新目标英语九年级Unit1写作.ppt

Unit 1 How can we become good learners?Period 6 Section B 3a-3bA:How can I improve my English?B:You can improve your English by /One way is bylistening to English songslistening to the conversations in English moviesIf you do this,your pronunciation will be improved.A:How can I improve my English?B:Its a good idea to /I think you shouldread English newspapers look up new words in a dictionaryIf you do this,you can learn more words._it is easier for you to pay attention to it for a long timeIf you like sports,you can _watch sports programs in English.Read 2b again and fill in the chart.practice and learn from mistakes.“Use it or lose it.”Alexander Graham Bellsucceeded in inventing the telephone by trying many times.developing your study skills.it is not enough to study hard.You can take notes by writing down key words.4asking questions knowledge comes from questioning You can ask teachers or ask each other文章内文章内容容文章结文章结构构_ _ _总总分分总总认真认真审题审题，找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审审Write a letter to your friend.Give him/her some advice about the best ways to learn English.I think you should.It is also a good idea to.You could try to improve your English by.o用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要文章要点。点。列列写作第二步_practice and learn from mistakes.“Use it or lose it.”Alexander Graham Bellsucceeded in inventing the telephone by trying many times.developing your study skills.it is not enough to study hard.You can take notes by writing down key words.4asking questions knowledge comes from questioningYou can ask teachers or ask each otherI think you should.It is also a good idea to.You could try to improve your English by.加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：加首尾段加首尾段There are three good ways to.首首尾尾Learning is a lifelong journey.So be patient.I believe your English will be better.恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,although,though,after all,4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,on the one handon the other hand;7.表示解释表示解释:for example,such as,that is to say,in other words;8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,finally,in the end;9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,whats more,actually,in fact,10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,in a word,generally speaking,关联词关联词选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：审审列列加加连连美美一一档档12-15分分要点齐全，能写出要求中的所有或大部分要点；语要点齐全，能写出要求中的所有或大部分要点；语篇结构完整；语言结构丰富；句子通顺，行文连贯，篇结构完整；语言结构丰富；句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚；语言基本无误（不超过表达清楚；语言基本无误（不超过3处）；书写工整；处）；书写工整；词数符合要求。词数符合要求。二二档档9-11分分要点基本齐全，能写出要求中的大部分要点；语篇要点基本齐全，能写出要求中的大部分要点；语篇结构较完整；应用的语言结构虽不太丰富，但基本结构较完整；应用的语言结构虽不太丰富，但基本能满足任务要求；虽有一些语言错误，但基本不影能满足任务要求；虽有一些语言错误，但基本不影响意义表达；书写较工整；词数基本符合要求。响意义表达；书写较工整；词数基本符合要求。三三档档5-8分分要点不齐全，只能写出要求中的部分要点；语篇结要点不齐全，只能写出要求中的部分要点；语篇结构不完整；语言结构单一；语言错误较多，影响意构不完整；语言结构单一；语言错误较多，影响意思表达；书写不够工整；词数不足思表达；书写不够工整；词数不足50.四四档档04分分只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些词汇；词数不足只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些词汇；词数不足20；注意：凡未答题或抄写试卷其他文字内容的，；注意：凡未答题或抄写试卷其他文字内容的，一律判为零分。一律判为零分。Dear Mary,There are three good ways to help you learn English.I think one way is by creating an interest in what you learn.If you do this,you brain will be more active.If you like music,you can listen to English songs.It is also a good idea to practice and learn from mistakes.“Practice makes perfect.”Alexander succeeded by trying many times.You could also learn English well by asking questions because knowledge comes from questioning.Learning is a lifelong journey.So be patient.I believe your English will be better.Your friend范文赏析范文赏析