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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,高考作文练习答案解析,书面表达,（,1,）：,根据下面的表格以“,How to Reduce the Citys Present population,”,为题，写一篇作文，谈谈你对这个问题的见解,注意：,1,。只需把表格中的要点写清楚。短文的开头与结尾已写出，不记入总数。,2,。词数：,100-120,。,参考词汇：政策,policy,；,压力,pressure,；,郊区,suburb,；,生活小区,living block,；,Our city is too crowded now,and to solve this problem,three proposals are put forward-,正文,-If these proposals are well carried out,the citys population will be greatly reduced.,建议,具体措施,目的,I。,A,。,晚婚,B,。,一对夫妇，一个孩子,减少人口自然增长（人口出生率）,II。,严格控制外地人口进城务工经商,减少外地人口对城市的压力,III。,在,郊区建立便于生活、集学校、电影院、医院、购物中心于一体的生活小区,吸引城市居民到郊区的生活小区工作和生活,答案：,How to Reduce the Citys Present population,Our modern city is too crowded,and to solve the problem,three proposals are put forward.,Most people believe that we should first practice the policy of late marriage and“One couple,one child”in order to reduce the birth rate.Secondly,the city government mush have a tight control of country people entering cities to engage in trade or do manual labor so as to reduce the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population.Finally more and more people suggest that living blocks with shopping centers,schools,hospitals,cinemas and theatres should be in the suburbsIn this way the city people will be encouraged to move there to live and work.,If these proposals are well carried out,the citys population will be greatly reduced.,书面表达,（,2,）,假如你是李欣，对和“,All right”,的“,Thats all right”,用法及区别不太清楚，你的英语老师给你作了简单的讲解，还鼓励你向英文报纸的外籍编辑,(editor),写信问这个问题。现在，请你用用语向某一英语报纸的编辑写一封信，询问和的用法和区别，并请他举例说明。最后问他是否有空来学校作英语讲座，谈谈如何学好英语。,注意：,1,）不要逐条翻译,2,）,注意书信格式,3,）词数：,100-120,。,答案：,Dear editor,My name is LI,Xin,.Im a middle school student.I wonder if I can ask you a question.My teacher told me that there was something different in meaning between the two sentences“All right”and“Thats all right”.But I cant understand them very well.Would you please tell me the difference between them in simple,English,?And I also hope that you will give me some examples.By the way,would you be kind enough to come to our school to give us a lecture o how to learn English well?,Wish to get your reply soon.,Yours truly,Li,Xin,书面表达,（,3,）,假如你是学校学生会主席。现请按下列要求，以学生会的名义用英文写一个举行英语演讲比赛的,书面,/,口头,通知，欢迎全体同学参加。,1,）目的；诣在提高全体学生的英语口语水平。,2,）报名时间与地点；星期五，六月四日前，学生会办公室,3,）比赛时间和地点：下周三晚,7,：,00-10,：,30,学生礼堂,4,）在本校工作的加拿大老师格林先生和五位本校英语老师将被邀请当评委，前六名优胜者或奖。,5,）字数：,100-120,答案,（,3,）,Notice,In order to improve our spoken English,we are going to have an English-speaking contest from 7:00 to 10:30 p.m.next Wednesday in the school auditorium.Mr.Green,who came from Canada and now works in our school,together with five English teachers will be invited as judges.The first six winners will be given rewards.Those who would like to take part in the contest may sign up in the office of the Students Union,before this Friday,June 4,th,.,All the students are welcome to the contest.,May 30,th,1998.,the Students Union,答案：,All the students,may I have your attention please?,Our Students Union are going to organize a-in order to-in-.Mr.Green-together with-.The first six winners-.Those who will-should-in-before-.,Thank you for all your attention!,正文格式,The Weak Are the Slaves of the Strong,An old man was sitting in an armchair at home,reading his newspaper.Besides him lay a dog sleeping soundly.Suddenly the old man decided to leave home for a while,but he could not go out with his slippers on.So he woke up the dog and let it fetch the shoes for him.Out of his expectation,the dog didnt even stand up,but just barked with two eyes closed again.The old man was completely puzzled.As he was wondering what was happening,he saw the cat coming towards him with the pairs of shoes in its month.Seeing this,he was totally dumbfounded.,Is this the law that the weak are the slaves of the strong?,书面表达：,评分原则以及给分范围,第七档,：,（,25-29,）能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚。,第六档：,（,20-24,）能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。,第五档：,（,16-19,）能写明大部分要点；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。,第四档：（,12-15,）能写明基本要点；语言虽然有许多错误，尚能达意,第三档：（,8-11,）能写出部分要点语言错误多，影响意思表达。,第二档：（,4-7,）只能写出一两个要点，语言错误教多，只有个别句子能懂,第一档：（,0-3,）只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。,内容要点,：,1,）老人在家，坐在椅子上，看报，狗在旁边睡觉。,2,）老人想出去，唤醒狗，去拿鞋,3,）狗闭眼叫，老人迷惑不解,4,）猫叼鞋走来，老人目瞪口呆,注：内容要点可用不同的方式来表达，对紧扣主题的发挥不扣分。,99,年高考英语作文评分原则：,1,）本题总分为,30,分，其中内容和语言占,29,分，词数占,1,分，按七个档次给分。,2,）,平分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。词数在,90-110,之间的，加,1,分。,内容要点,：,1,）开头语,2,）结束语,3,）盖起了一幢新教学楼,4,）新建了一座图书馆,5,）新操场位于学校前面,6,）种了许多树,99,高考作文答案：,Dear Mr.Smith,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school.Quite a few changes have taken place.On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.One the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.In it there are all kinds of books,newspapers and magazines.The playground is now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.I hope you come and see for yourself some day.,Best wishes,yours,Li,Hua,