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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2021/10/3,#,英语书面表示,English Composition Writing,1/31,What makes,a good essay?,The essay,2/31,A good essay is usually made up of,a topic paragraph,some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.,Topic paragraph,Supporting Paragraph 1,Supporting Paragraph 2,Supporting Paragraph 3,Concluding paragraph,3/31,To many students,school life is boring and tiring.However,I find my school life meaningful and colourful.,general statement,topic statement,Topic paragraph,(Introduction paragraph),General statement,Topic statement,4/31,Supporting Paragraphs,(Body)Paragraphs,TS,SS,SS,SS,SS,Firstly,.,Secondly,.,Moreover,.,Finally,.,However,.,In addition,Furthermore,.,5/31,Conclusion,Personally,in conclusion,in brief,From what has been discussed above,we may draw the conclusion that.In summary,it is wiser.,6/31,The paragraph,What makes a,good paragraph?,7/31,A good paragraph is one that consists of,a topic sentence and supporting sentences.,There are different kinds of bee.Some live in large groups like the honey bee,and make their nests in trees or holes in the rocks.Other species make their nests in holes in the ground.There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all,topic sentence,8/31,Wherever you go in our school,you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers.Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles.A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water.,Topic sentence:_,just like a garden.,Our school is,just like a garden.,Our school is,just like a garden.,Our school is,9/31,A good paragraph is one,that contains proper linking words.,I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons.,First of all,English is spoken by a large number of people,and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries.,Secondly,English is the most widely used language on the internet.It has become an on-line language.,Thirdly,the Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful.,Lastly,10/31,正确使用相关连接词,时间先后：,first,then,later,in the end,eventually,since then,after a while,转折关系：,but,however,on the contrary,nevertheless,因果关系：,because,since,as,thanks to,owing to,as a result of,for the reason that,让步关系：,though,although,even if,even though,in spite of the fact that,递进关系：,whats more,in addition,furthermore,on the one hand on the other hand,条件关系：,if,unless,as long as,on condition that,表 列 举：,for example/instance,takefor example,thats to say,in other words,as follows,表 总 结：,in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a word,on the whole,as has been stated,11/31,A good paragraph is one,with varied sentence patterns.,12/31,丰富句式：,(惯用到句型结构）,利用不一样句型来表示同一个意思，,能增加文章文采。,e.g.,What,a kind boy,he is!,How,disappointed,he was!,感叹句,强调句,e.g.,It,was,this young boy,that,helped the old granny.,I,do hope,you can come,if possible,.,13/31,e.g.,Only in this way,can you,solve this problem.,There,comes,the police car,.,Hardly,had,they got,to the station,when,they met the young man.,e.g.,They read,while walking,or,riding on a bus.,Come to me,if necessary,.,e.g.I saw a young lady walking,slowly in the street,with,a handbag in her hand.,倒装句,省略句,with短语,14/31,e.g.In my opinion,cyber cafes,should be a place,where,we can,find much useful information.,Lets come to the main teaching,building,at the back of,which,stands,the school library.,定语从句,e.g.Thats,what,I should do.,We should do a favour to,whoever,needs help at present.,各种名词性从句,15/31,e.g.,Time passed quickly,before,we knew it.,The moment,we reached the farm,we,got down to harvesting.,So long as,we work harder at our lessons,well catch up sooner or later.,各种状语从句,16/31,1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）,2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句),3.He did not know what had happened,until he had read the news in the newspaper,.(使用强调句型),4.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）,What,surprises him,is that,the little girl knows so many things.,Practice,怎样使用较丰富句式和高级词汇,Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.,It was,not until he had read the news in the newspaper,that,he knew what had happened.,I,couldnt have passed,the physics exam,but for,your help.,17/31,5.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词),6.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用V-ing形式),7.I wont believe what he says.（no matter what状语从句）,8,.,If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.,（祈使句+and）,Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing,they went back to school.,No matter what he says,I wont believe.,Study hard,and,youll make rapid progress.,18/31,9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句),10.We all think he is a great man.(think highly of),11.As a result the plan was a failure.(turn out),12.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(the morethe more),No sooner had he come,back from Beijing,than,he was sent abroad.,We all,think highly of him,.,The plan,turned out to be,a failure.,The more,he spoke,the more excited,he felt.,19/31,Summary:,A good essay,is usually made up of a topic,paragraph,some supporting,paragraphs,and a concluding,paragraph,.,A good paragraph,is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.,A good paragraph,is one that contains proper linking words.,A good paragraph,is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.,20/31,ASSESSMENT,structure,Is the essay divided into,parts,?,Does each part have,a topic sentence,?,content,Are,all the details,stated?,Is everything,to the point,(切题)?,Language,Does the writer use any,linking words,?,Are there any mistakes?,Is there any,advanced vocabulary,（高级词汇）?,Are there any,good sentence patterns,（句式）?,Lets improve it:,21/31,Good afternoon,everyone!,The topic of my speech today is“My Attitude to Pursuit,of Fashion in School”.,Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion.Some,students live a very expensive life,_._,they hope to look smart and special.,_,they want to win others admiration and respect.,In addition,it makes them feel cool.,_,we students should hold the right sense of,values.We should practice thrift in our daily life._,it,is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the,Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can,return to school._,it is the inner beauty rather than,our appearance that makes us respectable.,Thank you for listening!,the reasons why they do so are as follows,B.firstly C.last but not least D.whats more,E,.,as far as I am concerned F.Secondly,A,B,C,D,E,F,22/31,苏州市高三教学调研测试,最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：提议小学生天天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你依据以下材料，写一篇以“Should we give more attention to students health or grades?”为题短文，谈谈你看法。,支持方理由,反对方理由,你看法及理由,1能够促进对体育重视；,2能够增强学生体魄；,3更有利于提升学习效率。,1学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；,2过高要求学生难以抵达；,3长跑可能引发感冒或伤害。,(考生自行发挥23点),注意：1词数150左右。短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；,2对所给关键点，逐一陈说，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。,23/31,1.A good beginning makes a good ending.,2.Your composition should be divided,into paragraphs.,3.Youd better use some linking words.,4.Handwriting is of great importance.,Suggestions:,24/31,离开你那时节我忘了。或许因为我忙碌而忽略了你存在。曾几何时，你是我心灵寄托，我把全部心事毫无保留记在了小屋。你是我知音；你是我另一片天地！却又不知道为何我怕陷得太深，我离开了你，在某一天。以后生活，在继续好几次在信箱中会收到你发来问候信，那深沉话语，让我感动，很内疚。是我错了，是我在忽略你，而你依然记得我。你说：你真忘了这个家？忘了真诚可爱邻居们了吗？.感觉心里酸酸可我还是没有回应你。许久许久日子还是这么，没有变，人也没有变。一次偶然机会，让我再次遇见了你。你还是那样善良、漂亮、温柔。你总会很认真去聆听每一个朋友故事，也会用你柔情去感化每一个人，音乐淡化了他们压抑，让他(她)们更相信你。可当我再次回到你身边时候，一个突如其来打击，让我不知所措，我小屋.已不存在！你已把我踢出了你世界，我不能怪谁，只能怪我自己。是我，当初不会珍惜那份真挚感情。你几次靠近我，而我却像个冷血普通，不知道你存在。我不知道怎么办，我知道我再也不可能成为你心中最忠实蛙友。可我想努力，得去争取！我经过了，用另一,第一段：,1.Some people agree to NO.One,because they usually think that.In the meantime,.In addition.,2.,Some people think that A is right because.,3.,Some people suggest/say that.At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats more.,4.,Some people prefer NO.One.In their opinion A.In addition.,25/31,第二段：,1.,On the other hand,some people hold that B is right.They think.,2.But many more people dont agree with them.They prefer B.They say that.The reason is that.,3.On the contrary,some people hold that.,4.Some people think that B is better.It is clear that.Whats more,.Also.,在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式展开段落。,26/31,第三段：提出自己看法而且加以论证,1.In my opinion B is better than A.There is no doubt that.,2.I support A.The reason goes as follows.,3.As far as I am concerned,I agree to the latter.First.Second.Finally.,4.It is likely that people will go on arguing over these questions.I think that everything has both its positive and negative sides.We should keep an open mind.,27/31,5.,People will continue to argue over the questions,I think wed better keep an open mind because everything has two sides.It all relies on.,6.,Of these two ways of.I prefer.First of all,.Second,.,28/31,Should we give more attention to,students health or grades?,The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity.,It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day,junior school students,1,500 and senior school students,2,000.Different people always offer various views,.,Some people say yes to this activity,.,They think,for one thing,it can,make people pay more attention to physical education,;,for another,running can,improve students health,and,help them study efficiently,so they can have good grades.,However,others hold opposite opinions about the activity,.,They believe that,learning is the most important task for students,and,their future depends,on,their grades in their subjects.,Meanwhile,many cant meet the high requirements,.,Whats worse,some will,suffer cold and injuries,.,In my opinion,its all right for schools to care about students health and carry out the activity,step by step,.Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.,29/31,What do you think about the concluding paragraph?,Is it a good one?,If not,how can you improve it?,In my opinion,its all right for schools to pay more attention to students health and carry out the activity step by step.Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.,30/31,In my opinion,its,better,for schools to pay more attention to students health and carry out the activity step by step,because a good body helps make high efficiency.,Whats more,it not noly helps students get relaxed,but also will benefit them in their future life.,31/31,