【作文范文】全国I卷2019年高考英语真题卷.doc

2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(全国卷I)
英 语
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
72.假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:
1.写信目的:
2.个人优势:
3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
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参考范文1：
I'm LiHua, an outgoing boy, who is studying in London. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team, having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city. I have some advantages for the job.
First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. Besides, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least，through my introduction and efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
【详解】1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。
3.关键词
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate ，take my application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all, Besides, to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least，等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
【点睛】本文首段开门见山，表达了写信的目的；第2段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外First of all, Besides, Last but not least的使用使文章富有条理性。此外，还使用了高级句式结构，如I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration条件状语从句。

参考范文2：
Dear Sir or Madam,

How are you doing? I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager, who is crazy about different cultures around the world. Recently, I learned in your official website that a volunteer is needed for an exhibition of Chinese traditional painting in London. So I am writing to apply for this position.

Here are three main reasons why I am the best choice for you. First and foremost, having lived in London for half a year before as an exchange student, I am undoubtedly good at EnglIsh; as a result, it is a piece of cake for me to introduce everything to international friends. Besides, I learned Chinese painting for more than ten years in my childhood; therefore, I do know a lot about this great art form. Last but certainly not least, as vice monitor of our class, I am kind, patient and always ready to help others.

Hopefully, this wonderful chance would be offered to me. I have the confidnece that I will have a great time Looking forward to your reply.

   Yours,
LiHua

这是一篇典型的“申请信”，李华申请去伦敦某美术馆担任志愿者。

申请信模板
Dear Sir or Madam,
①开头问候 How are you doing?
②自我介绍 I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in XXX middle school, who is crazy about XXX.
③得知招聘信息  Recently, I learned in your official website that you need a  某某岗位. I am very interested in this position. 
④写信应聘 So, I am writing to apply for it.
⑤个人优势 From my perspective, there is no doubt that I am the best choice for you. 
⑥优势一：结合题目来写 First and foremost, needless to say, I am good at  某某方面, for I once did sth.
⑦  优势二：情商高 Additionally, no one can deny I get along well with all my classmates, enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and am always ready to help others.
⑧优势三：有相关经验 Last but not least, I have some relevant experience, considering that I once worked in a similar company/for a similar activity.
⑨希望得到这个机会 Hopefully, the wonderful chance would be offered to me./I have the confidence that I will do this job well. 
⑩期待回复  I am looking forward to your earliest reply.

Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua