CET-6写作.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,CET-6,写作,Sonic,How to improve psychological health?,2008,年,12,月份,CET6,作文范文,怎样改善学生的心理健康,1.,学生心理健康的重要性,2.,学校应该怎样做,3.,学生自己应该怎样做,How to improve psychological health?,As is known to all,psychological health is as important as,if not more important than,physical health for a student during his/her growth.However,its quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy.,Undoubtedly,schools and universities should take great account in the responsibilities of students psychological health.Relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it.For example,there should be a psychological counseling hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid.,Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves.From my perspective,what they can do is trying to stay positive,optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools.To be more specific,they can participate in some activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind.Meanwhile,harmful impacts from the cyber space should definitely be avoided.,文章的构成要素,单词,短语,句型,文章结构,单词：惯性思维,阅卷老师的“审美”疲劳,Solution,？,十个最常使用却又不舍得替换的词,First,，,second,，,third,，,very,，,important,，,support,，,believe,，,think,，,thing,想一想，有什么可以替换的词？,So,the solution is,避开第一思维”！,“极端”词语的应用,短文改错,&,阅读,VS,作文：反其道而行,短语,1.,启,Firstly,At first,First of all,In the first place,Currently,Nowadays,Lately,At present,When it comes to,Evidences is piling up that,Once up a time,注：用于主题句或主题句后第,1,扩展句,2.,承,Consequently,Namely,Whats more,In the same way,Similarly,In particular,is but one of the many effects.,another is!,Besides,Apart from,Just as,For this purpose,Furthermore,Later,In addition to,Afterwards,Then,Meanwhile,By the time,3.,转,After all,All the same,On the contrary,Conversely,But,unfortunately,In spite of,Despite,nevertheless,As a matter of fact,In contrast,Though,Yet,Still,Unlike,Although,however,4.,合,Finally,As I have said,As has been noted,In brief,Hence,indeed,Eventually,Therefore,To sum up,Thus,All in all,In summary,obviously,In couclusion,Surely,In short,Above all,Consequently,No doubt,句型,秘诀,1,：复合句和简单句的轮番上阵！,秘诀,2,：句式的多样化！,The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unware of the approaching hunter.,（并列从句）,As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm,they were unware of the approaching hunter.,（原因状从,+,主句）,Grazing peacefully,t,he goats,in the farm were unware of the approaching hunter.(,现在分词短语,+,简单句,),The young pilot on his first overseas training felt uneasy.,The young pilot felt uneasy on his first overseas training.,The pilots first overseas training made him feel uneasy.,Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.,The young pilot,who is on his first overseas training,felt very uneasy.,As the young pilot was on his first overseas training,he felt very uneasy.,Being on his first overseas training,the young pilot felt very uneasy.,It being his first overseas training,the young pilot felt very uneasy.,结构,模板的应用,懒人有懒方法,People have different views on,Some people prefer,Others tend to,Of course,For example,But,The following reasons can account for my preference,The main reason is,A good example to illustrate is,For another,From the foregoing,！模板,1,has become a common part of peoples life.,And has always aroused the greatest concern.,What impress us most is,The reason are varied.,Among the various reasons,plays an important part.,That is to say,.,What s more,For example,When talking about,On the one hand,On the other hand,In brief,模板,2,has been brought into focus.,Nowadays,In addition,Many reasons contribute to,Generally speaking,First of all,More over,Therefore,As far as I am concerned,As we know,Further more,In a word,模板,3,不可忽视的一些影响得分的因素,字体,卷面,单词拼写,语法,