高中英语短文改错-附答案.doc

改错一I have a good friend whos name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbours house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.改错二I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country.Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.改错三Dear Ralph, Im a senior student. Im getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstto express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letterhe said, We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation. So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didnt want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up? 改错四Dear Bob, Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. Id like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 改错五Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.改错六Dear Li Ming, I have received your letter yesterday. Dont worry about you. Im getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. Im afraid I cant agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.改错七Some students dont like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happy if you can be friend. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when youre eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something youre interested in, or ask them about their life when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more. 改错八One afternoon Jack is walking down a river along. It was very cold day and on the river few boats could be seenWhen he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene. A boy fell of a canoe(独木舟) and was struggling in the waterWithout think about herself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy He was about to drag（拖） the boy to the river bank then he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge One of them stared Jack and said angrily, “They are making a film and youve spoiled a whole afternoons work!” 答案：改错一：whos 改为whose2.正确3.去掉but4.on改为in5.parents后加were6.homeworks改为homework7.stopped后加to8.find改为found9.immediate改为immediately10.fire前加the改错二： the改为a2.正确3.see前加to4.go改为going5.去掉been6.去掉had7.去掉but8. 去掉had9.on改为at10.him改为her改错三：1.getting 后加on或along2.fallen改为been3.shy前加a4.feeling改为feelings 当情感讲时feeling常用单数5.study前加to或study改为studying6.去掉to7.去掉to8.watched改为watch9正确10.and改为or改错四：1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。 2. to 后加 be 或 become。 3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。 4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作主语， 故用 which。 5. 此行无错。 6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”， 修饰可数名词复数。 7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知， 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。 8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in为固定短语， “对感兴趣”。 9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。 10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。改错五：答案：76去掉to短语错误。go abroad“出国”。77presentpresents名词的数错误。present“礼物”，是可数名词。78去掉第二个were动词错误。interest在此是及物动词用法，意为“使感兴趣”。be interested in“对感兴趣”。79buysbought时态错误。由全文可知，用一般过去时态。8081themit代词错误。在这本书里有关于肢体语言的图片和不同国家的语言习俗。用it指代这本书。82put前加been语态错误。我的礼物被放在了你的卧室里了。礼物是被放在卧室里，所以用被动语态。83thatwhich定语从句关系词错误。介词后用which，不用that。84butand连接逻辑错误。前后是并列关系而非转折关系。85fewlittle混淆错误。a little 与 little 可以用作副词， 表示“有点”“稍稍” ，修饰动词、副词、形容词或介词短语。如：He is a little tired.他有点累了。而a few不可用作副词。改错五 1.have去掉 2.about后的you改为me 3.workswork 4.learnlearning 5.recentrecently 6.interestinginterest 7.English后的and改为but 8.be后加an 9.atin 10.where后加there改错六41. aboutwith/to 根据句意，可知此处是表达“和父母交谈”，而不是“谈论父母”。42. aseven if 意为“好像”，与句意不符；根据句意，此处应是表达让步关系。故用even if ,意为“即使”。43. goinggetting get along well with 是固定短语，意为“和相片融洽”。44. 45. wayways some在此处修饰可数名词复数。46. walk前加a go out for a walk意为“出去散步”47. andor 此处表选择关系。48. arewere “他们年轻时候”应用动词的过去式。49. ourtheir 和they保持一致。50. honestyhonest 形容词honest 作表语。