高一新生的书面表达之我见.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,教出 龙建湘,单位 望城一中,How to deal with writing,书面表达,he,be fond of,English,He is fond of English.,Join the following words or phrases,into,sentences,.,you,he,did,last term,math,teach,some students,the next room,in,singing,are,there,us,an hour,it,by bike,take,to get,will,to the park,Did,he teach,you math,last term?,There are some students singing in the next room.,It will take us an hour to get to the park by bike.,4.you,am,I,to see,very glad,5.,study,hard,us,to,has promised,he,I am very glad to see you.,He has promised us to study hard.,简单句的六种基本句型,主系动词表,主不及物动词（状语）,主及物动词单宾语,主及物动词双宾语,主及物动词复合宾语,There be,某人某物某地某时,What are you?I am a student.,What is she like?She is beautiful.,2.He studies very hard.,Great changes have taken place in our school.,3.I have bought an English book.,He visited one of his friends a few days ago.,4.He has taught us Chinese for three years.,Would you please lend me your book?,5.We have made him our monitor.,Our parents are expecting us to be promising.,6.There are over 50 students in our class.,There used to be a,big,tree here.,Use different sentences to express the,same idea,Mr,Green visited China last year.,He joined the army two years ago.,Mr,Green paid a visit to China last year.,Mr,Green came to China for a visit a year ago.,It is two years since he joined the army.,He has been a soldier for two years.,3.She hopes to go to university.,4.I looked out of the window.I saw some students playing there.,She is looking forward to going to university,She hopes that she will go to university.,Looking out of the window,I saw some students playing there.,5.The boy is seven years old.He can go to school.,6.An old man fell down.Xiao,Mei,saw it.She ran to help him.,The boy is old enough to go to school.,Seeing the old man fall down,Xiao,Mei,ran to help him.,As soon as the old man fell down,Xiao,Mei,ran to give him a hand.,Five,steps,Analysing,the topic:,style person tense key points,2.Using words or phrases to express the key points.,3.Making sentences,4.Forming the passage,5.Checking again and making a clear copy,Some,suggestions,Suggestion 1:Try to use simple sentences and avoid a fancy style.,Suggestion 2:Try to write clearly,use good grammar and complete sentences.,Suggestion 3:Try to use some necessary words or phrases to make your passage more fluent and natural.,Suggestion 4:Try to use good beginnings and endings.,Suggestion 5:,Pay,much,attention to your handwriting.Good,handwriting,does help to gain good marks.,M,atch the following with the passage,.,_,going,abroad,to study is very popular._ some primary school students are studying abroad,let alone university students and post-graduates.Studying abroad can widen ones view and help learn about the cultures of foreign countries.,_,its a good way to learn foreign languages._ studying abroad is not suitable for everyone._ a students family cant support him he has to struggle in a foreign country for a living not for his studies,_ he neednt go abroad.He can study well in China and he will be able to succeed _.,Nowadays,nowadays,Even,Of course,But,If,and,I think,as well,even,of course,but,and,as well,I think,if,假如你是李华，从,新民晚报,看到某公司招聘一名英语秘书根据启事请你用英语写一封简短的应聘书，说明你的履历主要内容如下：,姓名,李华,年龄,岁,性别,女,学历,武汉大学,工作经历,从教英语年,爱好和兴趣,英语口语，书面语和秘书,写信时间,年月日,注意：词数：词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,解析,仔细审题,：,本文属于求职书信体人称：第一人称,列出要点,a.,贵公司招聘一名英语秘书；,b.,姓名，年龄，性别,c.,大学毕业后从教英语三年,d.,对秘书工作感兴趣,e.,英语口语，书面语都不错,f.,希望贵公司能录用,3,关键词句,4.,连句成文,5,加上好的开头和结尾，使用恰当的连词,g.I hope your company can employ me.,f.I am interested in the job of secretary.,e.I speak and write English very well.,d.I graduated from the university.,c.I work as an English teacher.,b.Im Li Hua,a girl,twenty-six.,Your company wants an English secretary.,Dear Sir,I have recently learned from,Xinmin,Evening Paper that an English secretary is wanted in your company.,I beg to take this job.,My name is Li,Hua,a girl of twenty.I have been an English teacher for 3 years,since,I graduated from Wuhan,Uniersity,.I am interested in the job of secretary.,Besides,I can speak and write English very well.,So I think I can do the job well.,I would be very thankful,if I could get the job.,I am,looking forward to,your reply.,Best wishes.,May 29,2007,Yours truly,Li,Hua,书面表达中的常见错误,1.,搭配不当,。,中国的物价低廉。,The prices are cheap in China.(wrong),2.,词义内涵理解错误。,他的右眼瞎了。,His right eye is blind.(wrong),The prices are low in China.(right),He is blind in his right eyeright),3.,词性使用错误。,多数学生反对这个计划。,Most students against this plan.(wrong),4.,对应翻译错误。,球场上有很多学生在打篮球。,The,playground has many students playing basketball.(wrong),Most students are against this plan.(right),There are many students playing basketball on the playground.(right),欢迎你们来到望城一中。,Welcome you to No.1 Middle School of,Wangcheng,.(wrong),有人认为这样做错了。,There are some people think it is wrong to do so.(wrong),Some people think it is wrong to do so.(right),Welcome to No.1 Middle School of,Wangcheng,.(right),5.,动词使用错误,他离开这里五年了。,He has left here for five years.(wrong),6.,句型错误,我们不可能在这样短的时间内完成这项任务。,We are impossible to finish this work in such a short time.(wrong),It is five years since he left here.(right),He left here five years ago.(right),It is impossible for us to finish this work in such a short time.(right),.,词性混淆错误。,我喜欢我的工作。,I am like my job.(wrong),.,完整句子使用错误。,末班车开走了，我们只得走回家。,The last bus had gone,we had to walk home.(wrong),I like my,job.(right),比较：,He likes his father.,他喜欢他的父亲。,He is like his father.,他像他的父亲。,The last bus had gone,so we had to walk home.(right),Homework:,请根据以下内容写一份书面通知。,题目,如何学好英语,主讲人,Brown,教授,地点,315,教室,时间,6,月,20,日上午,10,点,注意事项,1.,请自带钢笔、笔记本，不要喧哗。,2.,请准时参加。,3.,会后放电影。,4.6,月,20,日下午,3,点讨论。,Bye-bye!,