s)
77. do改为doing
78. particular改为particularly
79. realize改为realized
80. 在day前加the
For 65 years, Mr Li has been walk around our neighborhood twice the day. It’s a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a retiring biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several time along his route. Therefore, he still gets up early and sticks his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stops. We place different chairs along our route and invite him to sit and took a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out but have a walk.
For 65 years, Mr Li has been around our neighborhood twice day. It􀆳s a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several along his route. , he still gets up early and sticks his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stops.We place different chairs along route and invite him to sit and a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out have a walk.
Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at morethan $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position amongChina’s wealthiest. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 richpeople.
Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards hestarted a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introducedto the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in atour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point forall of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with JerryYang.
71..his→whose；owned→owns；rich→richest；fought→fighting；去掉in；he和introduced 之间加上was；before→when/after；in→ on；obviously→obvious；all→ both

Last week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There the doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate. The doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack tasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health tastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recovered three days later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.
Last week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There
in Seeing
the doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate.
if/whether a immediately
The doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack instructions
tasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health brought
tastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly But when he had recovered three it
days later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.
amazed
In order to promote participation in outdoors exercise, our school organized an activity to climb Tianlong Mountain on April 10. The majority of my class joined the activity.
Early in the morning, having assembled outside the school gate, we head straight to the thickly-forested Tianlong Mountain. We set out for the top in high spirits the moment when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky or steep areas. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. Bathing in the warm sunshine, we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and game.
This event was extremely beneficial and we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!
短文改错：第一段： 第一行：outdoors --- outdoor 第二行：joined后面加 in
第二段 第一行： head---headed 第三行：去掉when 第三行:In a course of ---In the course of 第五行： which --- where 第六行：Viewing---Viewed第七行：us---ourselves 第七行：gamegames
第三段 第二行 are held --- be held
Dear Peter,
How time flies! It had been almost a year since you left China to Sweden. During your home stay at my home, we had such wonderful time that it seemed as if everything was happened yesterday. I have been long to hear all about you and missing you so much. Fortunate, I was selected as one of the student representative to pay a visit to your school. The visit will last on July 7th to 20th. And as a super soccer fan, I’d really love to visit our local soccer club.
I can’t wait for the day to come where I can see you.
1.had--has 2. to ----for 3. 在such后加 a 4. 去掉was 5. long—longing
6. Fortunate---Fortunately 7. representative---representatives 8. on---from 9. our--your 10. where---when
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So they had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.
去掉visit后to； living 改为live； which改为that； were改为was；
they改为 we； big 改为bigger； took改为takes；
Therefore改为However； new前加 a； year改为years