写作的基本步骤.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Unit1 Cultural relics,Composition,授课老师：彭晓方,A cultural relic,is something that is,_,and,_,which has,survived for,a,_,time and,tells people about the,_,.,What is a cultural relic?,old,valuable,long,past,The Great wall,书面表达,假如你是李华，住在山东省的一个县城,诸城，城南有一段古长城遗迹。最近，为了建设经济区，政府要将这段长城拆毁，为此你很担心。请给报社写一封信。,要点如下：,1.,介绍一下目前的情况。,2.,你的心情。,3.,你认为保留这段长城的意义。,4.,解决问题的办法,。,要求：,1,词数,100,左右,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。,3.,参考词汇：经济区,economic zone,Dear Editor,-,Sincerely yours,Li,Hua,Tasks:,写作的步骤：,Task 1.,以小组为单位讨论明确作文应该包含的几个方面,1.,李华目前的情况,2.,李华的心情,3.,保留长城的意义,4.,解决的办法,Task 2.,在头脑中搜索你想用的单词或词组。,The Great Wall,senior high school student,a part of,acient,Great wall,Economic zone,important,destroying the Great Wall,suggestions,.,Task 3.,想好开头句，文章的开头句，每段的开头句。,Dear Editor,I am a senior high school student living in a small town called,Zhucheng,in Shandong Province.,I am really worried about this,As is known to all,the Great wall is important for China,Due to this,I have some suggestions.,Task 4.,写好其它句子来支持你自己的观点,As is known to,all,the,Great wall is important for Chinafirstly,secondly,Due to this,I have some suggestions.It would be better if.and,Task 5.,适当加上一些评论,:,In my eyes,.,In my opinion,I think.,I agree that,It would be better if,Wed,bettter,.,Task 6.,写出结尾句。,Task 7.,补充，完善，注意过渡词。,.That s all what I really appreciate.Thank you for your attention.,Sincerely yours,Li,Hua,过渡词,1.,and,in addition,first,second,third,2.before,after,when,later,immediately,3.beyond,beside,behind,below,4.,but,still,however,even,though,5,.because,so,therefore,thus,otherwise,6.all in all,in a word,above all,in brief,Attention!,make sure the,spelling,is correct.,make sure the,tense,you use is correct.,make sure the,information,is complete.,Task 8:,写一段,50,字左右的文字，内容包括以下方面,你认为保留这段长城的意义以及解决问题的办法,有用句型（,Page6),I think/dont think that,2.But,，,I dont agree with it.,3.In my opinion,4.I dont believebecause,5.There is no doubt that,我想,/,我不认为,但是，我不同意（这种做法）,我认为,我不相信,因为,毫无疑问，,Outline,As is known to,all,the,Great wall is important for China.Firstly,-.Secondly,-Due to this,I have some suggestions.It would be better,if-and-,topic1,reason1,topic2,reason2,suggestion2,suggestion1,As is known to all,the Great Wall is important to China.,Firstly,its long history witnessed the development of China.,Secondly,we should not achieve economic development by destroying the cultural relics.,Due to this,I have some suggestions,.,It would be better if,we choose another place for the new economic project,and,we should set laws to protect the Great Wall.,范例：,Summary,写作文顺序：分析,写作,检查,作文注意事项：单词拼写，句子时态，信息完整，关联词,注意书写,Home work:,Add more details to this composition,