《高三英语写作指导》(共23张PPT)(1).pptx

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,Welcome to my class!,Do you find yourself speechless,when writing a composition?,Learning Objectives,:,1.Get to know the factors contributing to a good writing.,2.Be able to polish a writing by using these factors.,variation,several parts,topic sentence,all points covered,words,phrases,sentences,content,language,A good writing,structure,For variation of words and phrases,tip1,fresh and not overused words,With the College Entrance Examinations,coming,the senior three students are focusing much more on studying.,They become more and more tense.,increasingly,approaching,tip2use Non-finite Verb,faced with the calendar,turning pages,day by day.,Tip 3.Phrases come first,Firstly,enough sleep in the night,will,bring,better,effectiveness,.,Firstly,achieving an adequate amount of sleep at night,will,contribute to,a higher,productivity during the day,.,I _ to study English better this term.,(同义词decide),We will _ the matter _,(同义词consider),take into account,make up my mind,tip1,Use phrases to replace sentences,For variation of sentences,Please take care of my cat,when I am away.,Please take care of my cat,during my absence,.,(absolute construction),(2)The College Entrance Examinations,approaching,(prepositional phrase),the approach of the College Entrance Exams,(non-finite verb),(3),Facing,(1),With,the College Entrance Examinations,approaching,As the College Entrance Examinations approach,the senior three students are focusing on much more,on studying.,tip2,Use compound and complex sentences,My brother loves playing the piano.,He has won prizes in many competitions.,Some of the competitions were held in Beijing.,My brother,who,loves playing the piano,has won prizes in many competitions,some,of which,were held in Beijing.,tip3,eye-catching structures,A heated discussion,was held,to argue about the,virtues and flaws,of smartphones.,1.(passive voice),We held a heated discussion to argue about the advantages,and disadvantages of smartphones.,2.(inversion),As soon as we left the house,it began to rain.,No sooner,had we left the house,than,it began to rain.,We can,make amazing progress,only when we,realise,the importance,of learning.,Only when,we become conscious of the value in learning,can we,make remarkable progress.,3.(the emphatic pattern),He,realised his dream,through,working hard,.,It was,through his painstaking efforts,that,he fulfilled his ambition.,4.(,non-finite verb,),If you give me enough time,I can do it well.,Given,enough time,I can do it well.,After he finished the exercise,he went out.,Having finished,the exercise,he went out.,He got up early to catch the first bus.,To catch the first bus,he got up early.,We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.,There are many trees along the streets.,There is a clean river in the city.,There are many fishes in the river.,Just imagine the beautiful surroundings,if,we have,made our city much greener.,The streets are lined with thriving trees.,A clean river,where colorful fishes swim deliberately,winds through the city.,Appreciation,On one side stand rows of willow trees,while on the other side lie acres of grassland sprinkled with lovely wild flowers.,There are willow trees on one side.,There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.,There are many flowers on them,.,2008,索取大熊猫照片,书信（动物园）,2009,转述取消见面,留言条（房东）,2010,邀请外教当评委,写信（外教）,2011,请求帮助（书面预约）,写信（辅导中心）,2012,申请参加夏令营,邮件（举办方）,2013,书信（网店代卖）,2014,十年后的我,报社（投稿）,2015,(,卷,I),写信约稿“美国学生生活和节日风俗”,栏目（约稿）,（卷,II,）给外教写邀请信去敬老院,写信,2016,卷,I-III,请求帮助、,道歉信、参加摄影展,写信、写邮件,假定你是李华,你所在城市的希望中医药大学拟招外国留学生,并提供新生奖学金,.,请你给外国笔友,John,发封邮件告知此事,.,内容,包括,:,1.,招生规模,2.,申请流程及截止时间,3.,联系邮箱,:overseas .,注意,:,1.,词数,100,左右,;,2.,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,;,3.,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数,.,structure,to inform John of the news;,the purpose of your letter,the detailed,information,a brief ending,content,location,size of admission,the procedures of application,means of contacting,language,plan to do sth/intend to do sth,admit students overseas,with ideal scholarships offered,further your education,feel free to visit its official website,the due day to submit the application form,Para 1,Dear John,Learning that youre passionate about chinese herbs,Im,writing to present you with a promising academic choice.,L,ocated in my city,Hope University of Chinese Medicine,lately,intends to admit 500 foreign freshmen next year and plans to offer,ideal scholarships for new applicants.Any interested foreign senior,high student is welcome to apply.Once you make up your mind,please feel free to browse its official website,which has an english,version,and download the form.A letter of application attached to,your relevant information is supposed to be submitted to overseas,before the end of next month.,Para 2,Para 3,Drop me a line if you still have doubts.And I ll,be more than delighted if you come to study in my city.,Best wishes!,Yours,Li HUa,Handwriting counts!,the first impression,！,Give me a challenge,and Ill meet it with joy!,