高一英语短文改错.doc

高一英语短文改错
1.
Having a dream is of great importance. Your dreams are ordinary and realistic. I hope I will admitted into a top university and bee a good doctor after I will graduate from university. I hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer. I hope those whom love me and those whom I love will be healthy and live happy every day. To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build up my body. I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study. I must work hard at my lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam.
【小题1】通篇都在讲我的梦想，因此代词Your-- My。
【小题2】will 加动词原形，“被录取” be admitted into ,will 后面加be.

2.
One night, I was on my way home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down. It was plete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided to walk around a little after accepting that I’d have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked the door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.
【答案】1. plete改为pletely 2. in改为on 3.after改为before
4. can改为could 5.the改为a 6. shone改为shining 7.knocked后加at/ on
8.was前加and 9.it改为there 10. who删掉
3.
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Qingdao，Shandong province on February 1995．I started the school in 2001 when I was six. I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007. After that I went to No. 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer．The main subjects I study at schoo1 included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and puter．
I like English and puter best and I am very good at it .Last year I winned first prize in the school puter petition. In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp．My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter．
【答案】【小题1】on-in 【小题2】去掉the 【小题3】happy- happily
【小题4】graduate- graduated 【小题5】study- studied 【小题6】it-them
【小题7】winned-won【小题8】listening- listening to
【小题9】stamp- stamps 【小题10】is-are 【解析】
4.
Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday,as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. On the Sunday morning, she wasabout to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, peting and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.
【答案】【小题1】devoted改为devotes【小题2】class改为classes
【小题3】deeply改为deep【小题4】too改为so 【小题5】去掉the
【小题6】while改为when 【小题7】加上with 【小题8】We改为They
【小题9】relaxing改为relaxed 【小题10】but改为and
5.
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us.
We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. On either side of the road was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes. After short rest, we started going down It rained more harder. We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.
【答案】【小题1】can 改为could【小题2】extreme改为extremely
【小题3】spirit改为spirits【小题4】was改为were【小题5】mixing改为mixed
【小题6】去掉top【小题7】theres改为where【小题8】加上a
【小题9】more改为much【小题10】and改为but
6.
Even today, a man with good manner will politely open the door for a lady, help her put on her coat when necessary and see her safely to the door of her home before a date. When a man takes a woman out for a dinner, it is considered impolite to help her with her chair when she gets up or sits down. On a crowding train or bus, it is proper for a man offer a woman his seat, particular if she is old or carries a baby. Even when it es to shake hands, ladies e first. It is impolite for a man to extend his hand for a handshake upon first greeting. Unless a woman does not extend her hand to the man first, the man shouldn’t offer theirs.

7.
Dear Mike,
How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney last summer vacation. You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take us to do a lot of sightseeing. It’s really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a better impression. I have a great time here and learned a lot about Sydney. Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you visit China. I’ll act like a guide to show you around the places of interests in my hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】【小题1】was去掉【小题2】kindly-kind【小题3】us-me
【小题4】which-whose【小题5】better-good【小题6】have-had【小题7】here-there
小题8】∧to visit【小题9】like-as【小题10】interests-interest
8.
When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore. I couldn't understand “real music”· After I graduated from high school, the friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. Here I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my first guitar teacher. There were too many wonderful models to choose that it took me a long time to buy one Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

9.
This morning , I go to the store near my home to do some shopping.
I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough. The woman standing next to me was so shocking that she consequently dropped a jar of oil. For that very moment, a girl was walking by. She slipped on the oil, fell onto the broke glass and hit her head on the floor. After a while ,there were blood pour down her face. I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearest hospital without the delay. The doctor examined her wound carefully. To my relief, it was not serious. The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed wound.
【答案】【小题1】go-went【小题2】while-when【小题3】shocking-shocked,
【小题4】For-At,【小题5】broke-broken, 【小题6】were-was,
【小题7】pour-pouring,【小题8】the delay去the,【小题9】before-after，
【小题10】wound前加 the/her
10.
Dear schoolmates，
In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and raise our awareness to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest．A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31 st．Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student．The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline．
Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time．
Students’ Union
【答案】【小题1】attaching 改为attach 【小题2】第二行and去掉
【小题3】interestingly改为interesting【小题4】第三行A改为The
【小题5】end后面加s【小题6】第四行that改为which 【小题7】student后面加s
【小题8】must后面加be 【小题9】after改为before 10.最后一句them改为it
11.
Dear Andy,
I’m glad to hear from you. You ask about my health in your last email. So I’m going to tell you about diet. I’m a very health person. That’s why we live near the sea and we often have fish. I don’t know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and vegetables. And of course there will also be some rices. If you e to visit me in China on one day, you won’t eat many sweets. So I hope you don’t have sweet tooth.
I’m going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I’ll email them to you. I think you’ll like our team’s clothes.

12.
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to e at a stop. Thirty minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
【答案】【小题1】添加for【小题2】past改为pasted 【小题3】feet改为foot
【小题4】when改为than【小题5】a改为the【小题6】other改为another
【小题7】do改为did【小题8】possible改为possibly
【小题9】去掉it【小题10】lose改为losing
13.
The winter holiday is ing, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at
relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.
【答案】【小题1】made改为makes；【小题2】at改为to；
【小题3】movie改为movies【小题4】去掉the；【小题5】How改为What；
【小题6】different 改为differently【小题7】加to；【小题8】fallen改为fall；
【小题9】Beside改为Besides；【小题10】keeping改为kept；