大学英语B写作辅导.ppt

大学英语,(B,级,),网考写作部分辅导,*,考试大纲,解题技巧,1),误区,2),建议,分类举例,写信或电子邮件,(e-mail),本资料由,学长特供,编辑发布（,2011.08.16,），更多相关资料可关注百度,-,学长特供,(,称呼,)Dear Janet,Dear Julie,Dear Cathy,(,开头,),Im writing to tell you a piece of news that,/I havent heard from you since graduation./I havent heard from you since you leave the city./I havent received your letter for a long time.,(,接下来,)How are you?/I miss you very much since we say good bye to each other./I hope everything is OK with you.,(,正文,),(,结尾,)I will be very glad if you/I believe we will have a good time!,范文,1,可能用到的词汇,:leave the school,work as a secretary,graduate from the school,get on well with my boss and workmates,humorous,be always happy when we stay together,be very glad,pay a visit to me,be free,talk about our college life,Yours,提示,:,该文注意时态转换,涉及毕业以前发生的事用过去,时,现在正在进行的用现在时,.,范文,2,写一封电子邮件给你的以前的一位同学,:,告诉对方你最近将出去旅游,了解对方所在旅游地的景点,请对方给予帮助安排,范文,2,可能用到的词汇,:I will travel to,have a good time in,be not familiar with the city,do me a favor to introduce some places of interest to me,thank you for booking the hotel for me,if you are convenient,looking forward to the meet.,提示,:,该文涉及将来的旅游计划,所以多用将来时,提及现在的情况再用现在时,范文,3,写一封信给你的以前的一位同学,:,了解对方近来的情况,通知对方同学将在元旦举行聚会,请对方参加,范文,3,可能用到的词汇：,find a satisfactory job in,，,want to find a good job there,，,our former classmates,plan to,hold a New Years Day party in,at that time,our head teacher,attend,be pretty happy,take part in the party,I believe we will have a good time!,提示：该文在提及近来情况时建议用现在时或现在完成时，提及元旦聚会时建议用将来时,范文,5,给你的一个朋友写一封信,:,你的近况,请对方帮你购买英语语法书,邀请对方方便时来访,范文,5,可能用到的词汇：,enter a new school,meet many new teachers and classmates,，,have been their good friends,，,are quite friendly,，,In addition,buy an English grammar book for me,，,find,，,my grammar is poor,，,because,，,cant catch up with the teacher,，,in the class,，,have time,pay a visit to my home,，,feel happy,，,Love,提示：该文多为现在时，请人帮忙用语客气,题目,:My Home,描述你家的位置,各个房间的功能,表达你对你们家居条件的态度,My home is a newly-built house in the north of the city.We have three rooms in addition to the kitchen and bathroom.The first room is the main room or living room.It is for having meals,relaxing,reading,watching TV and so on.It is the busiest room in the house.The second room is my daughters bedroom.She sleeps and dresses there.The third room belongs to my wife and me.It seems quite spacious because we have little furniture.We sleep,prepare lessons and generally relax there.I think my room is cozy and I like my home.,热点话题,1,Internet,可能用到的词汇,:modern society,send a message to,shop on line,chat on line,save time,communicate within seconds,结构,:,总,-,分,-,总,1),首先提及,Internet,的重要性,2),然后逐条罗列其优点,(,学生根据自己水平也可谈其缺点,),3),最后重申,Internet,的重要,(,内容重复第一句,句式变换,),The Internet has become a symbol of modern life.For example,through the Internet,we can send a message to a friend or a relative in other cities or countries within few seconds;we can talk to each other or even see each other;we can do shopping online;we can stay home and do business with foreign companies.In fact,we can do many things more easily and more cheaply using the Internet,So,I cannot imagine what society would be like without the Internet.,I love the Internet very much,.,热点话题,2,健康,(keep healthy),可能用到的词汇,:a healthy body,keep a balanced diet,eat more fruit and vegetables,take regular exercises,swimming,jogging,riding,go to bed early and get up early,keep in a good mood,结构,:,总,-,分,-,总,1),首先提及健康很重要,2),然后说明怎样保持健康,(,此段注意逻辑性,),3),最后再次点题,(,内容重复第一句,句式变换,),热点话题,3,城镇生活由于乡村生活,(town life is better than country life),可能用到的词汇,:convenient,move around easily,shop in a big shopping mall,nosier,air pollution,difficult to park cars,cost more to live in town,结构,:,仍用总,-,分,-,总的形式,但应根据作者自己的观点,举例说明城镇生活的优缺点,两者的比例根据自己的观点进行取舍,热点话题,4,介绍你的家乡,可能用到的词汇,:mountain city,night scene,beautiful lights,hot pot,high temperature,charming girls,dirty street,，,traffic jam,结构,:,仍用总,-,分,-,总的形式,可以先点题指出你的家乡是重庆,然后逐一介绍重庆的特色,最后以一句你热爱你的家乡结尾,热点话题,5,介绍你的爱好：比如说听音乐,可能用到的词汇listen to music,relax yourself,make friends,enjoy the music,musician,bring people closer,pop music,classic music,country music,blue music,rock music,结构,:,仍用总,-,分,-,总的形式,可以先点题指出你的爱好是听音乐,然后说明自己为什么喜欢它,最后以一句再次点题,附录,-8.13,日给群内同学们的第二次复习指导方向。,今天是,8,月,13,日，距离,9.8,日的第一场还有,26,天，为了让你的复习有些方向做以下说明。,这个时候想问大家的问题是：我们拿什么迎接考试？用了多少时间做了多少准备？如果你还什么都没看，可以看看,8.12,日群共享的资料了。,能顺利通过考试无非二种方式：,1.,温习，,2.xx,。大家的基础大部分不是很好，很多同学都在想着用第二种方式。那我就先说说,xx,。,都知道,xx,最方便，带上,U,盘或是光盘，把小,x,拷在电脑上，半小时就交卷，或是把小,x,内容用小,6,号字打印出来，带进去。只是大家要根据自己的实际情况，我们不以点盖面的说，不是所有的地方都松，也不是所有的地方都紧。有些地方很严，比如说北京，上海，江苏的一些市中心，有些地方比较松，如郊区，安徽，河南等一些地方，所以如果保定主意要,x,，务必要问下环境。如果你百分百确定你能,x,到，我事先恭喜你通过了。,如果不能,x,，在这剩余的,26,天，还是要做一些准备。还是按卷子题型的部分来说。,8.12,日更新完毕，已经发布在群内共享,更新内容和复习说明如下：,1.,交机英语，本次更新后将范围缩减，一般基础只需要看红色和蓝色的,108,个题目即可，多看看中文的翻译和答案，了解一些常规的用语，比如问是否介意，一般说,NO,，除非是吸烟，比如看到,Congratulations,回答句是,thank you,，等客套话还是不难掌握的，这部分很容易复习，,15,分不难拿。,2.,阅读，阅读分阅读,1,和阅读,2,，阅读,1,是第一篇，为正误判断题，更新后给出,33,篇几率较大的题目，如果你可以当小说一样把大概的意思看看，相信对你会有帮助。如果不想看可以看我们考前提供的。阅读,2,中的,18,篇会考其中一篇，都做了中文阅读，可以通过记一些关键词来掌握，比如,French,（法国）看到这个单词就能想到是说法国大革命，看到,Maria,就知道是说一个女孩在机场发生的事情。然后看题目的中文意思，把错误的回答删除，只保留正常的答案来记忆。,15,分也不难拿的。,3.,词汇，这部分题目大家需要靠熟悉来记忆，只能多看才能掌握。,4.,完形，这部分有些同学问是不是我给错了，怎么选项都是一样的，解释：短文中共包含,5,个未完成的句子，针对每个句子中空缺部分请从,A.B.C.D.E,五个选项中选出正确选项。跟以前的变化：,1,、由,10,道题变成,5,道小题。,2,、,5,道小题共有,5,个选项，每个选项分别填入一个空中。换言之，就是选词填空，整体难度降低。,5.,翻译，本次更新增加了一些，现在比较完整，建议能稍作准备。看到一个句子的时候，先找出不认识的单词，然后再尝试自己翻译下，再把正确的读上一遍，多看就能掌握。,6.,写作，更新后将范围基本框定在,18,篇中，但万事也有意外，只能说如果你一般基础就看这,18,篇几率较高的就好了。,建议复习顺序：,首先复习英译汉，英译汉是最容易被记忆。建议打印出来，有时间就看看。,其次看交际用语，都非常简单，通过练习来加强语感。,第三看阅读二，因为一定考，所以不能不掌握。,第四看词汇与结构，标注红色的,45,题单独看看。,第五看看,18,篇作文。,阅读理解一和完形填空希望有基础的就看看。,如何复习写作,一写作常见误区,1),审题有误，作文跑题。,建议大家将作文范文出现的题目通读一遍，至少要知道自己要写的题目是什么意思,2),字数过多,内容混乱。,“言多必失”建议大家作文控制在,100,字左右，有利于给老师留下一个完整简洁的印象，提高得分。,二写作技巧：,1,、要熟悉常考的作文题目和范文。,2,、遇到不完全一样的题目，或者题目要求与所复习的内容不完全一致，不要慌张，尽量找类似的题目模仿；,3,、写信和通知时要遵循固定的格式。,4,、第一段一定要点题；,5,、如果作文没有具体要求，也最好分为三段。,抓紧时间做有针对性的复习。功夫不负有心人,一分耕耘一分收获。,