1、单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,观点、建议和措施,No one can believe that the over 6,300-kilometer Great Wall might disappear some day.Believe it or not,the Great Wall is being destroyed by people.Less than 20 percent of the Great Wall built in the Ming Dynasty is still perfect,but about 80 perce
2、nt is in danger.The Great Wall can be called“great”mostly because of its amazing length.But we should realize that the length was made up of one brick at a time.If we do nothing to save the Great Wall,it will become a series of separate wasteland rather than a historic site.,The Great Wall is actual
3、ly a series of walls built and rebuilt by different dynasties over the past 2,000 years.It began in the rule of Chinas first emperor,Qin Shihuang of the Qin Dynasty(221 BC206 BC),and lasted into the Ming Dynasty.The parts built before the Ming Dynasty have nearly disappeared.The bricks on the Great
4、Wall are carried off by countryside people to build their houses,sheep corrals and pigsties.Some were taken away to build roads.Bricks carved with peoples names are put away as remembrances.Rubbish is spread over the battlements.The bricks can be sold for 15 yuan per tractor load.Those who destroyed
5、 and are destroying the Wall know its name,but are not clear about its cultural meaning.It will take a long time to let them know this.The local farmers not only carried off the body of the Wall but also dug out the entire base.,1.,你是如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象的,你对这个现象的态度,文化遗产的重要性,It is such a pity that some
6、 other valuable and important relics in our country have been destroying as well.Why are some people doing that so foolishly,?,Because the local people are not aware of their importance.,2.,保护文化遗产有何意义,Cultural heritages are left to us by our ancestors and are also symbols of their wisdoms,which play
7、ed a very important role in history.Therefore,it is our responsibility to protect the environment.,3.,保护我国的文化遗产的建议。,1.Improve peoples awareness,2.Government&law,3.,总结:,Only in this way can we,To well protect the environment,I think we should take the following reasons.Firstly,we should make some peo
8、ple who lack of cultural knowledge know about the importance of the historic relics.Destroying them means destroying ourselves.Secondly,the government should take some measures to protect them,and if necessary,laws will be made to punish those who destroy them on purpose.Only in this way can we make
9、 our history richer and richer.,现象说明过渡语小结,1.In recent days,we have to face one problem-A,which is becoming more and more serious.First,-(,说明的现状,),Second,-(,举例进一步说明现状,).,2.Currently,there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)_,作文题目,_.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a re
10、sult,we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.,观点说明过渡语小结,表示赞同:,I firmly support the view that,.There are two factors contributing to this point.In the first place,.In the second place,.Therefore,theres no doubt that.,我坚决支持这个观点,有两个因素让我持这一观点。第一,第二,因此,毫无疑问,(2),As far as I am
11、 concerned,I cant agree more with,.I hold my view for the reason.So it goes without saying that.,就我而言,我完全同意,其理由是,因此,不用说,(,3),I fully agree with the statement that,.mainly because.,我完全赞同,主要是因为,(4),From my point of view,I am in favour of the idea that,.,依我之见,我赞成,表示反对:,(1),Personally speaking,I strongl
12、y argue against the idea that,.It is not only because.,but also because.,就本人来说,强烈反对,不但因为,而且也因为,(2),To be frank,I can not support the opinion,.My argument for this view goes as follows.For one thing,.For another,.,坦率地说,我不支持这一观点。其论据如下,一是,二是,(3),From my point of view,I oppose the idea/statement that,.F
13、or one thing,.For another,.,依我看,我反对,一是,二是,小试牛刀,你如何看待现代人生活压力大的现象。,你如何看待“父母接送孩子”这种中国式教育的现象。,你对,父母越来越喜欢,用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法,你如何看待现代人生活压力大的现象。,Agree:,a power of success in life;,a kind of motivation.,stay young in attitude.,Disagree:,have an bad effect on health.,endanger peoples life,an obstacle of developmen
14、t,Currently,there is a widespread concern over the increasing pressure among modern people.It is really an important concern to every one of us.,Personally speaking,I strongly argue against the idea that,stress can only be harmful to our life.It is not only because pressure,which is a kind of motiva
15、tion for us,can help us stay young,but also because is a power for us to success.,3.,你对,父母越来越喜欢,用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法,Some schools,teachers and parents give their students or kids money as a stimulating means in order to encourage them to do what they should do effectively,this phenomenon is common in recent
16、 years and it is welcome by most of the young.I dont think it is an effective way,on the contrary it may lead to the opposite result.,原因说明过渡语,(1)The reason why.is that,的原因是,(2)There are three reasons for,有三个原因,(3)There are several reasons that contribute to.,有几个原因会促成,(6)Reasons for this are varied.S
17、ome people think.Others think.,其原因是多方面的,有人认为,另外一些人认为,(7)I firmly support the view that.because.In addition,.,我坚决赞同,的看法,因为,,此外,1.,分析极端天气出现的原因。,二、超级仿写,1.,指出现象与引出原因,Reasons for,extreme temperatures,are varied.,分析原因,For one thing,humans activities like burning fossil fuels produce carbon dioxide,which m
18、ake the globe warmer,causing the global temperature to go up.,For another,people s cutting down trees that can absorb large quantities of carbon dioxide for furniture also contributes to the warming of the earth,which gives rise to extreme temperatures.,小试牛刀,1.,分析洋快餐在中国受欢迎的原因,2.,学生考试作弊的原因;,3.,人们在参观动
19、物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照?,2.,分析洋快餐在中国受欢迎的原因。,Convenience -save time;,Lack of awareness of health;,Comfortable environment.,.,指出现象,Fast food,is becoming popular,in China,especially among children.,分析原因,(,引出,),There are several reasons for,its popularity.(,逐条列出,),First,it is very convenient and saves a lot of ti
20、me to eat fast food.You just go into a fast food restaurant,order your food,and then you can either eat there or take it away.,Second,its popularity is also due to the comfortable environment and the quality of food in fast food restaurants.,2.,学生考试作弊的原因;,Nowadays,cheating in exams is popular among
21、some students.,There are various reasons for this,.,Some,students are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.Some want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Others cheat in order to win a scholarship or enter a key school.,3.,人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照?,When visiting wildlife pa
22、rks,many tourists love to take photos with animals.,分析原因,(,引出,),Reasons for this are varied,.(,逐条列出,)(,旅客,),Some people want to,remember their enjoyable and unforgettable experience with the animals by taking photos with them(,第一条,).(,动物,),Besides,animals like koala and panda are so lovely that many
23、 tourists can not help hugging them and photographing with them(,第二条,).,方法建议过渡语,Here are my suggestions on how to.,Suggestions on.can be listed as follows.,The ways for you to.can be suggested as follows.,2.,列举建议可以用:,first of all/first/to begin with,;,second(ly)/then/besides/in addition/whats more,;
24、finally/lastly/last but not least,for one thing.and for another(thing),3.,在列举的建议后常常会用起补充说明作用的分词短语、定语从句等说明提出此建议的理由或原因。,三、保持健康饮食的重要性,It is known to us all that nothing is more important than to keep healthy.,引出,The ways for us to keep fit can be suggested as follows,.,列举,Firstly,we should have a heal
25、thy diet,which means a variety of food including meat,fresh fruits and vegetables.Secondly,drink more water instead of a lot of drinks.Lastly,do some exercise every day,such as running,swimming,playing basketball and so on,for they help to relax ourselves as well as benefit our health a lot.,小试牛刀,对于
26、购物你有何建议,?,(2),你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习,(3),在你的学习或生活中压力是否大?如何正视压力?,对于购物你有何建议,?,Consider carfully.,Pay attention to the safety problem.,.,In my opinion,shopping on the Internet and buying in stores are both important to us in our daily life.However,there are still some suggestions for us to follow.For one thi
27、ng,We should consider carefully and choose what we want to buy according our own situations.For another,we should also pay attention to the safety problem in the buying process.,(2),你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习,I think,as a student myself,school and parents should educate their kids through teaching them to stu
28、dy for their family and their motherland rather than giving them money to let them passively do something.Only by building up some noble and long-range aims can they study on their own initiative.,在你的学习或生活中压力是否大?如何正视压力?,Everyone is affected by stressful situations.As for how to deal with stress,here
29、 are my tips.Firstly,you should have a right attitude,taking it a chance for you to move on.Secondly,you can go to have a rest,listening music or running,so as to relax yourself.Last but not least,you can also talk to your friends or parents,who may give you some useful suggestions.In a word,Dont be pessimistic when stress comes into view,maybe its a turning point in your life.,






