1、TheLoonsMargaret LaurenceLesson 9.Teaching Plan.TeachingObjectives1.Tounderstandthesymbolicmeaningoftheloons:thenativeIndiansofCanada2.Tolearnthewaysofdevelopingashortstory3.Tounderstandthescenicdescription.TeachingContentnThestoryillustratetheconflictbetweenwhiteCanadiansandnativeIndians,andtheraci
2、aldiscriminationtheIndianshasbeenimposedupon.nToobservehowtheauthorarrangesthelayoutofthestory,andtofindoutthe beginning,development,climaxanddenouementofthestory.TeachingFocusnThesymbolicmeaningoftheloons:thenativeIndiansofCanadanThescenicdescription.TeachingMethods1.Teacher-orientedteachingmethod2
3、Student-orientedteachingmethod3.Theelicitedmethod.TeachingProcedure.IntroductoryRemarks.BackgroundInformation.LearningFocus.KeywordsandExpressions.ExplanationoftheText.DivisionoftheText.TheWritingStyle.RhetoricalDevices.Exercises.Introductory Remarks.IntroductoryRemarksThisshortstoryisfirstpublishe
4、dinA Bird in the HouseanditisaboutPiquetteTonnerre,ahalf-bredgirlwhogrewupunderharshcircumstancesinawhitesocietythatsuppresseshalf-breeds.Thestoryistoldthroughanothergirl,Vanessa,whousedtobePiquettesclassmatewhenshewasyoung.VanessasfatherhappenstobePiquettesdoctorandheinviteshertospendsummerholidayw
5、iththemintheDiamondLakeforthesakeofherhealth.NineyearsafterthatVanessahappenstomeetherinacafandshetellsVanessathatsheisgoingtomarryawhiteman.FouryearslaterwhenVanessacomeshomeonherholiday,shelearnsthatPiquetteisburnttodeathtogetherwithhertwochildren.Byusinganappropriatetone,Margaretdescribesthealien
6、ationfeltbytheyoungPiquetteTonnerre,whorepresentsanethnicgrouprejectedbyacruelsociety,justduetothefactthattheyaredifferent.Detailed Study of the Text.BackgroundInformationnAuthor:MargaretLaurencenoneofthemajorcontemporaryCanadiannborninNeepawa,Manitoba,CanadaneducatedattheUniversityofManitoba.nmovin
7、gwithherhusbandtoAfricanbeginningherliterarycareerin1954byeditingA Tree of Poverty,acollectionofSomalipoetryandprosenthenovel,This side of Jordan withabackgroundsetonGhanaasthecountrysindependencewasdrawingnear.nAbookofshortstories,The Tomorrow-Tamerhasasimilarsetting.naworkofnon-fiction,The prophet
8、s Camel Bell,adescriptionoftwoyearsspentinSomaliland.nThe Stone Angel isaremarkablebook,demonstratingsuperblyherabilitytocreatecharacters.nA Jest of God wasmadeintoasuccessfulmovie,Rachel,RachelnTheFire-Dwellers,anovelsetinVancouvernacollectionofsemi-biographicalshortstories,A bird in the House came
9、out.ntheGovernorGeneralsAwardforfictionforbothA Jest of GodandThe Diviners andhasbeentherecipientofhonorarydegreesfromhalfadozenCanadianuniversities.nHerstoriesfeaturestrongwomenandstrugglesforself-understandingandacceptance.nShewasknownforheroutspokensupportofpeace,womensrights,andotherprogressivec
10、auses.ninvolvedinspeakingandwritingaboutissues,suchasnucleardisarmament,theenvironment,literacy,andothersocialissuesntheMargaretLaurenceFundntheMargaretLaurenceAwardforExcellence.nLoonndistinctiveCanadianbird,thebirdofthelakes,fish-eating,divingnTheCanadiangovernmentissuedaone-dollarcoinwithalooneng
11、ravedonit.Onedollarisslangilycalledaloony.LearningFocusnThelayoutofthestorynThecharactersinthestorynThesymbolisminthestorynThescenerydescription.KeywordsandExpressionsnpebble(n.):asmallstonewornsmoothandround,asbytheactionofwaternscrub(adj.):short,stuntednchokecherry(n.):aNorthAmericanwildcherrytree
12、nthicket(n.):athickgrowthofshrubs,underbrushorsmalltreesnshack(n.):Am.asmallhouseorcabinthatiscrudelybuiltandfurnished;shantynchink(v.):closeupthechinksin.nthigh(n.):partoftheleginmanandothervertebratesbetweenthekneeandthehip;regionofthethighbone,orfemurnchaos(n.):extremeconfusionordisorder.nlean-t
13、o(n.):ashedwithaone-sloperoof,theupperendoftheraftersrestingagainstanexternalsupport,suchastreesorthewallofabuilding.nwarp(v.):bend,curveortwistoutofshape;distortnstrand(n.):anyofthebundlesofthread,fiber,wire,etc.thataretwistedtogethertoformalengthofstring,rope,orcable.nbarbedwire(n.):Am.strandsofwi
14、retwistedtogetherwithbarbsatregular,closeintervals,usedforfencingormilitarybarriers.npatois(n.):Fr.aformoflanguage,differingfromtheacceptedstandard,asaprovincialorlocaldialect.nobscenities(n.):pl.offensive,repulsiveremarksorideasnherring(n.):anyofafamilyofbonyfishes,includingherring,shad,etc.nlard(n
15、):themeltedfatofhogs(esp.theinnerabdominalfat)nbruise(n.):injurethesurfaceortheoutsideofsothatthereisspoilage,abrasion,denting,etc.nbrawl(n.):arough,noisyquarrelorfightnsporadic(adj.):notconstantorregularntuberculosis(n.):结核.ngrimy(adj.):coveredwithorfullofgrime;verydirtynflare(v.):showsuddenincrea
16、sedheat,angerorviolence(up)ndickens(interj.):colloq.devil;deuce.ncontagious(adj.):spreadbydirectorindirectcontact(saidofdisease)nnit(n.):theeggofalouse,orsimilarinsect.ncameo(n.):acarvinginreliefoncertainstratifiedgemsorshellssothattheraiseddesign,oftenaheadinprofile,isusuallyinadifferentcolorfromth
17、ebackground.nmauve(adj.):palepurplenstifle(v.):suppress;repress;holdback;checknmuse(v.):thinkdeeplyandatlength.nmiraculously(adv.):likeamiraclenaustere(adj.):veryplain;lackingornamentorluxury.nfiligree(n.):adelicate,lacelikeornamentalworkofintertwinedwireofgold,silver,etc.nspruce(n.):云杉nfern(n.):蕨类植
18、物.nraspberry(n.):覆盆子,树莓miniature(adj.):onordoneonaverysmallscale;diminutive;minute.ntame(adj.):changedfromawildstate,domesticatedstate,asanimalstrainedforusebymanoraspetsnmoose(n.):thelargeanimalofthedeerfamily,nativetotheN.Americanantler(n.):thebranched,deciduoushornofanimalofthedeerfamily.nfissure
19、v.):breakintoparts;crackorsplitapartnmeticulously(adv):extremelyorexcessivelycarefullyaboutdetails,finicallyntote(v.):Am.colloq.carryorhaul,esp.inthearmsorontheback.nscuff(v.):scrape(theground,floor,etc.)withthefeetnbizarre(adj.):oddinmanner,appearance,etc.;grotesque;queer;fantastic;eccentricnproph
20、etess(n.):afemaleprophet.nmpart(v.):makeknown;tell;revealnwhippoorwill(n.):北美夜鹰ncoyote(n.):(产于北美西部大草原的)小狼,郊狼,丛林狼.nlore(n.):knowledgeoflearning;specifically,alltheknowledgeofaparticulargrouporhavingtodowithaparticularsubject,esp.thatofatraditionalnaturendogged(adj.):notgivinginreality;persistent;stub
21、born.namber(n.):abrownish-yellowtranslucentcolor琥珀色nululate(v.):wail,lament.naeon(n.):(=eon)anextremelylong,indefiniteperiodoftime,thousandsandthousandsofyears;abillionyears.nchipmunk(n.):金花鼠(北美产的一种小松鼠),豹鼠nbirch(n.):桦木nimmerse(v.):plungeintoaspecifiedstate;absorbdeeply;engross.njukebox(n.):acoin-ope
22、ratedrecordplayerusedinrestaurants,bars,etc.nchrome(n.):铬;铬合金.nastound(v.):bewilderwithsuddensurprise;astonishgreatly;amaze.nstolid(adj.):havingorshowingnoemotionorsensibility;impassivencarmine(n.):aredorpurplish-redpigmentobtainedmainlyfromcochinealnfrizzily(adj.):frizzly,fullofcoveredwithsmall,tig
23、htcurls.nperm(v.):colloq.giveapermanentwavetonteeter(v.):totter;wobble;wavernjerkwater(adj.):colloq.smallandunimportant.nconfide(v.):tellortalkaboutasasecretnblur(v.):makeorbecomedimordullndespise(v.):lookdownonwithcontemptandscorn.nclassy(adj.):slangfirst-class,esp.instyleormanner;elegant;finenpert
24、urb(v.):causetobealarmed,agitated,orupset;disturbortroublegreatlyngauche(adj.):Fr.lackinggrace,esp.socialgrace;awkward;tactless.nslattern(n.):womanwhoiscarelessandsloppyinherhabits,appearance,work,etc.nbrew(n.):abeveragethathasbeenbrewed.ngetmixedupinsth.:(infml)becomeinvolvedinorconnectedwithsth.nI
25、dontwanttogetmixedupinyouraffairs.nhitout(atsb./sth.):attacksb./sth.vigorouslyorviolentlywithwordsorblowsnInarousingspeechthePresidenthitoutagainstthetradeunion.nflareup:(ofanillness)recurorshowsuddenburstoflight,angerorviolencenHeflaresupattheslightestprovocationnMybacktroublehasflaredupagain.nwinh
26、andsdown:(infml.)wineasily,byalargemarginnThelocalteamwonhandsdown.nsetabout:startdoingsth.nIdontknowhowtosetaboutthisjob.ExplanationoftheText1.withafaceunfamiliarwithlaughter.nwholookeddeadlyserious,neverlaughed.2.SometimesoldJules,inaSaturday-nightbrawl.nSometimesoldJules,orhissonLazaruswouldgetin
27、volvedinarough,noisyquarrelorfightonaSaturdaynightaftermuchdrinkingofliquor.3.Herattendanceschoolworknegligible.nSheoftenmissedherclassesandhadlittleinterestinschoolwork.4.Sheexistedformeembarrassingpresence.nIonlyknewherasapersonwhowouldmakeotherpeoplefeelillatease.AsfarasIamconcerned,herpresencewo
28、uldonlymakeotherpeoplefeelillatease/uncomfortable.5.Shedweltwithinmyscopeofvision.nShelivedandmovedsomewherewithinmyrangeofsight(AlthoughIsawher,Ipaidlittleattentiontoher.).6.Ifitcomestonitsornot.nIfmymotherhadtomakeachoicebetweenGrandmotherMacleodandPiquette,shewouldcertainlychoosethelatterwithouth
29、esitation,nomatterwhetherthelatterhadnitsornot.nYoucouldlookoutthewindowthesuncaughtit.n从别墅的窗外往外看,透过一层云杉树叶织成的丝帘,可以看见碧绿的湖面在太阳的映照下波光粼粼。.7.Herdefiantface,terrifyinghope.nNormally,shewasadefensiveperson,andherfacewasguardedasifitwaswearingamask.Butwhenshewassayingthis,therewasanexpressionofchallengeonhe
30、rface,which,forabriefmoment,becameunguardedandunmasked.Andinhereyestherewasakindofhopewhichwassointensethatitfilledpeoplewithterror.8.shelookedlikeamessanyoldhow.nShelookedamess,totellyouthetruth;shewasadirty,untidywoman,dressedinaverycarelessway.9.Shewasupofcourse.nShewasbroughtincourtseveraltimes,
31、becauseshewasdrunkanddisturbingthepublicpeace,asonecouldexpect.DivisionoftheTextnPartI.Paras1-2nIntroductionofthenovel,when,where,who,etc.Thegeneralbackground.nPartII.Para.3-70nThewholestorynPartIII.Para.71-75nAnalogy.nSection1.Para.3-15nIntroducingPiquette.nSection2.Para.16-47nDaystogetherwithPique
32、tteatDiamondLakenSection3.Para.48-62nSecondmeetingwithPiquetteseveralyearslaternSection4.Para.63-70nPiquettesdeath.Summary.TheWritingStylenarealisticdepictionwhichrendersanobjectiveratherthananidealizedviewofthemarginalizedethnicsnlyricismoflanguage/thedescriptionofthesettingncolloquialismandidioms/
33、thedialoguesbetweencharacters.nitssymbolismntheparalleloftheloonsandPiquettentheloonssingonlyatnightnPiquetehidesherfeelingsandwishesfromothersnthehumansdestroyingtheloonsnaturalhabitatntheinvasionoftheIndiansterritory.nThebirdsbecomefamiliarwithanewenvironmentneartheirinvadersandhavethechancetoadap
34、ttoit.nPiquettemarriesawhitemanandhasthechancetostartanewlife.nthebirdschancefailsnPiquetteattemptfails.nTheiroldwayhasbeendestroyedbythenewcomers.nTheloonsdisappearasnatureisruinedbycivilization.nPiquettecannotsucceedinfindingherpositioninthiswhite-dominatingsocietyanddies.nAnalogy:The comparison o
35、f two things,which are alike in several respects,for the purpose of explaining or clarifying some unfamiliar or difficult idea or object by showing how the idea or object is similar to some familiar one.nAnalogyoftheloonsandPiquetteThe loonsPiquetteLive in Diamond LakeLives in a clearing at the cent
36、re of the thicketSound at nightSeldom speak Rarely respond or went out Ululating&plaintive sound with a touch of chilling mockery Try to change her situation by marrying a white manCannot escape the human invadersCannot escape the white invadersDisappeared died.nAnalogyoftheloonsandPiquettescharacte
37、rsThe loonsPiquetteShyDont like crowdsA girl who is shy and doesnt like to mingle with other people.Harmless She prefers solitude and wants to live a harmless life.If someone tries to get close to them they would dive in the water and no one can predict where they would come out.If someone tries to
38、get close to her and forces her life in a different way,she would leave that place and nobody can predict where she would go.RhetoricalDevicesnSimilenGrandmotherMacLeod,herdelicatelyfeaturedfaceas rigid as a cameo(para12).nAtnightthelakewaslike black glass with a streak of amberwhichwasthepathofthem
39、oon(para39).nMetaphornThroughthefiligree ofthesprucetrees(Para17)nItseemedtomedaughter of the forest,a kind of junior prophetess of the wilds(para22).nMetonymynPlaintive,andyetwithaqualityofchillingmockery,thosevoicesbelongedtoaworldseparatedbyaeonsfromour neat world of summer cottages and the light
40、ed lamps of home(para40).nHyperbolendressesthatwerealwaysmiles too long(para3).nPersonificationnTwogreysquirrelswerestillthere,gossiping(para17).nTransferredepithetnMybrothermeticulouslyturningitroundandroundinhissmallandcurioushands(Para17).nIwasashamed,ashamedofmyowntimidity,thefrightened tendency
41、tolooktheotherway(Para58).nAnalogynPerhapstheyhadbeenunabletofindsuchaplace.havingceasedtocareanylongerwhethertheylivedornot.Exercises.ExercisesnOral PresentationnMakeafive-minutepresentationinclassbasedonyourresearchorclosereadingofthetext.nSuggestedtopics:nMargaretLaurencenSumupthestoryofPiquettei
42、nyourownwordsnSymbolism,in“TheLoons”.nREAD,THINKANDCOMMENTnBelowarethefirstfewparagraphsfromtheshortstory“HowIMetMyHusband”bytheCanadianwriterAliceMonro.Readthepassageandbepreparedtorespondtothequestions:Wheredidthestorytakeplace?Whathappenedatthebeginningofthestory?Whoisthestorynarratedby?Whatcanyo
43、uinferaboutthenarrator?.nThestorytookplaceinthecountryside.Thestorybeganbydescribinghowasmallplanepaintedredandsilverlandedacrosstheroadwherethefairgroundsusedtobe.ThespotwasnearthehouseofthePeeblesandsotheyheardtheloudsoundoflanding.ThenarratorwasayounggirlwhoworkedasamaidforthePeebles.nShecamefrom
44、afarmersfamilyanddroppedoutofhighschoolbecauseofpoorperformance.Mr.Peebles,whowasananimaldoctor,metheratherhomewhenhewashelpingherfatherscowdelivertwins,andthoughtshewasaclevergirlandcouldbeahelptohiswifewhokepthouseandlookedaftertwochildren.Thenarratorwasfifteenthenanditwasherfirsttimeawayfromhome.






