初中三年级英语课件作文写过去的事.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,English Writing,英语书面表达训练,写过去的事,主要特点,记叙,为主,稍加,议论,旁带,说明,空间顺序,时间顺序,能力要求,逻辑顺序,主要问题,要点,不全,线索,不清,原因：步骤不对,书面表达,六 步 法,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素,:5,W,1,H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为,何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节,连贯 呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面不工整扣,5,分,课堂练习,请用,六步法,写一篇短文,五个“,W”,一个“,H”,第一步 审题,认真读题然后找出,把答案写在题中相应的位置,书面表达经典示例,假设你是李华，在美国探亲。,2000,年,2,月,8,日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。,1,、目击者应该准确报告事实；,2,、词数,100,左右；,3,、结尾已为你写好。,_,About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.,Li,Hua,附图,1,2,3,4,At 7:15 on the morning of February 8,2000,I saw a woman,driving a car,hit the man,in the street,.,第二步 抓要点,一幅图，一要点,时态,直达,语态,到位,介,/,副词,紧随,抓要点，配动词,第三步 扩展成句,把要点变成完整的句子。,注意使用介,/,副词,第四步 连句成文,增加细节 呼应首尾,句与句相连,词与词搭配,第五步 查错改错,主谓一致吗？,时态正确吗？,时态正确吗？,有“,半截话,”吗？,第六步 誊写,卷面整洁不一定加分，,卷面潦草一定要扣分！,作业选评,要改进吗？,为什么？,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,At 7:15 a.m.,on the morning of,Feb.8th,2000,I,was heading,east,on the south side of,the Park Road,taking,my morning walk,as usual,.,I,saw,an old man,on the other side of,the road,outside the gate of,the City Park,.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,He,was just crossing,the street,when,a car,on the 3rd Street,made,a sudden right turn,at the crossing,.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,The car,was,so,fast,that,the old man,even,didnt,have time to dodge,and,the car,hit,the elderly hard,.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,I,thought,the driverwould have stopped to help,but,she,didnt,.,Instead,she,just,drove off,leaving,the old man still,lying,on the ground,in pain,.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,Fortunately,I,noted down,the details,:,it,was,a yellow car,the plate number,of,which,was,AC864,and,the driver,was,a young lady,.,After,that,I,went over to,check out,the old man.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,About two minutes later,I,stopped,a passing car,and,took,the old man to the nearest hospital.Li,Hua,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,图1,图2,图3,年轻妇女,颜色：黄,图4,AC864,小结,审题，抓点,造句，成文,改错，誉写,作业,复习本课要点,背诵精彩范文,Thank you！,请不吝赐教！,