高一上册英语作文建议信教师用.ppt

书面表达 假设你是Miss Wang，你的朋友Xiao Dong今年刚上高中。他来信向你倾诉他不善沟通，在新的环境没有什么朋友,也不知该如何结交新的朋友，感觉很孤单。请你用英语给他回一封信，给他提一些建议。要点如下：1.对他的现状表示关心；2.提出几点交友建议（至少三点）。要求：1.词数100 2.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。课本中Suggestion Letter建议信建议信2.建议信的内容建议信的内容1.建议信的格式建议信的格式3.建议信的注意事项建议信的注意事项Dear Xiao Dong,I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends,but the situation will be easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you:First,you can go and talk to people standing on their own,and I am sure you will soon have a new friend because that people may also be lonely.Second,you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,which will make you find people who have the same interests as you.Finally,you should try to join in a discussion,letting people know how friendly you are.I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours,Miss Wang Dear Xiao Dong,I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends,but the situation will be easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you:First,you can go and talk to people standing on their own,and I am sure you will soon have a new friend because that people may also be lonely.Second,you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,which will make you find people who have the same interests as you.Finally,you should try to join in a discussion,letting people know how friendly you are.I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours,Miss Wang 建议信的内容开开头头：收收信信感感受受和和写写信信的的目目的的；（包包括括存在的问题）；存在的问题）；主体：主体：分条写出建议，分条写出建议，附带原因附带原因；结结尾尾：表表达达希希望望;（希希望望自自己己的的建建议议能能够够对对对对方方有所帮助）有所帮助）课本P7.2主体部分的建议该如何写呢？主体部分的建议该如何写呢？首先，可以通过首先，可以通过列提纲的方式列提纲的方式归纳写作要归纳写作要点点 打开课本打开课本P7,模仿第一题，小组讨论三分钟，写出三模仿第一题，小组讨论三分钟，写出三条建议和原因条建议和原因 其次，把归纳出的要点连接成句。其次，把归纳出的要点连接成句。同学们试着用第二题蓝色部分的句型，把第一题的ideas与why连成句子。Dear Xiao Dong,I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends,but the situation will be easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you:First,you can go and talk to people standing on their own,and I am sure you will soon have a new friend because that people may also be lonely.Second,you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes,which will make you find people who have the same interests as you.Finally,you should try to join in a discussion,letting people know how friendly you are.I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours,Miss Wang 注意事项注意事项1.合理安排建议信的内容结构。2.掌握建议信的语言特点。语气要诚恳，有礼貌；建议内容要详尽具体，不能含糊其辞；可提供的建议通常是多个，因此要注意各个建议之间的衔接。3.提出建议是，适当使用情态动词表达自己的情感。4.时态，多用一般现在时和一般将来时。5.熟悉建议信的常用句型。文章整体文章整体First.Second.Thirdly.Finally.First of all.Secondly.Thirdly.Finally.First.Next.Besides.Finally.文章内部文章内部Not only.,but also.However,in spite of,otherwises,whats more=further moreon the one hand.,on the other hand.instead of衔接单词短语衔接单词短语开头开头I am very sorry to hear that.You have asked me for my advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions.I am writing in reply to常用句型过渡句过渡句 （即第一段最后一句话）（即第一段最后一句话）My suggestion are as follows.In my opinion,some effective measures must be taken to solve these problems.They can be listed as follow.This problem will be more serious unless we take some effective measures.提出建议时常用的句型：提出建议时常用的句型：In my opinion,it would be beneficial ifI would recommend thatThere is a suggestion as to(关于关于)I suggest that结尾：结尾：I hope you will find my suggestions/advice/helpful/practical/usefulI would appreciate it if you take my suggestion into consideration.假设你是李梅，你的好朋友苏珊前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件。（1）学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会。（2）多交一些朋友，友情会使你忘记孤独。（3）积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。词数：100字左右，可适当增加细节。课下作业课下作业Dear Suan,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in American,but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.Firstly,you should work hard at English,which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.Secondly,why not make some friends?They can help you to know more about American,and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness.Thirdly,it would be a good idea if you took an active part in all kinds of activities,which will help to make life more interesting.By doing these,you will be happier with your new life soon.I hope you will find these ideas/suggestions useful/helpful.Yours,Li Mei Bye此课件下载可自行编辑修改，供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！