高中英语短文改错--获奖课件名师公开课.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,How to do,Proof-reading,短文改错,Class 7 Senior 2,Miss Zhou,In our everyday lives,if we make some mistakes,we should correct them,and then we are still a good fellow.,Chairman Maos words,怎么改？,His salary is paid by an hour.,Lihua hit me on a head.,He always has dinner at the table.,The teacher said the earth ran around the sun.,I can,go to home now.,2.I like history of China.,3.I am fond at English.,the,Wrong,word,Missing,word,of,Unnecessary,word,高考短文改错的考察方式,下面短文中有,10,处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改,某个单词,。,增加,:,在缺词处加一个漏字符号（,）,并在其下面写出该加的词。,删除,:,把多余的词用斜线（,）划掉。,修改,:,在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。,注意,:1.,每句不超过两个错误,；,2.,每处错误及其修改均,仅限一词,；,3.,只允许修改,10,处,多者（从第,11,处起）不计分。,改错格式,从错误比例上看,，,2,：,1,：,7,或者,1,：,1,：,8,：,多,缺,错,一般以三种题型出现,:,增加,删除或修改,。,设问的角度有三个,：,词法、句法和行文逻辑,。,一、动词,形,1.动词的,时态,和,语态,错误.,高考链接,1,：,However,my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday,.(2011,全国）,flew,Growing up is not easy.Sometimes all that is need is,someone to rely on.,（,2008,全国）,needed,2.,主谓不一致,的错误,.,高考链接,:,I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure,that the girl were all right.(2009,全国卷,2),was,3,.,非谓语动词,错误,高考链接,:,I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to,Hangzhou.,（,2011,新课标全国卷）,buying,I was really disappointing and about to leave when he,walked out of a building.,(2011,陕西卷,),disappointed,5.He used to getting up early to take physical exercise.,were,likes,exciting,get,Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.,2.When they came here,tomorrow,I will show them,.,3.,They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.,4.I found the game excited and my dad explained the rules.,practice,come,Practice,二、名词,数,指,名词单、复数形式,的用法错误。,高考链接,2,：,It felt very strange to travel without any luggages,.,（,2011,新课标全国卷）,luggage,In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports,was steady,around three per weeks,.(2011,辽宁卷）,week,1.Dont lose hearts,youll be successful in time.,2.I need some more informations.,3.These machines look the same,but they are of different kind.,heart,information,kinds,practice,不可数名词,progress,furniture,weather,fun,news,information,advice,Practice,三、还要注意形和副,形容词和副词的误用,高考链接,3,：,When she dropped me off,I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.,（,2011,浙江卷）,slowly,2,比较级和最高级的混用或误用,.,The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected,.(2009,陕西）,faster,还要注意形和副,高考链接：,Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another,（,2012,浙江卷）,Unfortunately,We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath,.(2012,陕西）,comfortable,1.He asked angry if we had finished the work.,2.Yes,it is clearly that your life in your country is,quite different from mine.,3.His father looks much more happier today.,angrily,clear,4.So I grateful accepted the offer,.,gratefully,practice,Practice,四,、,代词,格，,细领悟,3.it,作形主、形宾,、,指代时有缺漏,(make,find,think),或固定搭配,.,高考链接,4,：,With the help of Katia,a roommate of me,(2011,重庆卷）,mine,It was only when we did their chemistry project together,that I began to understand,(2010,辽宁卷）,He found difficult to learn math well.,our,it,1.,人称代词，反身代词，不定代词,2.,代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误,.,2.I was learning to express me in simple English.,3.I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.,4.,One day I wrote a little story and showed,to my teacher.,myself,everything,it,Some students may also save up for our college or future use.,their,practice,Practice,五、,介词短语,须关注,，,习惯用法,要记住,1.主要考查,固定短语，固定介词,的搭配。,2.,介词的,多用，漏用,和,误用,3,.,时间状语前有指示代词,this,that,或,one,next,last,等修饰时不用介词,.,eg.He paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon,五、,介词短语,须关注,，,习惯用法,要记住,高考链接：,Two years before,I travelled to Brazil and I rented for a car,.(2012,浙 江卷,),with,I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.,practice,Im sure they will laugh to me and see me as,a fool.,2.At last we reached to the village at the foot of the,hill,.,3.When a young man starts to earn his own living,he can no longer expect others to pay his food.,4.The gentleman insisted at my receiving the,money.,at,for,on,Practice,连词,but,，,and,，,or,so,和,although,的逻辑性用法错误,高考链接：,六,、,冠词连词,常光顾,He was right here in the front of me,.(2011,陕西卷）,I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag,from the floor,.,.,冠词,a,an,和,the,的用法错误,and,I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light.,He will stay there one and two days.,3.Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying.,4.The driver put the window down and offered us a,umbrella.,and,or,an,The smaller piece is that you want,right?,It is known to us all,all efforts will be paid.,Practice makes perfect,that is very important for us.,七,、,复杂句子,不放过,what,As,which,1.,单词拼写不改,.,2.,大小写不改,.,3.,词序不改,.,4.,标点符号不改,.,5.,原意不改,.,Dont forget!,五不改原则,实战演练,考 查 目 标,1,）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力,2,）综合运用英语知识的能力,3,）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻辑的能力,下面短文中有,10,处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改,某个单词,。,增加,:,在缺词处加一个漏字符号（,）,并在其下面写出该加的词。,删除,:,把多余的词用斜线（,）划掉。,修改,:,在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。,注意,:1.,每句不超过两个错误,；,2.,每处错误及其修改均,仅限一词,；,3.,只允许修改,10,处,多者（从第,11,处起）不计分。,改错格式,解题步骤,1.,通读全文，掌握大意,2.,整句理解，上下兼顾,3.,复读全文，检查验证,动词形,，,名词数,还要注意,形和副,代词,格，细领悟,介词短语须关注,习惯用法,要记住,冠词连词,常光顾,A Limerick,请先念一遍“咒语”吧,复杂句子,不放过,再叮嘱几句：,1.,单词拼写不改,.,2.,大小写不改,.,3.,词序不改,.,4.,标点符号不改,.,5.,原意不改,.,解题步骤,1.,通读全文，掌握大意,2.,整句理解，上下兼顾,3.,复读全文，检查验证,Dont forget!,五不改原则,At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his,father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose,a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!,They put them in the corner of the sitting,room.Jim was covered it with a lot of,Christmas light.The sitting room looked,really beautifully at the moment.There was,a fire burning in the fire place,but the Christmas,tree lights were shinning brightly.Jim and his,parents singing and dancing happily.,At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his,1._,father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose,2._,a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!,3._,They put them in the corner of the sitting,4._,_,on,_,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,代词格，细领悟,room.Kate was covered it with a lot of,5._Christmas light.The sitting room looked,6._,really beautifully at the moment.There was,7._,a fire burning in the fire place,but the Chistmas,8._,tree lights was shinning brightly.Jim and his,9._,parents singing and dancing happily.,10._,was,_,lights,_,_,beautiful,_,and,were,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数冠词连词须关注,I was a high school student then,from the low-income,family.So I have to support my family.My,first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant.,I still remember going there early and felt anxious about,the new world.I worked harder because I was afraid of,losing the job.At night,I was sometimes very tired to do,my homework.But I came to understand that was not,easy to earn money,and that knowledges could change,my life.So what I learned from the job,in a hard,way,was much more important as what I learned from school.,a,had,feeling,hard,knowledge,it,too,than,And,从错误比例上看,，,2,1,：,7,或者,1,：,1,：,8,：,多,缺,错,一般以三种题型出现,:,增加,删除或修改,。,设问的角度有三个,：,词法、句法和行文逻辑,。,summary,He who makes no mistakes,，,makes nothing,不犯错误的人必然一事无成。,2.By ignorance we mistake,and by mistakes we learn,吃一堑 长一智。,3.A stupid person always tries to justify himself for his mistakes;but a wise man tries his best to correct his errors.,愚蠢的人总是为自己的错误辩护，聪明的人则力求改正,。,4.Dont make the same mistake twice.,不要重复犯同样的错误。,Proverbs,Good luck in your coming exam!,