书面表达专项突破9建议信.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,9.建议信,建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：,1.,说明写信目的。,2.,提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。,3.,表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。,文体概述,常用语块,1.,给某人提建议,_,2.,如下,_,3.,在做某事时遇到困难,_,4.,利用,_,5.,向某人征求意见,_,ask sb.for advice,give sb.some advice(on),as follows,have difficulty/trouble in doing,sth,.,make use of,6.,制订计划,_,7.,认为,有用,_,8.,参加,_,9.,听从某人的建议,_,10.,把,考虑在内,_,take,sth,.into account/consideration,make a plan,findhelpful/useful/beneficial,take part in/participate in,follow ones advice,11.,得到改善,_,12.,有所好转,_,13.,依我看来,_,14.,我已收到你的来信，得知你,_,15我建议,_,I would like to suggest that/I would like to make a recommendation that/I am writing to advise you of/If I were you,I would/May I suggest that/I would like to put forward the suggestion that,get improved,change for the better,in my opinion/in my view/from,my point of view,I have received your letter saying that you,套用句式,1.,你就,向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。,2.,我觉得如果能够,将会很有帮助的。,1.You have asked me for my advice with regard toand I will try to make some constructive suggestions.,2.I feel that it would be beneficial if,3.,我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。,4.,我相信你会考虑我的建议的。,5.,如能看到,我会非常开心的。,3.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.,5.I would be more than happy to see,4.I trust youll take my suggestion into account./I trust youll take good consideration of my suggestion.,习作修改,(,做短文改错，背经典范文,),Dear Roy,I am glad to receive your letter ask for my,advice to how to learn Chinese well.,Here are few suggestions.First,this is important,to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspaper and magazines in Chinese,whenever possible.,asking,on,a,it,newspapers,Beside,it should be a good idea to learn and sing,Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easier.You,can also make more Chinese friends.He will tell,you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.,Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.,Best wishes!,Yours truly,Li,Hua,Besides,easily,They,and,1.ask asking,现在分词作伴随状语，表示主动关系。,2.to,onadvice,后常搭配介词,on,。,3.,在,few,前加,a,根据句意，此处为提一些建议，表示肯定意义，用,a few,。,4.this it,考查句型,it is+adj.+to do,sth,.,意为“做,是,的”。,5.newspaper newspapers,因为,newspaper,为可数名词，而且与前后的,books,magazines,属于并列关系，故用复数形式。,6.Beside Besides,此处表示补充说明关系“此外,/,而且”，,beside,意为“在,旁边”。,7.easier easily,修饰谓语动词用副词形式。,8.He They,根据前一句话中的,more Chinese friends,可知用,They,。,9.or and,此处两个动作为“顺承”关系，而非“选择”关系。,10.,去掉,next time,前的,the,相对于现在的“下一,”,，,next,前不用,the,。,课堂练习,假定你是李华，请根据所给材料，给,Lora,写一封回信。要点如下：,1.Lora,打算利用暑假打工。,2.Lora,父母不同意的理由。,3.,你给,Lora,的具体建议。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右。,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,3.,开头语和结束语已为你写好。,Dear Lora,I have just read your letter in the magazine.,I know that you want to work part-time this summer.But your parents dont,allow you to do,so.I understand your situation.,I think your parents may have their reasons.They may,regard learning,as the most important task for you.Perhaps theyd like you to,make use of,this summer holiday to study.Besides,they may think you are,too young to work.,I think you,had better have a talk with,your parents.If they agree,you should,make a detailed plan for,your study and work,ask your friends to,work together with you,and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are,old enough to manage things properly,.,Anyway,I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.,Yours truly,Li,Hua,课外作业,假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生,Jenny,。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深夜哭泣。对此，请你给,Jenny,写一封建议信，要点如下：,1.,鼓励,Jenny,坚定求学信念，志存高远，四海为家。,2.,就,Jenny,的目前状况，提两到三个建议。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右。,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,3.,开头语和结束语已为你写好。,Dear Jenny,I am so glad to have a talk with you,.I understand your present situation for I have had,a similar experience,before.,People often miss their parents the first time they leave home.Most people,do,have to leave home for,higher education or employment.,I think you should realize that,present separation,will help with your,academic development,and your improvement of,personal ability.,Try to make friends on your school campus,and,share ideas with,your classmates who are,physically closest to you,now.Maybe you will still miss your parents,but your new friends will,bring happiness and joy to,your new life.Also I suggest you,take an active part in,different kinds of activities in school.You will,get much pleasure from,it.,Wish you happy every day,.,Yours faithfully,Li,Hua,