高一考试一作文.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only.As we all know,a good learning environment is,vital,（至关重要）,if we want to study English well.Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment.When English is the only language used in the classroom,students will have more,opportunities,（机会）,to practice listening and speaking.Therefore,they will be able to learn more quickly.,我宁愿英语课只用英语教。众所周知，好的学习氛围对学好英语至关重要。用英语教的课为学生提供了这样的语境。当英语是教室的唯一用语时，学生就有更好的机会练习听说。这样一来，他们将能学得更快。,高考英语书面表达评分标准,1.,第五档 很好,(21-25,分,),：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所 致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,2.,第四档 好,(16-20,分,),：完全完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的虽漏掉,1,、,2,个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,第三档 一般,(11-15,分,),：基本完成了试题规定的任务，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的虽漏掉一些内容但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。,第二档 较差,(6-10,分,),：未恰当完成试题规定的任务，信息未能清楚地传达给读者漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。,第一档 差,(0-5,分,),：未完成试题规定的任务，信息未能传达给读者明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。,上面的短文是,07,年浙江高考满分的第一段,高考英语书面表达基础篇,目的：汉译英的正确转化,学会用一些连接词,连词成句,培养用定语从句的能力,得分关键有哪些？,Dear Uncle:,出现了一些错误如：,Dear,jiu,jiu,My dear,等,一、要点全面（包括开头、结尾）,要表明写信的目的,Im proud/happy,（表示心情、心理的词）,to,Jiangsu,Shizhuang,Middle School,introduceto,inform you,big and bright classrooms,as well as modern buildings to study in,二、更高级词汇、表达（学以致用）,find the new school life a bit challenging,feel lucky to have teachers and classmates,be always willing to,offer help,I feel lucky to have teachers and classmates who are always willing to offer help,三、用高级句型（目前学用定语从句）,With their help,I have made great progress.,本句不多余，而且使得内容充实。,四、适当添加相关的条件、原因、结果等。“短话长说”,encourage us to develop all kinds of interests,our school life is colorful,make our school life colorful,The school encourages us to develop all kinds of interests,therefore our school life is colorful.,In order to make our school life colorful,the school encourages us to develop all kinds of interests.,五、运用连接词，使过渡自然，避免生硬,原因：,therefore thus as a result so,转折：,however nevertheless though,（常放句末，用逗号隔开）,并列：,besides whats more in addition on top of this as well as,The school encourages us to develop all kinds of interests,which makes our school life colorful.,The school encourages us to develop all kinds of interests,and this makes our school life colorful.,We can _ any club that we are interested in.,join/select,learn how to get along well with,in the school devote myself to,prepare myself for the further studies in America,I think this is a good school where I can devote myself to preparing myself for the future studies in America.,I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.,Yours,Wugang,