雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段.ppt

TASK2npurpose：nessay/dissertation考查提出考查提出解决方案的能力；举例说明观解决方案的能力；举例说明观点的能力；对比证据和意见的点的能力；对比证据和意见的能力等能力等1精选课件pptnRubric:(I6P31)n(fact+)opinion+question+instructionnYoushouldspendabout40minutesonthistask:2精选课件ppt.nWriteaboutthefollowingtopic:nToday,thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.3精选课件ppt.nTowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?nGivereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.4精选课件ppt大作文准备大作文准备 天龙八天龙八“步步”n n熟读剑熟读剑5，剑，剑6范文，理解评分标准范文，理解评分标准n n题型题型；每种题型对应的结构；每种题型对应的结构n n题材归类题材归类n n素材素材n n提纲（落实细节）提纲（落实细节）思维思维n n高频短语高频短语n n建立精彩句库（换写，仿写，扩写）建立精彩句库（换写，仿写，扩写）n n每每2天一篇；模考；天一篇；模考；5精选课件pptQuestiontypes：nIAgreeorDisagree?(+Aor-A)n-I6P31（见上）（见上）opinion+(+Aor-A)n-I3P52fact+opinion+(+Aor-A)6精选课件pptnWhenacountrydevelopsitstechnology,thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflifedieout.Itispointlesstotryandkeepthemalive.nTowhatextent(/howfar)doyouagreeordisagree(withthisopinion)?7精选课件pptIIAdvantagesVsDisadvantages(+Aor-A)nI5P53nInsomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.nadvantagesanddisadvantages8精选课件pptIIIDiscussBothViews(AorB)nI6P53nSuccessfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.nDiscussbothviews；youropinion9精选课件pptIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)nResearchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.nWhichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P9910精选课件pptVProblem+Reasons+Solutions(PRS)nI4P101nInmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.nWhatdoyouthinkarethecauseofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?11精选课件pptn评分标准三大要素：内容，结构，评分标准三大要素：内容，结构，语言语言n读雅思大作文范文学习写作的内容，读雅思大作文范文学习写作的内容，结构，文章行文和逻辑。结构，文章行文和逻辑。12精选课件ppt写作内容及结构：写作内容及结构：nIAgreeorDisagree?(+Aor-A)nToday,thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?13精选课件pptnPara1开头开头指出现象指出现象/事实事实;restatetherubric（换词，换句（换词，换句型，换种说法）；字数：型，换种说法）；字数：30-40w；14精选课件pptPara 2&3正文：四种写法n一边倒：一边倒：n-完全同意完全同意(在开头段提出观点表同在开头段提出观点表同意；意；para2R1；para3R2；)n-完全不同意（在开头段提出观点完全不同意（在开头段提出观点表不同意；表不同意；para2R1；para3R2；）n不完全同意或不同意不完全同意或不同意15精选课件pptn-para2同意的部分；同意的部分；R1，2；para3不同意的部分不同意的部分R1,2n-para2基本赞同；基本赞同；R1，2;para3inwhatcases题中观点站题中观点站不住脚不住脚nPara4结尾结尾总结以上观点总结以上观点字数：字数：30-40w16精选课件pptIIAdvantagesVsDisadvantages(+Aor-A)nInsomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidetodothis.17精选课件pptnPara1开头：指出现象开头：指出现象/事实事实restatetherubric（换词，换句（换词，换句型，换种说法）；型，换种说法）；nPara2advantages(2-3个个)nPara3disadvantages(2-3个个)18精选课件pptn nPara4结论：结论：“我我”的观点。偏向的观点。偏向advantages或或disadvantages；理由；理由（2个）；字数：个）；字数：50w；n n注意：结论部分，无论是倾向优点还注意：结论部分，无论是倾向优点还是缺点，都不要重复正文部分的语句。是缺点，都不要重复正文部分的语句。对策：（如：偏向优点）对策：（如：偏向优点）1.总结第二段总结第二段的观点，由的观点，由specific到到general；2.重重复第二段观点，但要用重述法。复第二段观点，但要用重述法。n n赞成的一边适当多写一些内容。赞成的一边适当多写一些内容。19精选课件pptIIIDiscussBothViews(AorB)I6P164n nSuccessfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.n nDiscussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinionI6P5320精选课件pptn开头开头Para1摆现象；摆现象；restatetherubric；21精选课件pptn正文：正文：n有倾向性；有倾向性；nPara2A，简单陈述其理由，然，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。后针对所述理由展开驳论。nPara3B(理由理由2-3个个)注：倾向注：倾向A写法正好相反写法正好相反22精选课件pptn n无倾向性无倾向性n nPara2A，简单陈述其理由，然后针，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。对所述理由展开驳论。n nPara3B，简单陈述其理由，然后针，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。对所述理由展开驳论。n n结论结论Para4“我我”的观点。标明倾向的观点。标明倾向性性AorB，或者保持中立并提出自己，或者保持中立并提出自己独特的观点。独特的观点。23精选课件pptn nIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)n nResearchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.n nWhichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P99范文：范文：I5P16924精选课件pptn nIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)n nResearchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.n nWhichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P99范文：范文：I5P16925精选课件pptnPara1开头开头restatetherubric；指出指出fact(s)说明有哪些可能的选择；说明有哪些可能的选择；nPara2为什么为什么A，B是可能的选是可能的选择，择，nPara3“我我”的选择的选择(oneofA，B，ornoneofthesebutanotherone)；R1，2nPara4结论结论概括概括para2和和para3的的观点。观点。26精选课件pptnV Problem+Reasons+Solutions(PRS)nIn many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.nWhat do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?I4 P10127精选课件pptnPara1开头开头指出指出problem；restatetherubric；nPara2R1,2.nPara3S1,2nPara4结论结论概括概括para2和和para3的的观点。观点。nNote：S和和R要一一对应。要一一对应。28精选课件pptn衔接，逻辑性衔接，逻辑性n1.foranessayasawhole:topicsentence(thesisstatement)n2.foreachparagraph:topicsentencen3.段落间段落间,段内都要注意衔接。标段内都要注意衔接。标明并列，递进，转折等主要关系。明并列，递进，转折等主要关系。n学习学习1篇范文，体会内容，结构及篇范文，体会内容，结构及连接手段连接手段29精选课件ppt观点前置观点前置-段内扩展：段内扩展：30精选课件ppt原因原因Example1:nTherearemorejobopportunitiesreadilyavailableinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.31精选课件pptnTheeconomicconditionsinthebigcitiesaregenerallybetterthanthoseinthesmalltowns,which,inreturn,attractsmoreinvestmentfromcommercialcorporationsandcompanies.32精选课件pptnTherefore,comparedtomostsmalltowns,therearealwaysmoremodernandinternationalcompanieswhichcanoffercityresidentsnumerousjobopportunities.33精选课件pptExample2:nBigcitiescanprovidecityresidentswithmoreeducationopportunities.34精选课件pptnEducationinstitutionsarealwaysbuiltintheareawithabigpopulationwiththeintentionofservingandeducatingpeople.35精选课件pptnTherefore,comparedwithsmalltowns,bigcitiesalwayshavemoreschools,collegesanduniversitieswhichcanoffermanyeducationalopportunitiesforbothchildrenandadults.36精选课件ppt原因原因-展开的常用句型展开的常用句型nbecausenforthesimplereasonthatnThereasonisthatn无须过渡词无须过渡词37精选课件ppt拟无拟无Example1nThemostobviouslyimportantcharacteristicofairplanetravelisthehighspeedinvolved.38精选课件pptnIttookweekstocrosstheAtlanticorPacificoceansinsideaship.Todaywiththeadventofairplanesinourlives,thosesametripscanbecompletedinamatterofhours.39精选课件pptnAhundredyearsago,whenwedidnthavetheflightsinthesky,andwhentherewereonlyships,theonlytransportationfacilityacrosstheocean,aninternationaljourneywasexhaustingandtime-wasting.40精选课件pptExample2nEatingatrestaurantcansavealotoftime.41精选课件pptnWecanhardlyimaginethesituationwithoutrestaurantsinourlives.Livingunderthehigh-pressureandfast-pacedlivingstyle,peoplehavefoundtheyneedrestaurantwhentheydonthaveenoughtimetoenjoytheirowncooking.42精选课件pptnWithoutrestaurantsandtheservicesofferedbythem,peoplewillhavetospendlongtimegoingtogroceriesandcookingbythemselves.43精选课件ppt常用句型常用句型nWithoutnIfwedonthaveinourlives,nWecannotimaginethesituationwithout44精选课件pptnOnehundredyearsagowhenwedidnthaveinourlives,nThingswouldbecompletelydifferentwithoutinourlives.45精选课件ppt方面展开方面展开Example1nComparedwithsmalltowns,therearemoreconvenientlivingconditionsinbigcities.46精选课件pptnInthebigcities,thereareconvenientshoppingcentersforpeopletobuydailynecessities；publictransportationsystemcantransfercityresidentsfromoneplacetoanothereasily;inentertainingplacescitizensgetfunandenjoylife;andeventherearemoretheaterstoshowthelatestmovies47精选课件pptExample2nDoyouagreeordisagree?Azoohasnousefulpurpose.(disagree)48精选课件pptnByobservingandstudyingthebehaviorsandhabitsofanimalsinthezoo,wecanlearnthebasicrulesofsurvivingandlivingintheworld.49精选课件pptAmonkeyhastofighttowinwhenhedecidestobealeaderofthegroup;birdsshowtheirbeautifulplumeandvoiceiftheywanttoattracttheirpartners;andalltheanimals,iftheywantalifefreeofworries,responsibilities,andpressure,havetosacrificetheirfreedom.50精选课件ppt常用句型常用句型n nThisreasoncanbereflectedinthefollowingaspects.n nWecanseethisineveryaspectofn nFirst,second,inaddition,moreover,alson nSeveralfactsn nseveralaspects51精选课件ppt数据：数据：Example1nTherearemorejobopportunitiesreadilyavailableinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.52精选课件pptnAccordingtothesurveyconductedbyTessessData,astatisticorganization,80%commercialandindustrialcorporationsandcompanies,includingbothdomesticcompaniesandinternationalcompaniesarelocatedinthebigcities,whichoffermorethan80%workingpositionsforthosewhoareworkingandlivinginthecities.53精选课件ppt常用句型常用句型nAccordingtoarecentsurvey,nThelatestsurveysshowthatnAninvestigationshowsthatnAsurveywascarriedouton,theresultsofwhichweresurprising.nAccordingtoaninvestigation,nArecentsurveyrevealedthat54精选课件ppt举例举例Example1nSomepeopleprefertoliveinasmalltown.Othersprefertoliveinabigcity.55精选课件pptn nForexample,therearefarmoresupermarkets,buslines,theatersinParisthaninLestie,averysmalltowninnorthFrance.OnaveragepeopleinPariscangototheatereveryweektoenjoythelatestmovieswhereasthoseinLestiehavetotakehoursoftraintogotothecitytheatersforamovie.Generally,peopleinPariscanenjoymuchbettershoppingenvironmentthanthoseinLestie.56精选课件pptExample2nDoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Technologyhasmadetheworldabetterplacetolive.nDisagree57精选课件pptnOneexampleinpointisInternet,oneofthemostpervasivemoderntechnologyinourliveswhichhasmadeourworldevenmorecomplicatedandisolated.58精选课件pptnWiththeadventofInternetinourlives,mostyoungpeoplehavealreadymovedtheirlivestothecyberworld.Theystudy,work,chat,evengameonline.Peoplelosttheirpreviouswayofgaming,fromwhichtheycanenjoythefunofcooperatingandcommunicating.59精选课件pptnAlso,theyareawayfromthetraditionalwayofliving,fromwhichtheycanenjoythebasicandsimplelivesofhumanbeings.60精选课件ppt常用句型常用句型nInsteadofimprovingourwayofliving,Internethasmadetheworldamorecomplicatedandisolatedplacetolivein.61精选课件pptnTheexamplethatcansupportmyideais.nTheexampleofcansupportmyidea.nisagoodexamplewhichcansupportmyidea.62精选课件pptn nTosupportmyidea,thereisonegoodexample.n nAgoodexampleinpointisn nAgoodexampleisn nTotakeasanexample.n nThemostobviousexampleofthisreasonisn nForexample,n nForinstance,63精选课件ppt对比：对比：nSomepeopleprefertoworkforalargecompany.Othersprefertoworkorasmallcompany.64精选课件pptn nEmployeesinthebigcompaniescanalwaysownmorechancestoacquiremoreknowledgeandexperience.Inbigcompanies,professionalsandexpertsemployedcanoffermoreexpertiseandskills,whichyoucanhardlyfindinasmallcompanywhichcanbarelyaffordtoemployanexpert,orwherethereisnoneedtohaveexpertsatall.65精选课件pptnInbigcompanies,professionalsandexpertsemployedcanoffermoreexpertiseandskills,whichyoucanhardlyfindinasmallcompanywhichcanbarelyaffordtoemployanexpert,orwherethereisnoneedtohaveexpertsatall.66精选课件ppt常用句型常用句型nHowever,nbut,nincontrastnontheotherhand67精选课件ppt开头段开头段68精选课件pptIntroduction-背景引入背景引入 nInthefuture,studentsmayhavethechoiceofstudyingathomebyusingtechnologysuchascomputersortelevisionorofstudyingattraditionalschools.69精选课件pptnWeliveinaworldinwhichtechnologygivesusmanyopportunitiestoimproveeveryaspectofourlives,includingarts,sciences,politics,andeducation(时代特征时代特征).Oneofmostobviousimpactwhichthetechnologyhasoneducationisthatithaschangedtraditionalstudying-in-classlearningpattern(走向主题走向主题).70精选课件pptnNowwegetchancetostudyathomebyusingtechnologysuchascomputerortelevision(论述主题论述主题).Thisnewlearningpattern,whichIstronglyrecommendtoeveryone,willbenefitusalot.71精选课件pptIntroduction-对方让步对方让步 nManypeoplehaveacloserelationshipwiththeirpets.Thesepeopletreattheirbirds,cats,orotheranimalsasmembersoftheirfamily.72精选课件pptnFormanykids,familypetsarenotjustanimalskeptforamusementorcompanionship;thefamilypetsaretreatedastheirbestfriendsandcompanionswhonotonlyprovideunconditionallove,butalsoteachthemaboutfriendship,73精选课件pptnresponsibility,loyalty,andempathy.Theylovetotreatthemastheirfamilymembersandprefertokeepthemintheirrooms.(对方观点对方观点)74精选课件pptnHowever，theyfailtorealizethatpetsarestillanimals,whichmay,firstly,makeseriousinjurytokidsaroundthem;inaddition,therearealwaysvariousbacteriaanddiseasesbearing.nThereforeIdontthinkitsagoodideatotreatthepetsasfamilymembers.(我方观点我方观点)75精选课件ppt观点驳斥句型观点驳斥句型nPeopleseemtofailtotakeintoaccountthefactthatuniversityalsobringstudentsvaluableknowledgeineveryfield.n n.76精选课件pptnHowever,thisopinionisnowbeingquestionedbymoreandmorecityresidents,whocomplainthatthemigrantshavebroughtmanyseriousproblemslikecrimeandprostitution77精选课件pptIntroduction-主题重述主题重述 nInsomecountries,teenagershavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.Agree？78精选课件pptnTheschooldebateovercollegestudentstakingapart-timejobcanalwaysarousewidespreadinterests.Thosewhoobjecttoitarguethatstudentsshouldnotspendtheirprecioustimeinthisway.Peoplewho79精选课件pptnadvocateit,ontheotherhand,claimthatbytakingamajor-relatedpart-timejob,studentscanfurtherimprovetheiracademicstudies.转述主题转述主题+理理由由nAsfarasIamconcerned,Ibelievethatparttimejobswillbringstudentsbenefits.我方观我方观点点80精选课件ppt理论重述句型理论重述句型n nItiscommonlyaccepted/thoughtthatn nThereisageneraldebate/discussion/tendency(thesedays)thatn nAnincreasingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizethatn nThereisnodenyingthefactthatn ntheproblemthathascausedwidepublicconcern81精选课件pptIntroduction-概念展开概念展开nNeighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofagoodneighbor82精选课件pptnNeighborsarethenearestpeopletousinthedarkesthoursofthenight.Theyaretheoneswholiveclosesttous,soclosethatthereisperhapsnomorethanacementedwallbetweenus.概念展开概念展开83精选课件pptnBeingagoodneighborisadutythateveryoneshouldfulfillandapersonhasmanyresponsibilitiestowardshisneighbors;therefore,oneshouldalwaysbeagoodneighborsothatheisalsotreatedinthesamemannerwhenheisneeded.进入主题进入主题84精选课件ppt事实引入句型事实引入句型nAccordingtoarecentsurvey,fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.nThelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.nThedeathrateofnew-bornbabiesinthatregion,theresultsofwhichweresurprising.85精选课件pptnAninvestigationshowsthatfemaleworkerstendtohaveafavorableattitudetowardretirement.nAsurveywascarriedoutonthe86精选课件pptIntroduction-多种引用方式的叠多种引用方式的叠加使用加使用 nAgreeordisagree?Televisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsandfamily.87精选课件pptnTV,oneofthemostpervasivemoderntechnologies,whichhasenteredpeopleslivesseveraldecadesago,hasgreatimpactonbothourlife-styleandourthought.概念介绍概念介绍88精选课件pptnAccordingtoarecentsurveyconductedbyStatisticsBureauofGuangdongProvince,astatisticorganizationinChina,teenagersaveragelyspend14hourswatchingtelevisioneachweekbutonlysixhourswiththeirfamilymembersinChina.数据切入数据切入89精选课件pptnIamintotalagreementwiththeclaimthatTVhasbroughtanunfavorableinfluenceontherelationshipbetweenthemandtheirfamilymembers.观点观点+过过渡渡90精选课件ppt原因引入句型原因引入句型nMyreasonsarelistedbelow:nTherearenumerousreasonsfor,butIwouldonlyexploreafewofthembelow:nThereareseveralreasonsandagreementstosupportmyidea.Here,Iintendtoexplaincoupleofreasons.91精选课件pptniagreewithforthefollowingreasons:nmyargumentsarelistedasfollows.nIwilltrytoprovemypointbythefollowingideas.nthemostimportantreasonwhyIagreewiththeabovestatementisthatIbelieve92精选课件pptintroduction-Position:nAsfarasIamconcerned.nFormypart,IagreewithnItendtobelievethatnIalwaysholdastrongpositive/negativeattitudetoward93精选课件pptn,whichIstronglyrecommendtoeveryonenMostofpeople,includingme,cannotagreewiththeopinionthatnIstronglyrecommendthat94精选课件pptPosition-下文压缩句下文压缩句:nExample1:Livinginthebigcitiesisabet