高考英语 专题解析基础写作 建议倡议课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,6.,建议倡议,晨读背诵,1.cover topics like.,涵盖的主题有,2.arouse ones interest,激发某人的兴趣,3.get involved in,参与，涉及,4.be well-received,广受欢迎,5.make some suggestions,提一些建议,相关短语,6.protect our environment,保护我们的环境,7.the environmental pollution,环境污染,8.be of great benefit to.,对,大有好处9.get well-prepared(for)(,为,),做好充分的准备,10.take responsibility to do sth.,有责任做某事,11.the coming speech contest,即将到来的演讲比赛,12.leave a deep impression on,给,留下深刻的印象,13.take my suggestion into consideration,考虑我的建议,14.have the chance to do sth.,有机会做某事,15.help students improve their English,帮助学生提高英语水平,1.,The main reason is that,the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.,其主要原因是父母的压力使他们几乎没有时间参加其他活动。,2.,The reason why,Im late,is that,I missed the bus.,我迟到的原因是没赶上公共汽车。,相关句式,3.I like it very much,mainly for two reasons,.,我喜欢它,主要有两个原因。,4.In my opinion,there are three reasons for,this.,在我看来,有三个原因。,5.My views,are based on the following reasons,.,我的观点是基于以下理由。,6.The reasons for this are as follows.,其理由如下。,7.,So I suggest that,you take your friends advice.,因此,我建议你接受你朋友的建议。,8.,Here I have some suggestions,.,这里我有几条建议。,8.,It would be better if you could,share more of the housework,such as cleaning,washing and cooking.,如果你能分担更多的家务,如扫地、洗衣、做饭,那就更好了。,技巧点拨,1.,在建议倡议的写作中,应开门见山指出写作目的,陈述建议或倡议的内容。如：,I am writing to give suggestions about.(,建议信,),或,In order to.,I am going to make the following suggestions(,倡议书,),。,2.,建议倡议类型的作文都有相关的一些固定句型,考生需要熟练掌握使用这些句型和相关的语法。比如,在句中使用到,advise,suggest,或,advice,suggestion,等表示建议的词时,要考虑到虚拟语气的使用。,典型例题,广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观,众的英语节目,新聘任了来自英国的,John,作为节目编辑助理。现在,John,就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。,写作内容,假如你是学生李华,建议开办“广州全接触”,(All-round Guangzhou),节目。请根据以下节目设想给,John,写信：,节目内容,介绍广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人,播放时间,每周六、日,方便学生周末观看,其他设想,邀请中学生参加节目,提高学生的收看兴趣,开办理由,1.,中学生可以更多地了解广州文化,以便向外国游客介绍广州,2.,有助于提高中学生的英语水平,预期效果,将会受到中学生的欢迎,Dear John,，,I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students.So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”.,.,I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,例题导写,确定文体。建议信属于应用文信件类的范畴,写作的时候一般使用将来时或者一般现在时。建议信在于给对方合理并且能够接受的建议,考生应该注意使用一些委婉的语气。,信息重组。我们可以把题中信息整合成以下,5,个汉语句子：,1.,节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人。,2.,建议每周六、日举办，方便学生周末观看。,3.,建议邀请中学生参加节目,激发学生的收看兴趣。,4.,这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化,还有助于提高中学生的英语水平,这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。,5.,我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。,词语翻译 翻译或完成下列词或短语。,句,1,：,(1),包括,(,节目,)_,(2),历史，教育，景点，饮食，名人,_,History,education,scenic spots/tourist attractions,food,famous people/celebrities,cover/include,句,3,：,(3),激发某人的兴趣,_,句,4,：,(4),提高英语水平,_,句,5,：,(5),受到欢迎,_,_,be popular among/with sb./be well-received,by/be welcomed by,spark/stimulate/arouse ones interest,improve ones English,难句翻译 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。,句,2,：,(1)(,这个节目将于,),每周六、日,(,播放,),。,(1)It would be better to broadcast it on weekends./I suggest that the program be broadcast on weekends./It is a good idea to broadcast it on weekends.,(2),方便学生周末观看。,(2)We students can have the chance to watch it./It will be convenient for us students to watch it.,合并：,It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.(,因果关系,可以使用,so.that.,句型,),句,3,：,(3)(,你也可以,),邀请中学生参加节目。,(3)You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in/take part in the program.,(4)(,这个节目可以,),提高学生的收看兴趣。,(4)It will surely arouse/spark/stimulate other students interest in it.,合并：,You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in/take part in the program,which will surely arouse/spark/stimulate other students interest in it.(,补充说明关系,可以使用,which,非限制性定语从句,),句,4,：,(5)(,这个节目帮助,),中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。,(5)This program can get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou.,(6)(,中学生可以,),向外国游客介绍广州。,(6)The students can introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.,(7)(,这个节目,),有助于提高中学生的英语水平。,(7)This program helps students improve their English.,合并：,Not only will this program help students improve their English,but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(,第,5,个句子和第,7,个句子是并列关系,因此我们可以用,not only.but also.,这组连词把它们连接起来,并且注意统一主语,第,6,句是作者提出建议的原因,可以用,so as to,引导出目的状语。,),参考范文,Dear John,，,I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students.So,Im writing to suggest,a program “All-round Guangzhou”.This program will,cover topics like,the history,education,famous scenic spots,food and famous people of Guangzhou.,It would be better to,broadcast it on,weekends,so that we students,can,have the chance to,watch it.,Besides,you can also invite some middle school students to,get involved in,the program,which will surely arouse other students interest in it.,Not only will this program help students improve their English,but also get them to know more about,the culture of Guangzhou,so as to,introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.I am sure it will,be well-received by,the middle school students.I hope you can,take my suggestion into consideration,.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,连句成篇。,考生把句子合并成篇章的时候,需要注意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表示来信的目的,如：,You have asked me for my advice on.and I will try to make suggestions./Thanks for trusting me./Regarding.,Id like to make some suggestions,等句型。在表示建议的时候,考生可以使用,I feel that it would be beneficial if./I would like to suggest that.,等句型。另外,考生若是使用虚拟语气的句子,If I were you,I would.,也会让文章增色不少。,能力提高,To Whom It May Concern,As 1 _ student of this university,I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation 2 _ your kind assistance as always.Meanwhile,I feel that 3 _would be 4 _(benefit)to express my views 5 _(concern)the quality of the library service.,concerning,a,for,it,beneficial,In the first place,I find that most keyboards of the library computers are in poor operation,6 _ brings much inconvenience to the users.I would also recommend the library 7 _(improve)the efficiency of buying new books and academic journals.Last 8 _not least,the study rooms need to be furnished 9 _a better lighting system.,I hope that you take my suggestions into serious 10 _(consider).,Yours sincerely,John,which,to improve,but,with,consideration,课堂练习,假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。,赛前准备,做好充分准备：如平时可对着镜子练习,用语简练,使评委印象深刻,比赛时,保持微笑,忘词时不紧张，继续演讲,写作内容,1.,说明回信的意图；,2.,向小明提出建议；,3.,预祝小明比赛成功。,Dear Xiaoming,，,.,Yours,，,Li Hua,参考范文,Dear Xiaoming,You have told me that you,are very nervous about the coming speech contestand I will try to,make some suggestions,which I hope can help you.,In my opinion,you should,get well prepared,before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror.,Besides,you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can,leave a deep impression on,the judges.When you are giving the speech,remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words,dont be panic and just continue your speech,because no one will notice it.Wish you success in the speech!,Yours,，,Li Hua,精华点评,建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯,使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者,You should,的句型表示建议,这样比较生硬，因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富,如范文中使用了,you should.,you had better.,remember to do,等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候,可以用简明扼要的句型,如,wish you good luck/wish you success/may you succeed,使文章长短句结合得当。,课外作业,由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存,为鼓励大家节能环保,你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动,假设你是高三,6,班的一名学生,将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容：,1.,尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式,;,2.,少喝一次瓶装水；,3.,尽量不用一次性制品,如一次性木筷子和塑,料袋；,4.,每周至少手洗衣服一次；,5.,每周少开手机、电视一天。,写作内容,1.,活动背景,;2.,倡议目的,;3.,倡议内容。,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua from Class Six,Senior Three.,.,I believe everyone,as a member of this global village,should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign!,参考范文,I am Li Hua from Class Six,Senior Three.,We human beings,are seriously threatened by,the environmental pollution,such as waste gases,dirty water and white pollution.In order to encourage all of us to save energy and,protect our environment,I am going to make the following suggestions,.,It is suggested that,we should walk or take bikes if we go out.,To avoid white pollution,，,we can reduce the use of bottled water and unrecyclable items such as disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.,Whats more,if we can wash clothes by ourselves at least once a week,as well as,turn off our TVs and mobile phones for one day every week,it will be of great benefit to,saving energy.I believe everyone,as a member of this global village,should,take responsibility to,take part in the global green campaign!,Li Hua,精华点评,本文的难度在于如何合并信息点,考生需要用三个句子覆盖五个倡议。这时通过分析,可以发现,绿色出行是减少废气排放,;,减少使用瓶装水和一次性物品是为了减少白色污染,;,手洗衣服和减少使用手机、电视机是节能,因此考生可以把信息点按照这个逻辑分成三句,并且做出适当的补充,如,to avoid white pollution.,.it will be of great benefit to saving energy,等。,考生可以使用不同的词组表达同一个概念,使文章语言更丰富,如表示建议,考生既可以说,make a suggestion.,也可以用,it is suggested that.;,又如“一次性,(,物品,)”,的表达,既可以使用,unrecyclable,也可以用,disposable,表达。总之一篇好的作文,是非常有必要在词、短语、习惯表达、过渡词和句型等方面下功夫的。,Thank you!,