高中英语短文改错-附答案.doc

改错一
I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.

改错二
I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.

改错三
Dear Ralph,
I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?

改错四
Dear Bob,
Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.
First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours, Li Hua

改错五
Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.

改错六
Dear Li Ming,
I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.

改错七
Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happy if you can be friend. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their life when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.

改错八
One afternoon Jack is walking down a river along. It was very cold day and on the river few boats could be seen．When he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene. A boy fell of a canoe(独木舟) and was struggling in the water．Without think about herself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy． He was about to drag（拖） the boy to the river bank then he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge． One of them stared Jack and said angrily, “They are making a film and you’ve spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”

答案：
改错一：who's 改为whose 2.正确 　3.去掉but 4.on改为in 5.parents后加were 6.homeworks改为homework 7.stopped后加to 8.find改为found 9.immediate改为immediately 10.fire前加the
改错二： the改为a 2.正确 3.see前加to 4.go改为going 5.去掉been 6.去掉had 7.去掉but
8. 去掉had 9.on改为at 10.him改为her
改错三：1.getting 后加on或along 2.fallen改为been 3.shy前加a 4.feeling改为feelings 当情感讲时feeling常用单数 5.study前加to或study改为studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 8.watched改为watch 9正确 10.and改为or
改错四：1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。 2. to 后加 be 或 become。 3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。 4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作主语， 故用 which。 5. 此行无错。 6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”， 修饰可数名词复数。 7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知， 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。 8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in…为固定短语， “对……感兴趣”。 9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。 10. hear 改为 hearinglook forward to doing sth.为固定短语。
改错五：答案：
76．去掉to　短语错误。go abroad“出国”。
77．present→presents　名词的数错误。present“礼物”，是可数名词。
78．去掉第二个were　动词错误。interest在此是及物动词用法，意为“使……感兴趣”。be interested in“对……感兴趣”。
79．buys→bought　时态错误。由全文可知，用一般过去时态。
80．√
81．them→it　代词错误。在这本书里有关于肢体语言的图片和不同国家的语言习俗。用it指代这本书。
82．put前加been　语态错误。我的礼物被放在了你的卧室里了。礼物是被放在卧室里，所以用被动语态。
83．that→which　定语从句关系词错误。介词后用which，不用that。
84．but→and　连接逻辑错误。前后是并列关系而非转折关系。
85．few→little　混淆错误。a little 与 little 可以用作副词， 表示“有点”“稍稍” ，修饰动词、副词、形容词或介词短语。如：He is a little tired.他有点累了。而a few不可用作副词。
改错五 1.have去掉 2.about后的you改为me 3.works→work 4.learn→learning 5.recent→recently 6.interesting→interest 7.English后的and改为but 8.be后加an 9.at→in 10.where后加there
改错六41. about→with/to 根据句意，可知此处是表达“和父母交谈”，而不是“谈论父母”。
　　42. as→even if 意为“好像”，与句意不符；根据句意，此处应是表达让步关系。故用even if ,意为“即使”。
　　43. going→getting get along well with 是固定短语，意为“和…相片融洽”。
　　44. √
　　45. way→ways some在此处修饰可数名词复数。
　　46. walk前加a go out for a walk意为“出去散步”
　　47. and→or 此处表选择关系。
　　48. are→were “他们年轻时候”应用动词的过去式。
　　49. our→their 和they保持一致。
　　50. honesty→honest 形容词honest 作表语。