书面表达专题.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,书面表达专练,主讲人 何海霞,Training (1),1.得知你二月份要来北京我很高兴。,Im so glad to learn that youre coming to Beijing,in February.,2.,我已经为你找到了地方。,Ive found a place for you.,3.,房间面积50平方米，带有卧室，洗澡间和厨房。,Its a flat of 50 square meters,with a bedroom,a,a bathroom and a kitchen.,4.,卧室里备有床，沙发，书桌和椅子。,In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a,chair.,Training (2),5.月租三百。,The rent is 300,yuan,per month.,6.,公寓在长安大街的一幢楼房中，离光明中学不远。,The flat is in a building on Changan Street,which,not far from,Guangming,Middle School.,7.,一路车可以直接带你到校。事实上，只有两站路。,Bus No.1 can take you straight to the school.,In fact,its only two stops.,8.,如果不满意，我可以给你另找地方。,If you are not satisfied with it,I can try and find,another place for you.,Possible Version(3),Dear Bob,Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.Ive found a place for you.Its a small flat of 25 square meters,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.In the bed room there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.The rent is 500,yuan,per month.The flat is in a building on,Fangcao,Street,which is not far away from,Jianxin,Chinese School.But No.11 can take you straight to the school.In fact,its only one stop.Do you think youd like,it?If not,I can try and find another place for you.Just let me know.,Yours,Li,Hua,Versions(4),Dear Bob,I ma is,Lihua,I come from China,welcome you to,di,chins.I ma school is in fan,Chao,here.I live ph the fan,Chao,.They share one street.You to do I school,sunter,Chinese,you fan,Chao,moved in and gave the I school.I have you the home have a 25.500 money 30 days.The,yshare,one street.A small airport and a few of television per day.,Yours,Lihua,0分,Versions(5),Dear Bob,How are you?I received your letter and very happy.,You please me help you a,rom,which I was found.With you,stermber,to our city,Jianxinhuawen,school to study Chinese.,The room on the,Fangcao,stret,enar,you school a next.The room is three flood.Have a bed room,a Kitchen and,toilt,.The bed room has a bed and the desk,fo,your study,Behind,Kitchen and,toilt,savd,work the,Chilt,.,Im very happy you can Chinese study.,The best wish to you!,Yours,Li,Hua,1-5分,Versions(6),Dear Bob,I hear that you will go to my school to study in sep.Im very happy to heard it.And you asked me to found a house,hearly,the“,Jianxing,Huwen,Middle School”,I have found it,its in the Fang,Chao,road.You can take a 11 bus arrived there.,Now,I tell you something about the house.The,houserent,will cost you 500 Yuan every,monthes,the house has 25,killmiters,large,has three,roms,such as,bedrom,chitherroom,and,bothroom,the room is very clean,has a chair,a table and a light,all of them are new one.In a word,its,bery,great,ithink,you are like it.,Last,Im looking forward you and you all things best!,Yours,Li,Hua,6-10分,Versions(7),Dear Bob,I already found a flat,fr,you.It is on the,Fangchao,Street where near,Jianxin,Chinese school.The next bus stop of,Fangchao,Street is,Jianxin,Chinese school.,I will tell you some information about the flat.There are four roomsincluding a living room,bath room and a kitchen.In living room,you will use a sofa,a bed and a desk.And there are three doors to the bath room,kitchen and outside flat.,All of above is the flat which I found for you.The house owner said the rent can be discussed if you want to live in.,Im look forward to your letter.,Yours,Li,Hua,11-15分,Versions(8),Dear Bob,Im very glad to hear from you and Im very happy to see you in September.,I know you will study in,Jian,Xin,Chineses,schol,so I have already found a comfortable house near this school for you.In front of the house,there is a bus station and the No.11 bus will take you to the school where you will study.In the house,you will feel very comfortable.In its the biggest room,there have a bed,a sofa,a desk and so on.The house also has a toilet and a kitchen.I think you will have a good time in it.,At last,the house is not too big and the rent is 500 per month.,I will wait for you in the city!,Yours,Li,Hua,16-20分,Consolidation(9),Dear Bob,How glad I was when I heard that you would come to,Jian,Xin,Chinese school to study Chinese.Ive found a house,which youve mentioned in your last letter.As was expected,its near the school where youll study.As a matter of fact,its by the side of the road where lies the No.11 bus stop and the school is at the next stop.,Let me tell you something in details about the house.For one thing,its large enough for a single person like you to live in.For another,its well equipped.Besides a sofa,a desk with a chair and a bed,there are also a washroom and a kitchen.Its 25 square meters with the rent of only 500,yuan,each week.,It never occurred to me that you would come to study with me.Im looking forward to your coming soon.,Best wishes!,Yours,Li,Hua,21-25分,