江苏省徐州市高三英语写作专题复习课件-新课标-人教版.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Welcome,Writing,NMET书面表达第五档要求,1.,覆盖所有的语言要点,。内容要点可用不同 方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。,2.,应用,词汇,和,语法结构,的数量和准确性,。值得注意的是,语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误,但为尽力使用较,复杂,结构或较,高级,词汇所致,;,具有较强的语言运用能力,。,1,汉语式英语,2,句式单一 平铺直叙,3,无过渡语,Common mistakes in writing,如何在写作中避免句式单一,Rewrite the sentences,1.They arrived at the school.They felt the happy atmosphere.,2.I will be given another chance.I will succeed.,3.He wants to improve,his,English.He studies hard.,方法一,.,使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,When they arrived at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.,Arriving at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.,If I am given another chance,I will succeed,.,Given another chance,I will succeed.,In order to improve his English,he studies hard.,方法一,.,使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,Complete the sentences with non-predicate(,非谓语动词,),听到这个消息,他们变的很激动,.,_,the news,they got excited.,2.,尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错,.,_,many times,he still repeated the mistake.,3.,除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默,.,Unless _to speak,you should keep silent at the meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate(,非谓语动词,),1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。,2,，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。,3,，,做完作业后，他回家了,。,Faced with/Facing difficulties,he never gives up.,Introduced to the market,the product made a great success.,Having finished his homework,he returned,home.,方法二,.,巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,1.He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.,Not until,2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live.,Only,3.He is clever but he does not work hard.,as/though,4The clock tower stands on the other side of the street.,On the other side of the street,Complete the sentences,he returned home did he realize his foolishness.,by changing the way we live can we save the earth.,Clever,he is,he does not work hard.,stands the clock tower.,方法二,.,巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(,倒装句,),1.,他从不说关于他家庭的事,.,2.,只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性,我们才能生活得更好,.,3.,只有用这种方式,我们才能有足够的精力好好学习,.,Never did he speak about his own family.,Only when each of us realizes the importance of water,can we live a better life.,Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.,方法二,.,巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,4.Describe the character by using Inverted Sentence(,倒装句,),Poor as/though he was,he was happy.,方法二,.,巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,5.,他是个孩子，却知道很多。,6.,墙上有个通知，上面写着“请节约用水”,.,Child as/though he is,he knows a lot.,On the wall is a notice saying“Please Save Water”.,Use different ways to describe the picture,方法三,.,尝试多样化表达方式,一,就受到欢迎,As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport,they were warmly welcomed.,On arriving at the airport,Lien Chan and his wife,Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/the moment they arrived at the airport.,No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were,Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were,方法三,.,尝试多样化表达方式,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast.,All these make peoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful.,_,which_,With the development of _,_,_,_so _ thatIn recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast,makes peoples lives convenient,pleasant,Beijing,peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient,pleasant and colorful.,Nowadays,Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient,pleasant and colorful.,我校是一所省重点中学，,位于徐州东郊。校园很美,绿树成荫。,East of,XuZhou,lies,our school,which is a key,school of,JiangSu,province.It is beautiful,surrounded,with many trees/with many trees.,Translate the sentences:,句式多样,文章增“,靓,”,一,.,使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,二,.,巧用倒装增强句子表现力,三,.,尝试多样化表达方式,书面表达,:,假如你是我校晨曦报的记者,请你根据下面要点提示写一篇新闻报道,.,要点提示,:,校园庆典,情况,1.,进校园，氛围浓,2.,到处是鲜花，校友交谈的情景,学校现况,1.,现有,300,多名老师近,4000,学生,.,2.,教师工作苦,乐于奉献。,3.,每年有许多学生被大学录取。,你的感想,努力学习,明天母校以我为荣,要求,:1.100,词左右。,2.,内容适当发挥,注意 行文连贯,3.,适当使用所讲方法,.4.,开头语已给好。,On October 20th our school celebrated its fiftieth birthday,Assignment,Please finish the composition after class.,