如何有效提高英语写作分数(周敏芝）.ppt

湖南长郡卫星远程学校,2011,年上学期,制作,07,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,湖南长郡卫星远程学校,2010,年下学期,制作,07,如何有效提高英语写作分数,授课人：周敏芝,What makes a good composition?,1.Covering all points,2.Language-,fluent,coherent,high-level,3.Beautiful handwriting,如何有效提高英语写作分数,1.,卷面书写的干净整齐,2.,万能句式的灵活运用,Tip 1,You cant pay too much attention to,your handwriting,while writing.,Good handwriting High marks,Good handwriting,Higher marks,20,6,写好字的决窍：,1.,右倾斜,5,2.,贴线,3.,竖线拉直,4.,圆润、均匀,5.,间距适中,Tip,2.,Language,-fluent,coherent,high-level,.,Sentence frames,Words,如何有效提高英语写作分数,授课人：周敏芝,Beautify the sentences,1.so that,The climate in Kunming is very mild and many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beautiful scenery.,The climate in Kunming is,so,mild,that,many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beautiful scenery.,So,mild is,the climate in Kunming,that,many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beautiful scenery.,2.Only when/if,从句,+,倒装,When students take it easy,，,they can perform the best in their exams and enjoy the happiness of study.,Only when,students take it easy,can they perform,the best in their exams and enjoy the happiness of study.,(Only when),A big,broken,tree fell on a house and damaged the house severely.,A big,broken,tree fell on a house,thus damaging,the house severely.,3.,非谓语,doing/done,I saw sadness and despair from his face.,What,I saw from his face,was,sadness and despair.,4.What,从句,(What),A leader is making a speech,announcing that“a cock can lay eggs”,which,is obviously wrong.,A leader is making a speech,announcing,that“a cock can lay eggs”and it is obviously wrong.,5.Which,定语从句放句尾,As,the saying goes,“”,There is a saying,that,goes,“.”,A proverb goes,that,To err is human.,God helps those who help themselves.,6,引用谚语。,和汉语一样，英语中也有大量谚语。,若能在写作中恰当运用，会给文章增色不少。,“It is no use crying over spilt milk.”,常用谚语1)Time and tide wait for no man.,(2)Actions speak louder than words.,(3)He who laughs last laughs best.,(4)All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.,(5)Practice makes perfect.,(6)Every coin has two sides.,(7)Where there is a will,there is a way.,(8)Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.,(9)A friend in need is a friend indeed.,(10)Failure is the mother of success.,Conclusion,万能句式：,1.so that,2.Only when/if,从句,+,倒装,3.,非谓语,doing,作结果状语,4.What,从句,5.which,定语从句放句尾,6.,引用谚语。,美文赏析,美文赏析,A big tree was somehow broken,with part of it,fallen,on a house,thus damaging,the house severely.,Facing,the damaged house,one man is,so,sad,that,he burst into tears while the other has made a swing with the,fallen,part of the tree and is enjoying himself with his invention,totally,forgetting,about the,damaged,house.,This is,what,we see in the pictures,but what message do they convey?,As far as I am concerned,the pictures are trying to tell us how we should face the difficulties and disappointments in our life.When such a trouble happens,optimistic people will try to see the good side of it,which,will make them healthy,efficient and productive.On the contrary,pessimists will hardly help themselves out of trouble.,Just as the saying goes,“,God helps those who help themselves,”,.,Only when,we believe in ourselves,can we,live a better life.,作文互批注意事项：,1.,看主谓是否一致；,2,看句子是否完整；,3,看用词是否得当（尤其是,动词,）；,4,看,时态,是否合理；,5,看句子之间有没有,连接词,，且是否,应用恰当。,Thank you,！,让英语写作不再成为高考的绊脚石！,Thank you！,