1、单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Period 4Writing,1.熟悉英语建议信的文体特征,掌握其写作技巧。,2.能用书信形式对某一问题提出建议和理由,得体地表达自己的观点。,3.掌握英语建议信的写作步骤和常用表达,能自主归纳出写英语建议信的语篇模式,智慧写作。,1.通过真实的交际情境,研读文本,在语篇中学习感悟建议信的写作技巧。,2.通过建议信的写作,培养学生的人际交往技巧,提高其沟通能力。,重点单词,1.,adv.确实如此;确切地,2.,adj.
2、感激的,3.,n.厌恶,4.,n.技巧;尖端;小费,5.,n.项目;条款,6.,vi.不同意,exactly,grateful,dislike,tip,item,disagree,重点短语,1.,与相处,2.,相爱;爱上,3.,参加,4.,在某方面有困难,fall in love,join in,have trouble with,get along with,写作讲座,建议信的写作,.情境交流,1.Have you met some problems while getting along with your friend?And what would you do?,_,2.If you
3、are a boy,would you like to make a friend with a girl?If you are a girl,would you like to make a friend with a boy?,_,The answers will be varied.,The answers will be varied.,.品句填空,1.I was,(感激的)for the old mans good advice.,2.Three racers finished with almost,(确切地)the same time.,3.The waiters and wai
4、tresses are not allowed to accept,(小费)in this hotel.,4.They came out for their morning exercise and I also,(参加)in.,5.He is afraid to say it when he,(不同意)with the teacher.,grateful/thankful,exactly,tips,joined,disagrees,disagree,阅读下列句子,注意disagree的意思及用法。,If you disagree you should speak out.如果不同意,你就该大
5、声地说出来。,I disagree with you on that point.在那一点上我与你意见不同。,通过观察以上句子,我们发现disagree是(1),词,意思是“(2),”。,动,不一致;不同意,disagree with(sb)不一致;不同意;不适合,disagree on 在方面意见不统一,agree with 同意某人的观点/意见等;适宜;符合;与一致,agree to 同意(安排/提议/计划等),agree on 就进行磋商或达成一致,I can,t/couldn,t agree more.我再赞成不过了(多用于交际英语中)。,单项填空,Shall we go to the
6、 movie to see the film this weekend?,.I have been longing to see it.,A.I cannot agree moreB.I wont then,C.I hope not D.Not really,【答案与解析】A根据答语“I have been longing to see it”可知“我一直在盼望观看那部电影”,故选“我再赞成不过了,(I cannot agree more)”。not really“其实并非如此”。,get along with,阅读下列句子,注意get along with的意思及用法。,Terry isnt
7、 getting along with her new roommate;they argue constantly.泰莉和她的新室友相处得不愉快,她们经常发生口角。,Im not getting along with this job very fast.我这个工作进展得不是很快。,通过观察以上句子,我们发现get along with的意思,是“,”。,与和睦相处;进展,get back 回来,get across 通过,get it 懂了,get to 到达;开始,get over 克服;解决(问题等);(从疾病、失望等中)恢复过来;完成,get on 上车;过活;有进展;骑上(马、自行
8、车等);登上(车、船、飞机等),get down 从下来;下车;着手进行;降下,get through通过;完成,单项填空,I tried phoning her office,but I couldnt,.,A.get alongB.get on,C.get toD.get through,【答案与解析】D句意:我试着打她办公室的电话,但没有打,通。get along“进展;相处”;get on“上车”;get to“到达”;get through,“打通(电话)”。,建议信的写作,假如你是Simon。你收到一封叫 Flower 的网友写来的e-mail,她向你询问如何交友,请给她回一封信,
9、并提出建议。,提示:1.交朋友首先要对别人友善;,2.要使陌生人感到亲切,不管他在何处,关心别人胜过自己;,3.与别人有分歧时不吵架,要商量;,4.不要相信危急时刻背弃朋友的人,因为“患难见真情”。,要求:1.词数100左右;,2.表达要清楚,语言简洁、流畅;,3.针对问题给出建议,层次清晰。,建议信就是在你所写的信中发表你的建议与看法。建议信除了遵,循书信的格式之外,还要求在信中针对别人的问题,给出你的观点,及解决办法。,1.在写建议信的时候应做到:,(1)注意格式。首段:表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注,意语气。主体段落:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进,的地方或针对具体情
10、况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别,人以为你是在投诉,而不是提建议。结尾段:对提出的建议进行总,结,要注意有礼貌,使读者容易接受。,(2)客观地提出建议。,(3)针对对方的问题,给出你的观点。,(4)语言要委婉、精炼、简洁,表达清楚。,写这类题目时,学生要注意不要跑题,因为这类题很有可能写,成议论文,如,“,我认为一,二,所以要如何如何,”,。学生,应该时刻记住书信的交际功能,要考虑到收信人的感受。在给对,方提建议时应该时常说到I和You,要让人时刻感受到这是一种交,流。,2.必背短文模版,Dear,I am very glad to hear that you want to seek
11、some suggestions,about,./I am writing to express my views concerning,./You have asked me for my advice with regard to,_ in order to,.,In my humble opinion/Personally speaking/As far as I am,concerned,I highly recommend that./You would be wise to take the,following actions,.On the one hand/Firstly/In
12、 the first,place,.On the other hand/Secondly/In the second place,.Besides/In addition/Further more,it is unnecessary for,you to,.Consequently/In a word/In conclusion,I believe,that,.,I hope that my opinions are of help to you,and please feel free,to contact me for more questions./I am looking forwar
13、d to your,consideration about my proposals.Thanks in advance for that.,Yours sincerely,Li Ming,Dear Flower,Im glad to receive your e-mail.You ask me something about,how to make friends.The following is my advice.,Everyone needs friends,so how to make friends is very important.,First,you must be frie
14、ndly to others if you want to make friends,with others.Then,look after others more than yourself.In my,opinion,try to make the stranger feel easy.If you have different,opinions,you can discuss with others.I dont think its necessary,to quarrel with them.Finally,I dont trust those people who leave,you
15、 when you are in trouble,because a friend in need is a friend,indeed.,I hope everything goes on well with you,and youll make a lot,of good friends.,Yours truly,Simon,本文是一篇建议信,文章时态为现在时。根据要求是写一封,关于如何交朋友的建议信,文章有多处点睛之笔。First,Then,Finally 体现了文章的层次清晰。In my opinion 是提建议的一,种方式,用在文中很贴切。I dont think.表达作者的观点,用
16、得,很准确。,选出下列单词相对应的英文释义,1.teenager,A.to have or express a different opinion,from someone else,2.exactly,B.to give something to someone and get something in return,3.dislike,C.a single thing,especially one thing in a,list,group,or set,4.tip,D.someone who is between 13 and 19,years old,D,F,G,H,5.swap E.
17、feeling that you want to thank someone,or showing this feeling,6.disagree F.used to emphasize that something is,correct in every way or in every detail,7.grateful G.to think someone or something is,unpleasant and not like them,8.item H.a helpful piece of advice,B,A,E,C,温馨贴士,本课时是一节综合技能课,核心部分为“建议信的写作”,学习要点图解如下:,






