高三英语总复习课件 Unit15 Writing course 课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Unit15,Writing course,Imitate,the sentence structure,1.,each contributionno matter how small-can help make a difference.,no matter,与,what/who/when/where/how/whether,连用，表示无论，不管，引导让步状语从句。,e.g.No matter what he says,I wontbelieve him.,2.,I am discovering thatbeing,a volunteer bring,s,many personal benefits.,e.g.,Doing,more reading can improve your reading comprehension.,Listening to music makes you relax.,3.,Lu,Hao,has also found,their relationship,beneficial.,find+,n./pron,.+,adj/v-ing/v-ed/prep,ph,e.g.,1)I think it(un),necessary,to talk face to face.2)I find it,helpful,to study in groups.,3)He made him,heard,by raising her voice.,4.)We found him,sleeping,in the class.,4.Every Tuesday and Friday he visits an,elderly gentleman,who lives alone.,5.This is how American jeans were introduced to the world.,This/That is how/why/when/where.,e.g.This is why Chinese prefer riding bicycles.,That is how I failed to pass the examination.,Guide for writing,Transitional Word IX,连接词,Transitional Word,Consequence,结果类,让步类,Concession,Cause,原因类,Time,顺序类,Conclusion,结论类,therefore,so,otherwise,as a result,thus,as a consequence,after all,but,even if,although,but even so,in spite of,because,for this reason,because of,due to on account of,thanks of,as,first of all,in the first place,to begin with,but later on,first,second,at first,but soon,to sum up,to summarize,in a word,in brief,On the whole,5.,Transitional Word,Example,Emphasis,(,强调类）,Addition,(,递进）,For example,for instance,for one thing,for another,namely,such as,that is,in deed,above all,in any case,in fact,Most important of all,whats more,in addition besides,again also,moreover furthermore Whats more,Worse still,Transitional Word,连接词,IX,Contrast (,对比类）,Jeans are the first choice for 72%of those in the 15-19 age group,whereas,less than half of the teenagers in the UK wear other types of casual trousers.,unlike,in contrast(,相反）,however,but,yet,on the contrary,（,正相反）,still,whereas,while,instead,Unlike,her mother;she is tall and her mother is very short.,2.China is a developing country,in contrast,Japan is a developed country.,Guangzhou has very good vegetables.,Dalian,however,has much better seafood.,4,.,He wants to go to the West Lake,but,he does not have enough money.,H loved swimming.,Yet,he had never been to the sea shore.,You must be tired.,On the contrary,I feel wide awake.,7.He had failed many times,still,he kept on the experiment.,8.,The husband wanted a boy,whereas,the wife wanted a girl.,9.Some people like coffee,while,others like tea.,1.Unlike,her mother;she is tall and her mother is very short.,2.China is a developing country,in contrast,Japan is a developed country.,Guangzhou has very good vegetables.,Dalian,however,has much better seafood.,4,.,He wants to go to the West Lake,but,he does not have enough money.,He loved swimming.,Yet,he had never been to the sea shore.,You must be tired.,On the contrary,I feel wide awake.,7.He had failed many times,still,he kept on the experiment.,8.,The husband wanted a boy,whereas,the wife wanted a girl.,9.Some people like coffee,while,others like tea.,Learn to say,Appreciate,Different people like different music.A musician said,“Music is a thing that can make you calm.”Actually,music is a thing that can change ones mood.Generally speaking,youth like the music with a quick rhythm like rock music and jazz,while,the old like calm music like classic music.,Appreciate,I will never forget the lesson Miss Wang gave me.Because I came from a village school,my English was very poor.When I was asked some questions in the first English course,I couldnt answer them.I told Miss Wang it was difficult for me to learn English well.Miss Wang wasnt angry with me.,Instead,she told me not to be discouraged.,Practice writing,假如你叫李平，你校高三同学正在开展一场讨论，讨论的主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼,?,请你根据下面所提供 的信息,给某英浯报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况,55,的学生认为,45,的学生认为,1,应该每天进行体育锻炼。2,可以做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球，但不要时间太长,3.,锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病,4,运动使大脑休息，使复习效果更好,1.,锻炼浪费时间,2.,锻炼使人疲劳,3.,运动以后很兴奋，较长时间,不能复习功课,4,运动中可能会受伤,composition,写作步骤,:,第一步审题,做到四确定,1.,体裁格式,2.,主题时态,3.,中心人称,4.,内容要点,:,55,的学生认为应该每天进行体育锻炼例如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球，但不要时间太长。锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病 而且，运动使大脑休息，使复习效果更好。,45,的学生认为锻炼浪费时间，锻炼使人疲劳，运动以后很兴奋较长时间不能复习功课。运动中可能会受伤。,书信格式 议论文,一般现在时,第三人称,讨论 的主题是,:,高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼,?,第二步列提纲,Sample,(from one student),Remark,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had whether _,Opinions are divided on the question.,55%of the students approve of the idea that_,They believe_ In addition,_,They suggest that _.,However,45%of the students are opposed to the idea of _,.,Besides,_ may be _therefore _ whats more,_.,写信常见开头句，点题。,全文综述句。,55,的同学的意见综述句。,意见一。,意见二。,意见三,。,7),45%,的同学,的同学的意见综述句。,反面意见 一,(8,）反面意见 二,(9,）反面意见,三,Composition,From Wang,YaNan,Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether the students of Senior 3 should be take physical exercise.,Opinions are divided on the question.About 55%of the students are in favor of this.They believe students must take exercise everyday.,such as play Ping-pong ball,basketball and do morning exercise.But not for a long time.Take some exercise can keep our body health,meanwhile it can keep our body away from illness.Whats more,do some sports also can relax our brains.Because of this,we can study better.,However,about 45%of students are approved to the idea.They think it will waste our time and do some sports always make people tired.Then it is very easy to become excited after do it,and we cant study carefully in this situation.Worse still,we may get in injured when we do some sport.,Correcting Composition,From Wang,YaNan,Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether the,students of Senior 3,should take physical exercise.,Opinions are divided on the question.About 55%of the students are in favor of this.They believe students should take exercise every,day,such as play,ing,Ping-pong ball,basketball and do,ing,morning exercise,s,.But,it wont take too much time,.Taking some exercise can keep our body health,y,meanwhile it can keep our body away from illness.Whats more,do,ing,some sport also can relax our brains.Because of this,we can study better.,However,about 45%of students are,o,pposed to the idea.They think it will waste,their,time and do,ing,sport always make,s,people tired.Then it is very easy to become excit,ed,after do,ing,it,and we cant study carefully in this situation.Worse still,we may get injured.,Appreciate,55%of the students,investigated,agree with the idea that we should take physical exercises every day,-from,Ren,lulu,55%of the students,think it necessary,to take exercises every day,I can keep our body healthy,in addition,it can,reduce disease,.,-from Chen,Yan,Having sports,can make our body stronger,so that,we can get less disease.,Also,having sports can give our brain a rest and make the result of review better.,-from,Zo,Xiang,4.,As a consequence,students will have more energy to study.,-from Liu,chiyuan,5.They,think it,un,necessary,to let the students take exercise.(Liu,Yan,),6.,In this way,we will review our subjects better.They think taking exercise is,a waste of time,(Zhang,Jingxing,),7.So you are,too,excited to,review your lessons well.(Yang,Fei,),8.They consider it also can make them more excited,which is bad for our review.,(Cui,weile,),9.,Worse still,we may get injured when we do some sport.,Correct your mistakes,1.We do have different opinion on this matter.,2.But it isnt able to cost so much time.,3.We cant take too much time on it.,4.Having sports should let us become exciting for long times.,5.Then it is easy to become excited after do some sport.,Dear Editor,lm writing to tell you about a discussion weve had about,whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise.,We do have different opinions.,55%of the students think they should take exercise every day,such as,doing,morning exercises,playing,ping pong and playing basketball,but shouldnt take too much time.Exercise,builds their bodies,and,reduces diseases,.Sports can let their brains have a rest,so that,their reviewing will be more effective.,On the other hand 45%believe taking exercise is a waste,of time and its tiring,.After having sports,they are too excited,for a long time to,pay attention to,their lessons.,Besides,they,might,get injured in sports.,Sample,写 法,点评,1.,开门见山，点名主题。,2.,要点齐全，议论有条理。,3.,文章中使用了多个复合句（宾语从句，状语从句，虚拟语气，还是用了现在分词和动词不定式，体现了作者较高的语言素养。,4.,连接词,such asbesides,but,so that,的使用，使得本文意义连贯，全篇浑然一体。,5.,能较好地使用一些较高级的词汇和结构（如,build our body,pay attention to,tooto,get injured),Dear Editor,lm writing to tell you about a discussion weve had about,whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise.,We do have different opinions.,55%of the students think they should take exercise every day,such as,doing,morning exercises,playing,ping pong and playing basketball,but shouldnt take too much time.Exercise,builds their bodies,and,reduces diseases,.Sports can let their brains have a rest,so that,their reviewing will be more effective.,On the other hand 45%believe taking exercise is a waste,of time and its tiring,.After having sports,they are too excited,for a long time to,pay attention to,their lessons.,Besides,they,might,get injured in sports.,Sample,自然情况,位于长江边，风景优美，适合居住,成就,经济发展迅速,新建了不少的工厂、住房、道路。,存在的问题,水、空气污染，交通拥挤,对江城发展的看法,内容有考生自己拟定,Practice writing,(for todays homework),假如你是 李华，住在江城。你的加拿大必有来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。会心的内容包括下表中的内容：,