高二英语短文改错练习.doc

高二英语短文改错练习
▲ 按改错题的正确格式改正下列短文中的错误。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
改错一
David joined the army when he was eighteen. And for several months he taught how to be a good soldier. He did quite good in everything except shooting. One day he and his friends are practising their shooting, and all of them did well besides David. At last the officer said, “David! You are quite hopeless! Do not waste your bullet. Go behind the wall, and shoot you.” David felt ashamed. He went behind the wall and a few seconds late the officer and the other young soldiers heard a sound of a shot “Heavens!” the officer said, “has that silly man really shooted himself?” He ran behind the wall anxious. But David was all right. “I am sorry, sir,” he said “And I missed again.

改错二
One day we were having English class when Mr Black saw a boy reading a picture-book and said, “Tom , how do you usually do after lunch ? ”Tom nervously got up his seat. He did not know what to answer . He thought for some times and then said , Waite supper .” The teacher was unhappy , and at that moment he saw a boy was sleep . He was angry but he was trying not to show for it . Then he asked , “And you, Joke? Joke wake up and did not hear the question. He asked his deskmate , who dared not tell him. Then he stood up but replied in a loudly voice , “So do I sir !” Everybody laughed.

改错三
The village was always very quiet. The people lives there were busy in working in their fields during the day, and went to bed early at night, tiring after a long day’s hard work. All of them had lived in a village for all their life and had never left more than one day at a time. On these days they left, they got up early in the morning. They filled their carts with fruits and vegetables and sheep and went onto the market in the town beyond their valley. They e back in the evening with some money and perhaps a present for their children. That was their life---hard and simple, but not unhappy.

改错四
Jenny moved quietly across the crowd room and sat down at a corner. She studied her hands for a moment and looked down. The room was alive with young people talking with and moving from group to group . They all seemed know each other very well . They laugh and told jokes abut each other and seemed to feel quite fortably. Jenny didn’t know single person there except Mary, she had gone upstairs to do some cooking. Jenny and Mary were roommate at Clark College; they had traveled to Mary’s hometown for the weekend.

改错五
Some people learn new skills more quickly than others, so don’t be too discouraged unless some of your classmate seem to be learning English more quickly than you. If you keep on practicing, you will master your English in the end.
In the meantime, try to make English learn as fun as possibly. I suggest that you watch English language movies on your free time. I also suggest reading some English language magazines on topics that interests you, joining in the fun and games at your school’s English Corner. If your school doesn’t have a English corner, you might want to think about starting it.

改错六
Thanks for your letter. You are describing a mon problem experiencing by students all over China. Which you already know, the petition to get into a good university or college is very fierce, and that in turn(依次，相应地) means a heavy study load for students. I know that this can feel like terrible burden at times, but my advices to you is to keep on studying as your hard work will pay for in the end.
At the meanwhile, do you best to relax. Proper rest and relaxation are extreme important. Although I know that you are very busy, but yet I want you to try to set some time aside after class and at the weekends such that you can unwind properly.

改错七
If you visit London, you’ll see lots of cars, buses and bikes. You’re very cheap and quick to use a bike. As you take a bus, you have to wait for half an hour or else. What’s more, the bus moves slowly. The underground is quick but very expensive and often crowd. I used to travel to the work by bus. I often arrive at work late and tired. Then a friend of me suggested we go to work together by bike. I followed him. Although we went slowly, however, we always arrived on time. Take a bus took fifty minutes when riding a bike took only half an hour. Now I love riding a bike to work. I’ve got a little more money now, I feel much better.

高二英语短文改错练习答案
改错一答案：
1. He 后加 was 2. good àwell 3. areàwere
4. besidesàexcept 5. bullet→bullets 6.youàyourself
7. Lateàlater 8. shooted—shot
9. anxiousàanxiously 10. And→But
改错二答案
1. English前加an 2. how—what 3. up后加 from
4. times改为 time 5 Wait 后加for 6. sleep—sleeping/asleep
7. 去掉for 8. wake—waked/woke 9. but—and
10. loudly—loud
改错三答案
1. Livesàliving 2. in 去掉
3. tiringàtired 4. a àthe
5. left 后加 for 6. days + when
7. Fruitsàfruit 8. Ontoàto
9. eàcame 10. andàbut
改错四答案
1. crowdàcrowded 2. atàin 3. downàup 4. with 去掉
5. know前加to 6. laugh改为laughed 7. fortablyàfortable
8. know 后加 a 9. sheàwho 10. roommate—roommates
改错五答案
1. unlessàif 2. classmateàclassmates 3. master your English 中your去掉 4. learnàlearning 5. possiblyàpossible 6. on (your free time)àin 7. interestsàinterest 8. ∧joining: and 9. aàan 10. itàone
[解析] 4. “English learning”是 –ing短语做make的宾语。 10. one泛指单数可数名词，此处指的是一个英语角。
改错六答案
1. experiencingàexperienced 2. Which àAs 3. like∧terrible: a
4. advicesàadvice 5. foràoff 6. AtàIn 7. youàyour 8. extremeàextremely 9. but 10. suchàso
改错七答案
1. You’reàIt’s 2. AsàIf/When 3. crowdàcrowded 4. to the work
5. arriveàarrived 6. meàmine 7. howeveràyet 8. TakeàTaking
9. whenàwhile 10. now,∧I: and/so
[解析] 7. Although不可以与however连用，但可以与yet连用。9. while此处表示对比。10. 两个单句间不能用逗号相隔，应该使用连词。