英语六级记叙文写作要点.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,记叙文,记叙文,历年记叙文题目：,An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident 2003(6),The Day My Classmate Fell Ill(or Get Injured)2003(9),In Honor of Teachers on the Occasion of Teachers Day 2005(6),记叙文,写作记叙文要掌握好以下几个方面：,要有明确的中心思想，文章的所有情节要围绕中心思想展开,交待清楚记叙文的各个要素,时间、地点、人物、事件以及事件的起因和结果。,剪裁合理思路清晰,记叙文,写作注意事项,（,1,）记叙文的重点,（,2,）动词的时态,（,3,）叙述的人称,-,第一人称,/,第三人称,记叙文,记叙文的结构,第一段：简略叙述五大要素,第二段：按题目要求展开情节,第三段：指出叙述此件事的意义,记叙文,Directions:,For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:,Un Unforgettable Experience,.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the ouline below:,请叙述一件让你最难忘的事件,1.,叙述时间、地点、人物、事件起因。,2.,具体描述事件发展过程,3.,总结个人对此事件的看法,记叙,-,寝室火灾,相关词汇,：,flame,火焰,fire extinguisher,灭火器,scream,尖叫,catch the fire,put out the fire,turn off the electricity,bed,wardrobe,衣柜,mosquito-net,蚊帐,记叙文,观点：,be dangerous in such public places,be alert to the potential cause of fire,prepare fire extinguisher beforehand,turn off the electricity first,If it is controllable,put it off.,uncontrollable,run out of the building,记叙文写作模板,第一段：叙述时间、地点、人物、事件起因,It happened/took place/occurred that at about,数字,oclock,人物,was on the way to,地点,.Just at the moment,事件的开端,.It impressed me most because,事件的突出表现,.What happened next was,事件的发展,.,记叙文写作模板,It happened that,at about 11 oclock in a hot evening,I was,on the way to,my friends dorm.,Just at the moment,a sudden flash of light came into my sight.,It impressed me most because,it was the first time I encounter such a fire disaster that I did not realize what to do first.,What happened next was,the screaming of many girls.,记叙文写作模板,第二段：具体描述事件发展过程,At first,事件进展的一方面,.Almost at the same time,事件进展的另一方面,.Whats more,事件进展的第三方面,.To come about as a consequence/as a result,事件的进展结果,.,记叙文写作模板,At first,the flame lit up the curtains and with the wind it quickly spread to the left side of the room.,Almost at the same time,the mosquito-net of the bed burned immediately,and the student on the bed screeched(,尖叫,)and jumped down from inside.,Whats more,the fire spread to the left corner where there were shelves of books and wardrobes(,衣柜,).,To come about as a consequence,all of us rushed for water and the fire extinguisher(,灭火器,),and then fortunately the fire had been put out with joint efforts.No one was injured.,记叙文写作模板,第三段：总结个人对此事件的看法。,As I understand,我的看法,.On the other hand,看法依据一,.On the other hand,看法依据二,Last but not least,文章结论,.,记叙文写作模板,As I understand,its too dangerous in such circumstances.,On the one hand,everyone should be alert to the factors which are not safe.,On the other hand,everyone should not be careless when he was dealing with electricity.,Finally yet importantly,when the fire was oneveryone should get together,hand in hand to fight against disasters that threathened peoples lives.,记叙文,常用的体现时间顺序的衔接手段有以下几类：,事件发生的初始阶段：,first,firstly,at first,at the beginning,to start with,first of all,in the first place,to begin/start with,事件延续阶段：,after that,afterwards,later,then,next,whats more记叙文,事件尾声：,finally,in the end,eventually,at last,共时性事件：,at the same time,meanwhile,now,presently,simutaneously,表事件过程：,when,during,记叙文,练习：,Directions,：,For this part,，,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic:,My Favorite Movie,.you should write at least 120 words following the outline given below,：,1,、最喜爱看的电影是什么,2,、电影的大概内容,3,、为什么喜爱它，有何意义,