高中英语 写作篇 图表类夹叙夹议作文课件 人教版 课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,专题七,夹叙夹议作文,图表类夹叙夹议作文要求首先通过对数据或文字内容进行叙述，准确地表述图表的内容，然后进行议论和评述，最后得出令人信服的结论。常见的写作步骤如下：,第一步，理解并概括整体信息,读懂图表标题，包括副标题所提供的信息。准确了解主题内容后，观察趋向和结果，找出变化的规律。然后，用一两句话就图表所反映的主题、事物发展的趋向和结果以及所反映出的深层问题等方面做出概括性的评论。,第二步，描述具体信息,从不同的角度对图表列出的信息进行描述。在进行描述时，既要说明结果，也要表明趋势。对于趋势的描述，至少需引用一组数据变化的例子，有时还需要再举出一组数据与之作比较。以这样的思路写下去，文章将会内容丰富，脉络清晰。,第三步，表达个人观点,层次,1,：对图表的含义进行分析、引申与议论。,层次,2,：给出结论，写出自己的观点等。,常用句式：,1.,点题总结句式,:,We can see from the graph that.,From the table we can find out that.,As can be seen from the chart,.,As is shown in the chart,the production last month rose.,Chart 1 shows that.,2.,细节描写句式,:,In conclusion,/Personally,/In my opinion,people around the world should be aware of the real situation of.,The number was/is ten times as many as in 2010.,It doubled the number of last year.,There is an increase of 20%this year.,It decreased twice than that of the year 2010.,The total number was lowered by 10%.,It rose from 10%to 15%of the total this year.,Compared with 2010,it fell from 15%to 10%.,（江西省师范大学附中,2011,届月考）,假如你叫李华，从某网站看到下面调查统计表，感触很深，决定写信给某英语报社反映这一现象，并简要分析原因，呼吁教育部门和家长改变目前的局面。,Time that students spend on physical activities per day,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,语言要连贯、准确，可适当发挥。,1.,文体信息：,文体：夹叙夹议；,语体：正式语体；,人称：第一人称；,中心大意：基于中国学生参加身体锻炼的时间特别少的事实，向教育部门和家长们呼吁改变目前的局面。,2.,主导时态：一般现在时,3.,内容要点：,描述调查统计表（美国学生，韩国学生及中国学生每天花费在身体锻炼上的时间对比）；,分析造成这一事实的原因；,表达自己的希望；,得出结论（总结句）。,4.,温馨提示：首先要看懂图表，注意图表说明。其次注意论述要有理有据，条理清晰，行文的逻辑性和段落的层次性。总结句要简练有力，切中要点。,Dear editor,It can be seen easily from the above chart that,American students spend 72 minutes on physical activities per day,and those in South Korea 42 minutes.However,Chinese students have only 12 minutes for physical activities per day.,The reasons lie in the following.,Almost all the time is spent on lessons in Chinese schools and students are made by parents to,concentrate on,their study even when they get back home.,Thus there is little time left for their physical activities.,In my opinion,both the Education Departments and parents,are responsible to,give the students more time for physical activities.,Anyhow,knowledge can be learned,not only from books but also through activities.,Yours sincerely,Li,Hua,文章要点齐全,写作层次清楚,而且对要点进行了合理的扩展。另外，还用到了很多高级短语和词汇,如,:,concentrate on,are responsible to,等。段落衔接自然,如,Thus,In my opinion,Anyhow,等过渡语的使用。句式变化多样，长短句错落有致,如,:,主语从句,状语从句,简单句的使用都很准确。体现了作者高水平的语言运用能力。,如能把下列句子加以优化则文章能更上一个档次：,1.Almost all the time is spent on lessons in Chinese schools,改为高级词汇,Almost all the time is occupied by lessons in Chinese schools.,2.both the Education Departments and parents are responsible to give the students more time for physical activities.,改为虚拟语气,Its high time that both the Education Departments and parents took measures to secure the students more time for physical activities.,3.Anyhow,knowledge can be learned not only from books but also through activities.,改为倒装句,Anyhow,not only from books but also through activities can knowledge be learned.,Dear editor,As is shown by the above chart,American students spend 72 minutes on physical activities per day,and those in South Korea 42 minutes.However,Chinese students have only 12 minutes for physical activities per day.,There are at least two good reasons accounting for this case.On one hand,almost all the time is spent on lessons in Chinese schools.On the other hand,students are made by parents to concentrate on their study even when they get back home.Lacking physical activities is also due to the fact that people pay less attention to it.In addition,college entrance examination system is responsible for it.,As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that both the Education Departments and parents are responsible to give the students more time for physical activities.,Anyhow,not only from books but also through activities can knowledge be learned.,Yours sincerely,Li,Hua,模板,第一段，说明图表,第二段，主题句图表说明,1,图表说明,2,图表说明,3,，如：,As the bar chart shows,_ during the years of _ to _.,第三段，说明引起变化的原因,主题句原因,1,原因,2,原因,3,，如：,Several factors contribute to _._.(,原因,1)And_.(,原因,2)Furthermore,_(,原因,3)All these result in _.,第四段，说明影响或者提出解决办法,第五段，主题句,+,建议,+,前景预测,良好的人际关系是建设和谐社会的关键。假设你是李华，最近你校对“中学生如何交友？”的话题展开讨论，大家发表了不同的看法。请你根据下面所给内容，给,21,世纪报 高中生版,Your Words,栏目写一封信，反映讨论情况。并说明你对如何交友的看法。,注意：,1.,对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。,2.,词数,150,左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。,为何交友,建立良好的人际关系，构建和谐社会,交友对象,学习上的朋友,互帮互学，促进提高，,生活上的朋友,互助互利，摆脱困境，,情感上的朋友,倾诉烦恼，分享喜悦，,如何交友,（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）,One possible version:,Dear editor,Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.,As we all know,good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in building harmonious society.,Many people suggest that they should make friends who are of great benefit to their studies,so they will help each other and make greater progress with their studies.Some believe that they should have friends related to their life.Whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems in terms of life,they can help rid themselves of the problems.In addition,others agree that they should have some friends who can listen to them attentively and share their bitterness and joy.,What I want to stress is that each of us should have a true friend.To make friends,we should try to remember the names of the people we contact and learn not to judge people by their appearances.Besides,we need to be friendly and care about them.When disagreement does occur,its wise of us to talk it over to others.In brief,making true friends can really enable us to improve ourselves.,Yours ever,Li,Hua,