问题解决类作文的写作.ppt

Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,Click to edit Master title style,问题解决类作文的写作,雅思部 龚婷婷,内容框架,雅思写作的重要性,1,雅思大作文的分类,2,问题解决类作文的写法,3,范文解析,4,总结,5,1.,雅思写作的重要性,写作在雅思考试中占据着很大的比重，能否把作文写好与雅思总成绩直接挂钩。,作文不仅是最能够体现考生基本功的一项考试，而且最能够体现考生的实际应用能力。,大作文的话题一般会涉及科技，教育，医疗，卫生，环保，天文知识，电子信息等各方面的内容。,雅思写作的文体主要包括观点类、讨论类及问题解决类等,。,返回,2.,雅思大作文的分类,（,1,）观点类：题目讲述某种社会问题，提出某项观点或者某两个对立观点，问作者观点，文章侧重作者本人的观点，所以重点是详述自己的观点。,如：、,Environmental protection is a key issue in todays world.Some say the protection is an effort that should be done at international level.To what extent,do you agree or disagree?,、,Health is a basic right for all citizens and therefore should be offered to all people free of charge.To what extent,do you agree or disagree?,Give your reasons for your answer.,2.,雅思大作文的分类,（,2,）讨论类：题目涉及到某个问题的两方对立观点，题目要求两方观点都要讨论，并给出自己的观点，所以两个观点均需要给出理由。,如：,、,Advertising is playing an important role in our modern society,，,and we are confronted with various advertisements on a daily basis.,Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects?,、,Some people think,that culture traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money making attractions aimed to tourists.,Others believe that,it is the only way that traditions can be remained in the world.Discuss both and give your own opinion,2.,雅思大作文的分类,问题解决类：题目提出某种问题，问这种问题的发生原因和解决措施，不涉及观点。,如：、,There is a gap between living in the city and the countryside.What are the reasons in your country and,how,can the difference be reduced?,、,Recent figures of crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world.Discuss the possible reasons and,how to solve it?,返回,3.,问题解决类作文的写法,问题解决类作文写作的基本程序：,针对话题分析原因；,选择几个代表性的原因；,就典型原因提出解决措施。,3.,问题解决类作文的写法,具体来说，可以采取以下两种思路：,1,、第一段：引出话题，提出问题,第二段,:,原因,1+措施,1,第三段,:,原因,2+,措施,2,（可以有更多段落）,第四段,:,总结,2,、第一段,:,引出话题，提出问题,第二段,:,原因,1,，,2,3,第三段,:,措施,1,，,2,3,第四段,:,总结,3.,问题解决类作文的写法,以,Topic:There is a gap between living in the city and the countryside.What are the reasons in your country and how can the difference be reduced?,为例讲解如何写问题解决类作文,3.,问题解决类作文的写法,首先分析造成城乡差距的原因：,1,，,The scale of the investment,2,The level of education,3,The degree of accepting new things,such as technology,information,4,The location,5,whether get the help from others,6,the assistance of the government,3.,问题解决类作文的写法,选择三个左右有代表性的原因，并相应提出解决措施；,例如：政府的政策倾向；,发达地区高生活水平的人应该对落后农村地区给予帮助；,落后农村地区的人民自己要自立自强等等。,3.,问题解决类作文的写法,接下来就要想想如何在每一段的段首写一句流畅的，有高级词汇或句型，没有任何错误的句子，最后一段更是要起到画龙点睛的作用。,3.,问题解决类作文的写法,比如第一段可这么写：,It is recorded that the gap of living in cities and the countryside,.,第二段在列举原因时可用连词,firstly,secondly,thirdly,或,first and foremost,furthermore,last but not least,；,第三段在提出解决措施时也要写得有条理一些，重要的且你认为可行的写在前面；,最后一段作为总结段，可说明一下解决了这个问题的深远影响。,返回,4.,范文解析,The gap of living in cities and the countryside is,larger and larger,(,比较级,).,What,are the reasons in your country and,how,to reduce the differences?,（恰当使用副词，清晰了然）,As the step of economic development,accelerates,the gap between the city and the countryside becomes more and more,overt,（高级词汇，比用,obvious,要好）,which arouses,colossal,（高级词汇，得分亮点）,concerns,（这个长句包括原因状语从句和非限定性定语从句，可以显示出考生的基本功）,.Take a further look at the phenomenon,there are three major causes,.（自然过渡句）,4.,范文解析,Firstly,the insufficiency of investment in the rural areas accounts mainly for the issue.China,for example,covers a very large area.,Due to,the emphasis on the development in the coastal areas,the government devotes more investment in the large cities,such as Shanghai,Beijing and Guangzhou.The investment,undoubtedly,is repaid by the threefold increase of economy and commerce in these cities.,However,this is not the case in the rural areas and the western regions.The lack of investment barriers the productivity and economic development and sharpens the gap between the city and the countryside.,4.,范文解析,Secondly,the low education level in the rural areas,contributes,partly,to,the gap of living.Education is the prime force of productivity.,Keeping,this,in mind,many countries and governments,give priority to,the,development of education.Chinas education,witnessed,a rapid growth in the past decade.,4.,范文解析,Finally,the,influx,of migrant workers to the cities from the countryside,deteriorates,(,使恶化,)the undeveloped condition in the rural areas.The life style in the urban areas,is,very,attractive to,the people in the countryside.To seek more working opportunities,many people abandon the fertile lands and leave them uncultivated.If the situation continues,it will lead to serious unbalance of economic and regional development.,4.,范文解析,To sum up,only,when the government renders more concerns over the issue,can,the gap between the cities and the countryside be bridged,（倒装句型）,返回,5.,总结,从以上范文我们也可以看出写问题解决类作文的基本思路:先提出问题，寻找原因，提出解决措施，总结。,Thank You!,