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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Miss China,Guan,Qi,a 21-years-old college student from Jilin,Province,had won the Miss China 2003 beauty pageant,in,Sanya,Hainan Province,on September 21.,Besides judged on their looks,the 32 competitors,were tested on their write ability,English skills,team-work and generally knowledge.Miss Guan,Qi,impressed the judges who present with her excellent,replies during the question or answer section.She will,represent(,代表,)Chinese in the final of Miss World,to be holding in,Sanya,on December 6.,21-year-old,won,being,writing,general,were,and,China,held,Today I showed some foreign friend around our city.,We started off in car from the Friendship Hotel at 8:00 a.m.,We first got to,Jinshan,Park.We are all struck by its,beautiful flowers on show.Then,we visited the City Museum.,We saw plenty of valuable things,from that we learned a lot,about the city.After that,they drove to,Jinshan,Temple.That is,a beautiful place of interest in our city,but there we enjoyed,the wonderfully scenery of the sea.We had a delicious lunch at the,seafood Restaurant and we returned back at,noon.All,the foreign,friends were pleased with my arrangement.We did have the,wonderful time today.,friends,by,were,which,we,and,wonderful,a,Dear Mr.Brown,I am writing to thank you with your kind help.,Before you came to teach us,I had not,interest in,English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could,only speak a few words.But one and a half year later,I now think English fun to learn.I got a lot from your,encouraging,words.I,will always remember what you,said,“If you try to,you can be No 1!”I hope,youve,had pleasant journey home and will come to china,again sometimes in the future.I will write again,and send you the photos we take together,for,no,terrible,years,is,a,sometimetook,There are advantage for students to work while,Studying at school.One of them was that,they can earn money.For the most part,students working to earn money for their own,use.Earning their own money allow them,to spend on anything as if they please.,They would have to ask their parents for,money or for permission to do things by,the money.Some students may also to save,up for our college or future use.,advantages,is,work,allows,not,with,their,Dear,Anish,Here are the information about Manchester University,It is about 200 miles far away from London and it,has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school,or near the school.They have all sorts of course.,Im,sure you will find one you like it.I know you,are particular interested in human rights.So I will,see that there is anything on their website,I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport,when you arrived.You met him a few years ago,but he,has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look,forward to seeing you again.,is,courses,particularly,if/whether,to,arrive,and,Dear Ralph,Im a senior student.I have be in love with a boy,for three,years.But,he is a shy boy,so I wrote him a letter firstly,to express my feeling.And he wrote back.In his letter,he said,“We are students.Our task is study.Let us wait,to see until we have any chance after graduation.”So,after graduation I called to him,asking him about,go out.But he said he didnt want to.He just,wanted to sleep and watched TV.,What do you think I should do?Do you think,I should continue to love him and give up?,Sheila,been,first,feelings,to study/studying,if/whether,going,watch,or,My hometown is a pretty city,so people there,are kind and polite.With coming of spring,grass and,trees turn green,and flowers grew in many colors.,In summer,the sea under the blue sky is even more,beautiful.After autumn arrives,the city looks as,an old man with leaves fallen from the trees.In winter,a lot of white birds come to my city for food.I can,wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long,time.While they find fish coming to the surface,they fly down immediate and catch them without,delay.That is my city,and I love it so much.,and,the,grow,like,falling,they,when,immediately,Dear doctor,My name is Wang Lin.Im a middle school student.I have,a problem and Im writing to ask you for some advices.,Im just 1.57 meters high,and my weight is 71,kilos.Many,Students often make fun,me.Some,boys are unfriendly to me.,They called me“Meat Ball”.That makes me feel unhappy.,Im now worry about my weight.Though I am a bit too fat,I,feel rather good.I enjoy my meals.I love eating meat very,much.And I like sweet food,either.I often have sugar with,tea,milk,porridge,and even hot water.In the past two months,I have put off 5 kilos.Im worried about this problem,but I dont know what to lose weight quickly.Please help me,dear,doctor!I,hope to hear from you as soon as possible.,With best wishes,Wang Lin,advice,but,of,call,worried,well,too,on,how,Women,，,present and ancient,，,at the home and,abroad,wear,long,hair,that,adds to their beauty,But few,people realize it affects her brains,Hair grows constantly,It takes in nourishment(,营养,)constantly,If it was short,of,nourishment,itll,die and falls off,Body supplies hair with,nourishment,it,cant be stopped even in a minutes,If it takes in,too,many,that,means hair has already used too much,nourishment which body gives it to the head,As time passes,brain is relatively short of nourishment,It leads dizziness,(,头昏,),Therefore ones brains will be weakened,which,their,is,fall,minute,much,to,Its easy to go downhill than to climb uphill,：,so its,easier to fall into bad habits than into good one,Bad habits dont come suddenly,It come little by,little,Schoolboys first picks up a little in school and on,the streets,When they cannot write their homework,they,copy from their schoolmate,If they see bigger boys,smoking,theyalso want learn to smoke,When they,get,bigger,the,habits become stronger or,stronger,so,that they can not longer get rid of,them,What necessary it is that we get rid of the bad,habits in the beginning,！,easier,ones,They,pick,schoolmates,to,and,no,How,Fred and I havent many in common.I sometimes,wonder why we were friends at all.Fred is,always busy make things.Everything he makes is,so perfect that I sometime feel envy at his skill.,My trouble is that Im one of those lazy people.,Outside my work at the office,the only thing which,interests me is listening to the music.I have a,big collection of records but all day long the,only thing I can think is when Im going to,get home listen to a new piece.,much,are,making,sometimes,that,and,about,to,Mary was an university student.She didnt have much,money and her parents were not rich,and she had an uncle,who had been fortunately enough to collect great wealth.,He always give her valuable Christmas and birthday presents.,When her uncles birthday came round,Mary wanted buy him,something really special,but because she was rich,she did not,know how to get him.She went into the best shop in her,town and explained what her problem was to one of helpful,shop assistants.Finally she asked,“What do you have for,someone who has already got everything he wants or needs.,The assistant sighed deeply and answered,“Envy,only envy.”,a,but,fortunate,gave,to,he,what,the,assistants,As the world enters the 21st century,the development in the,science and technology will bring us much more new hopes and,chance,weve,never imagined before.People are hoping have,a peacefully and highly developed world.To catch up with,the new development and to be success in the new century the,younger generation is required to have different kind of skills,and abilitiessuch like the computer science and the English,language.Otherwise one will be left behind.Young people should,study even hard at school and prepare themselves mentally,and physically to meet with the challenge of the new century,many,to,peacful,successful,kinds,as,harder,Mark Twain was born in a small town of,Horid.When,he is only,twelve years old,his father died.Late he became a river boat pilot,Mark Twain was her pen name.During the American Civil War,He worked as a reporter and write a lot of,stories.Gradually,he,made his mark and his work were popular.He became one of the,best known writer of the 19th century in the U.S.A.In his life,Mark Twain wrote the number of stories and novels,on which,“Adventure of Tom Sawyer”is the most famous one.His writings,have been translated to many other languages,and they are,deeply love by the readers all over the world.,was,later,his,wrote,works,writers,a,into,loved,Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years.It came,sudden and went on for over three hours.After lunch,I,went into my room to have a rest.The air was hotter,and,all is quiet.Then a strong wind started to blow into my,room.Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air,and some flew out the open window.As I ran out to catch,them,big drop of rain began to fall.When I came back,into house,it was raining harder and harder.I tried,very hard to close the window.Then I heard a loudly,crashing(,碰撞的,)sound from the back of the house.When I ran,out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the,top of the back room.,suddenly,hot,was,of,drops,the,loud,broken,I have been planning to join in our college basketball team,next year,so now I am spending as more time as I can,with other people who likes to play.They are teaching,me the most important rules and technologies of the game,and I am getting the better all the time.We have a,neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area.,One of my neighbors is helping rest of us,improved our skills.Tonight we are playing against,one of the best teams in the city,and I think we can,beat them if we wont make any mistakes.,much,like,techniques,plays,improve,dont,the,Fang Tong is 34 years old,an actor,director and teacher of,Beijing Opera Theatre.Most of his students are from other part of,China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen,or seventeen.He hopes create an environment for his students,that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to,study in.He thought that an actor should relax himself when,performing.Yet his students deep respect him and he,never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing.,For his opinion,actors should go on even when they,feel they have made a mistake in their performances,because the moment is already gone but people can never,be back to it.So art is always changing and developing.,parts,the,to,thinks,deeply,heard,In,and,Today is Sunday,I have been studying all day long.On the,morning,I had a dry breakfast.We have no water to drink because,the water supply had cut off.The water had come back in,the evening.I did math then.I didnt stop after 12 oclock.After a,short lunch I had the break.Then I went to my Sunday English Class.,After a long and tired class for more than two hours,I got,to home.Some work had been done but some hadnt.I must,review all my subject such as the Sciences,the Humanities,which include Chinese,English,Politics and History as,well.Thats terribly!Especially when there was no water.,In,had,been,until,a,tiring,subjects,terrible,I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually,making people hard of hearingIm sure it has already been,happened to my neighbor.For years she has turned a deaf,ear to my requests to turn her radio down.When she gave a,party she isnt have to invite the rest of the street.Everyone,can dance in her music in his own room.Now a scientist has,discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on,rats.He declares they break down,almost paralyze(,瘫,)with,legs trembled.Then it is simply a matter of throwing them,out by their tail.I wonder if the same thing will happen to,my neighbor someday.,recently,gives,doesnt,to,their,trembling,tails,Like most of my schoolmates,I have neither brothers nor,sisters-in any other words,I am an only child.My parents,love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure,that I get a good education.They did not want me to do,any work at family;they want me to devote all my time to,my studies so that Ill get good marks in all my subject.We,may be one family and live under a same roof,but we do,not seem to get much time to talk about together.It looks,as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.Do they,really understand their own daughter What things are in,other homes,I wonder.,to,do,home,subjects,the,or,familiesMarch 22nd,Tuesday,cloudy,I watch TV until nearly 12 o clock,so I could not,go over my lessons.This morning I got up very late,that I had to hurry school without breakfast yet I,was late of the first class.When I entered the,classroom,the,maths,teacher had to stop explaining,an important problem,and all the eyes fixed upon,me.My face turned to red.Something even worse,happened to me in the English class.The teacher asked,me to recite the text,but I could speak nothing but,sorry,as I did not spend any time preparing my lessons.,The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes,I stood,at my bench without daring to raise my head.What,a terrible day I had!I will never do anything like this.,watched,so,to,for,were,say,for,cold,A king liked to write stories.One day,the king showed some his stories,with a famous writer.The writer said that,these stories were bad.The king get angry,with him and sent him to the prison.After,some time the king felt pity for the writer,and set him freely.When the writer was,out prison,again the king showed him,some stories and asked how he thought them.,The writer turned into the soldiers and said,Take me back prison.,of,to,got,free,of,of,to,to,At beginning of term I introduced,my teacher for my parents.Our teacher,Mr.Wang asked my parents of my,summer holiday.To my parents opinion,I have a good time with my classmates.,I told my teacher that I had finished,homeworks,at home.Then I helped,my father in the farm.We went on,work by the lights of the tractorsFather had only two and three young men,working for him at harvest time.,the,to,about,In,had,homework,on,or,working,Time flies as an arrow.Im already in the second half,of senior grade 3 before I realized it.It is only a little more,than three months before I graduate middle school.At,the present,Im busy reviewing my lessons in order to,take the college entrance examination.I hope to go to,Beijing University,that is one of the best universities not,only in China but also in the world.Ill try my best to turn,my dream to reality.Most of my classmates are also,studying very hard to realize our wishes.I do believe everyone,will be able to enter a very good university and college.,like,realize,from,examinations,which,into,their,or,Once,lately at night,an Englishman came out,of his room into a passage of the hotel and ask,the servant to bring her a glass of water.The servant,did as he asked.The Englishman returned his room,and a few minutes later he came into the passage again,and once more asked the servant a glass of water.,Every a few minutes the Englishman would come out,of his room and repeated his request.After half an hour,the astonishing servant decided to ask the man what,he w