王仁娟初中英语作文写作课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Writing,本节课的学习任务,:,写一篇描述人的外貌,(look),、性格,（,characters,）、,爱好,（,hobbies,）,的文章,short,1.What does he/she look like?,tall,thin,heavy/fat,What does he look like?,short hair,long hair,What does he look like?,2.Pair-work:A:What does xxx look like?,B:He/She is,A:What is his/her character?,B:He/She is,A:What does he/she like?,B:He/She likes,描述外貌的单词：,short,tall,thin,，,of medium height,，,strong,good-looking,nice,slim,苗条,描述穿着的短语：,wear a T-shirt,wear a pair of glasses,描述性格的单词：,lazy,quiet,friendly,shy,kind-hearted,善良的,polite,有礼貌的，,strict,严厉的,out-going,外向的,描述爱好的短语：,like reading,like to help others,like eating,like playing basketball,3.Word collection:,4.Write something about this boy.,(3-5,句话,),提示词：,tall,，,thin,，,black hair;,wear shorts and a T-shirt;,polite(,有礼貌的,),，,happy,This is my pen pal.His name is Xiao Dong.He is tall and thin.,He has black hair and he like,s,wearing,short,s,and T-shirts.He is very polite and.,He is a happy boy.,5.,Introduce yourself,Do it with your partners,以下信息可作为参考,Name,xxx,Age,15,Look,tall,，,thin,，,black hair,big eyes,Favorite food,fish,，,beef,vegetable,Favorite,sport,play basketballFavorite classes,English,maths,PE,Things he likes,little dog,Things he likes to do,play with his good friends,help others,Character(,性格,),kind-hearted,（善良的）,polite(,有礼貌的,),Name,Ma Xiaotiao,Age,15,Look,tall,，,thin,，,black hair,wear shorts and a T-shirt,Favorite food,hamburgers,，,fried chicken,Favorite classes,science,art,PE,Things he likes,little animals,Things he likes to do,play with his good friends,help others,Character(,性格,),kind-hearted,（善良的）,polite(,有礼貌的,),6,.Writing task:,根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，,80,个左右的单词,开头已经给出。,开头：,Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal.He,7,.,写作步骤,1),审题,2),列纲,3),连句,4),修饰句子,组织文章,5),检查纠错,（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）,（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）,（适当运用承上启下的过渡词,使文章更完整更精炼）,（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、,习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写,及标点符号）,（用单词、短语列出内容要点）,8.Lets share some compositions.,9.Pair-correction:,Exchange your composition with your partner and correct the mistakes with your red pen.,附：作文评分标准,Name,Ma Xiaotiao,Age,15,Look,tall,，,thin,，,black hair,wear shorts and a T-shirt,Favorite food,hamburgers,，,fried chicken,Favorite classes,science,art,PE,Things he likes,little animals,Things he likes to do,play with his good friends,help others,Character(,性格,),kind-hearted,（善良的）,polite(,有礼貌的,),Writing task:,根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，,80,个左右的单词,开头已经给出。,开头：,Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal.He,10.,例文,:,Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal.He is 15 year,s,old.,He is tall,and,thin.He has black hair and he like,s,wearing,short,s,and T-shirts.He looks very cute.He likes hamburgers,and,fried chicken best.His favorite classes are science,art and P.E.He like,s,little animals.He often,play,s,with,his good friends at school and helps others.He is very polite and kind-hearted.He is a good boy.I like him very much.,11.Write your compositions again after the corrections.Later,hand in your compositions to me.,Thank you!,