高三英语作文公开课如何使你的作文颜值与才华齐飞.pptx

The Beauty of Writing欣赏一个人，欣赏一个人，始于颜值，始于颜值，敬于才华敬于才华,How about a composition?欣赏一篇文章欣赏一篇文章 始于始于“颜值颜值”敬于敬于“才华才华”作文五档：（作文五档：（从教师阅卷从教师阅卷印象角度印象角度划分）划分）n漂漂亮亮（2125分）n有模有样（1620分）n马马虎虎（1115分）n稀里糊涂（610分）n一塌糊涂 （05分）颜值代表颜值代表唐美林唐美林 22.5黄佳倩黄佳倩 21高“颜值”的文章能够评委老师留下好印象，先声夺人。但是“好文章”却不仅限于只有“颜值”，.才华才华词汇词汇句型句型衔接衔接过渡过渡回顾作文题目回顾作文题目假设你是李华，你的美国笔友假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Andy 即即将到你所在的中学做一年的交换生，将到你所在的中学做一年的交换生，想提前了解一些情况，故向你求助。想提前了解一些情况，故向你求助。请给他写一封回信，提供有关请给他写一封回信，提供有关天气天气、当地饮食习惯当地饮食习惯、学校生活学校生活方面的信息。方面的信息。高级表达高级表达过渡词过渡词非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句谚语谚语宾语从句宾语从句动名词做主语动名词做主语唐美林唐美林 22.5It goes without saying that our classmate is extremely warm-hearted and open-minded.I firmly believe that you will have a colorful and meaningful school life here.陈梅陈梅And our school often hold activities to enrich our school life,so we have a meaningful and colorful school life.To promote our friendship,I will keep a good relationship with you.I believe you can fit in our school life陈小露陈小露怎样能使我们的文章颜值与才华齐飞？Tips 1：颜值：颜值1、分段要合理。绝大多数高考范文以及高分作文都是分为23段的，也有少数是4-5段的。2、书写要美观。书写要符合英文书写习惯，字母的大小，字母之间的距离要匀称，尽量减少涂改、增补的现象。Tips 2：词汇：词汇1、高级词汇代替低级词汇chance-opportunity;so-thereforeimportant-vital 2、短语代替单个单词important-be of great importance should-be supposed to help sb-do sb a favorvisit-pay a visit to可参考三维设计可参考三维设计P136页页Tips 3：句型：句型定语从句定语从句宾语从句宾语从句非谓语动词非谓语动词被动句被动句名词性从句名词性从句强调句强调句With 的复合结构的复合结构常用谚语常用谚语省略句省略句倒装句倒装句.There is no doubt that.It goes without saying that毫无疑问毫无疑问,There is no doubt that/It goes without saying that more and more students choose to study abroad.More and more students choose to study abroad.固定句型：同位语从句固定句型：同位语从句More attention should be given to teaching and learning English.Measures should be taken to protect our mother river.固定句型：被动句固定句型：被动句More attention should be given toMeasures should be taken toIt is believed that.It is universally acknowledged that.人们认为人们认为 It is universally acknowledged that health is more important than wealth.Health is more important than wealth.固定句型：主语从句固定句型：主语从句Only in this way can sb do.Only by doing.can sb do.只有通过这种方式我们才能只有通过这种方式我们才能.Only in this way can you solve this problem.Only by taking exercise can we keep healthy.固定句型：倒装句固定句型：倒装句If I were you,I would If I were you,I would take part in moreactivities.固定句型：虚拟语气固定句型：虚拟语气It is high time that sb did sth/should do sthIt is high time that we paid/should pay more attention to our environment 1、It is/was+被强调部分被强调部分+that/who+其余成分其余成分固定句型：强调句固定句型：强调句2、It is/was not until that3、用、用do来强调动词来强调动词I believe you can do it.I do believe you can do it.Our teacher always help us when we are in trouble.It is our teacher that always help us when we are in trouble.我认为我认为.I am convinced that.As far as I am concerned,.From my point of view,.From where I stand,谚语格言名言1、A friend in need is a friend indeed2、Where there is a will,there is a way.3、When in Roam,do as a Romans do.4、Practice makes perfect.5、No pains,no gains.6、Failure is the mother of success.7、Roam was not build in a day.8、Every coin has two sides.As an old saying goes,“”firstly,secondly,thirdly,then,finally,in the end,whats more,moreover,more importantly,besides，in additionone on hand,on the other hand，on the contrary，therefore，as a result，in other words，as you know,as we all know,generally speaking,as a matter of factto tell you the truth Tips 4：衔接过渡：衔接过渡可能整篇不完美，也许有一个段落应得称赞；可能整篇不完美，也许有一个段落应得称赞；没有一个段落完美，也许有一个句子值得肯定；没有一个段落完美，也许有一个句子值得肯定；没有一句子完美，也许有一个词用得精彩。没有一句子完美，也许有一个词用得精彩。Never give up!As long as you keep trying,you can succeed.Have a try:Dear Andy,Im glad to hear that you are coming to study with us for a year as an exchange student.Its my great honor to provide you some information about our city and our school,hoping it can help you.There is no doubt that our country is different from America,therefore it is necessary for you to respect the local custom and get accustomed to the life here.In the first place,the weather here is changeable.It is wise for you to take an umbrella when you go out.In addition,our city has a reputation for its delicious food.Not only can you enjoy the tasty seafood,but also various fruits.However,we all use chopsticks,which is extremely difficult for foreigners.Last but not least,our school is a fantastic place with many after class activities.our teachers and classmates are rather kind and friendly,you can turn to them for help.Looking forward to meeting you.Yours,Li Hua欣赏一个人，始于颜值，敬于才欣赏一个人，始于颜值，敬于才华，合与性格，久于善良，终于华，合与性格，久于善良，终于人品。人品。I hope all of you can be a better person.Home work nPolish your composition.