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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Basic writing-character introduction,Welcome,How,do,you,do,the,Basic,Writing,?,The suggested steps:,1.,审题,:,确定文体、人称和时态,2.,整合信息,:,把所有内容整合成,5,句,3.,翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.,连句成篇,5.,检查,Character introduction,Barack Obama,The president of United States,Character introduction (15mins),姓名,巴拉克,奥巴马（,Barack Obama,）,出生时间,1961,年,8,月,4,日,出生地点,夏威夷檀香山,(Honolulu,Hawaii),家庭,父亲是肯尼亚,(Kenya),黑人，母亲是美国白人,小时梦想,当总统,教育,哈佛法学院,(Harvard Law School),博士,职业,毕业后一直从政。,2008,年,11,用,4,日，在大选（,the general election,）中击败麦凯恩（,John McCain,），成为美国第,44,任总统，首位黑人总统。,意义,请根据下面表格，用英语介绍美国当选总统巴拉克,奥巴马,、,审题的步骤是什么文体,主体时态,人称,信息点整合,不要打草稿，但应有提纲,Exposition(,说明文）,Present and past tense,一般时态,The third person,（第三人称）,4,信息点整合,1,姓名：巴拉克,奥巴马（,Barack Obama,）,2,出生时间,:1961,年,8,月,4,日,3,出生地点,:,夏威夷檀香山,(Honolulu,Hawaii),4,家庭,:,父亲是肯尼亚黑人，母亲是美国白人,5,小时梦想：当总统,6,教育,:,哈佛法学院,(Harvard Law School),博士,7,职业：毕业后一直从政。,2008,年,11,用,4,日，在大选（the general election,）中击败麦凯恩（,John McCain,），成为美国第,44,任总统，首位黑人总统。,8,意义,1,姓名：巴拉克,奥巴马（,Barack Obama,）,2,出生时间,:1961,年,8,月,4,日,3,出生地点,:,夏威夷檀香山,(Honolulu,Hawaii),4,家庭,:,父亲是肯尼亚,(Kenya),黑人，母亲是美国白人,How to make so much information in one sentence?,Barack Obama was born in Honolulu,Hawaii on August 4th,1961,and,his father is a black from Kenya,while,his mother is a white American.,good,Barack Obama,born,in Honolulu,Hawaii on August 4th,1961,is now the President of USA.,better,Barack Obama,the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother,was born in Honolulu,Hawaii on August 4th,1961,best小时候的梦想：当总统,When he was young,he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States,.,教育：,education,哈佛法学院,(Harvard Law School),博士。毕业后一直从政。,He graduated from Harvard Law School and then got his Dr.degree there,after that he has been in politics all the time.,When he was child,his dream is become the USA President.,When he was a child,he wanted to be a president/his dream was to be the President of US.,better,good,Since,he graduated from Harvard Law School,with a doctors degree,he has been struggling for success in politics.,better,职业,big events in his or her life (in order of time),2008,年,11用,4,日，在大选（,the general election,）中击败麦凯恩（,John McCain,），成为美国第,44,任总统，首位黑人总统。,1 He beat/defeated John McCain in the general election on Nov 4th,2008 and became the 44th President of the United states.,2 He became the first African American President of US.,Compound one,He beat/defeated John McCain in the general election on Nov 4th,2008 and became the 44th President of the United states,the first African American President of US.,good,On November 4th,2008,he defeated John McCain in the general election and was elected the 44th President of the United States,making him the first African American President of the country,.,best,意义,The success of Obama greatly inspired people from all over the world,especially black people,to work hard to achieve their goals.,.,Obamas success realized Martins dream and demonstrated true equality between the black and the white.,A correct sentence is a,beautiful language.,1,毕业后一直,从政,。,After graduating,he joined/took part in politics all the time.,After graduating,he went in for/has been engaged in/has been in/has been struggling for success in politics all the time.,(,improper verb,),2,奥巴马于,1961,年,8,月,4,日出生在夏威夷檀香山,Barack Obama born/borned in Hololulu,Hawaii on August 4th,1961.,Barack Obama was born in Hololulu,Hawaii on August 4th,1961,3,妈妈是美国白人,Mother is,a,white people.,His mother is,a,white American woman.,(,no predicate,),(,improper meaning for noun,.),4,他在儿时想成为总统的梦想实现了,His dream that wanted to become a president in childhood has come true.,His dream that/which he had in his childhood to become a president has come true.,(,wrong use of sub-conjunction,),Sample Lets read together,Barack Obama,the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother,was born in Honolulu,Hawaii on August 4th,1961.,When he was only a small boy,he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States.Since he graduated from Harvard Law School,with a doctors degree,he has been struggling for success in politics.On November 4th,2008,he defeated John McCain in the general election and was elected the 44th President of the United States,making him the first African American President of the country,.The success of Obama greatly inspired people from all over the world,especially black people,to work hard to achieve their goals.,Appreciate one passage from Student,Barack Obama,born on September,4th,1961,in Honolulu,Hawaii,is now the president of USA.His father,coming from Kenya,is a black,while his mother,coming from America,is a white.,To be a president,was the dream that companied Obamas growth,so after graduating from Harvard Law School,he got a doctors degree and he has been engaged in politics.,For his excellent faculty of being a leader,he succeeded in defeating John MaCain in the general election and became the 44th American president but the first black president in history.,Obamas success realized Martins dream and demonstrated true equality between the black and the white.,生日、出生地、年龄,(who was)born in,is a,a,is a with a height of and a weight of,家庭背景：,was born in/into a poor/rich family,出生在贫穷的,/,富裕的家庭,as a child of years old,he,还是个,岁的孩子时,spend his childhood in,在,度过了他的童年,live a happy/hard life,生活很幸福,/,艰苦,Useful expressions of character introduction in basic writing,教育背景：,be admitted to university,考取,大学,graduate from department of university,从某大学某系毕业,receive/get a doctors degree,获取博士学位,主要事迹：,serve as,做某种工作,devote oneself/ones effort to/be devoted to,一生致力于,concentrate/apply oneself to,专注于,make up ones mind to do/be determined to do,决心做,have a gift for/be gifted in,有,的天赋,成就：,one of the best/most important,最好的,/,重要的,之一,set a example to,为,树立榜样,be honoured as,被授予,；,win the prize,获得,荣誉,make great contribution to,为,作出巨大贡献,Have a try:imitation,请根据以下信息写一篇介绍费翔的文章,.,姓名,费翔（,Kris Phillips,）,出生时间,1960,年,12,月,24,日,出生地点,台湾,家庭,父亲是美国人，母亲是中国人,小时梦想,当歌星,教育,美国史丹福大学,（,Stanford,America),学士（,bachelors degree),职业,毕业后一直从艺（,be engaged in),。,1987,年在中国内地（,mainland),发行了第一张专辑,(album)“,故乡的云”。之后参加春晚，成为了来自台湾宝岛第二位登上春晚（,Spring festival gala,）舞台的 歌星,.,成就,成为了家喻户晓的明星,Thank you,