让高考书面表达神.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,让高考书面表达神采飞扬,Composition Writing Skills,Xia Guibin,Weiyuan Middle School,Apr.15.2013,Compare,A,1.,Tom is a boy.,2.He is seven years old.,3.He was watching TV in the living room when he heard a terrible noise.,4.Then he rushed out immediately.,5.At last he found it was just a daydream.,B,Hearing a terrible noise,Tom,a seven-year-old boy,who was watching TV in the living room,rushed out immediately,only to find it was a daydream.,如何使书面表达,显出文采 展示个性 亮而出众,Tips to make some beautiful sentences,Try to use advanced words,（高级词汇,),Try to use different sentence structure or complicated structure,(,不同,/,复杂句式,),Try to use complex sentences,（复合句）,Try to use proper transitional words,(,过渡词,),Try to use advanced words,E.g.:,in the end,eventually,1.Richards wife came back home after the advanced training,，,feeling,very tired,.,exhausted,2.The map,is good for,allthe visitors.,be,beneficial,to,3.The students,should,be here before 8 oclock every day.,be,supposed/expected,to,Try to use different sentence structure or complicated structure,1.They sang and laughed as they went back home.(,用,-,ing,形式,),2.The teacher walked out of the lab and many students,followed her.(,用,-,ed,形式,),3.I passed the English exam because of your help.(,用虚拟语气,),4.You can improve your English only in this way.(,用倒装句,),They went back home,singing,and laughing.,the,teacher,walked out of the lab.,Followed by many students,But for,your,help,I,wouldnt,have passed the English exam.,Only in this way,can you improve,your,English.,Try to use complex sentences,E.g.,：,1.The little boy knows so many things.2.It surprises the man.,1.Sothat,(,结果状语从句,),The little boy knows,so,many things,that,the man feels surprised.,2.Noun Clause,（名词性从句）,_,surprises the man is,_,the little boy knows so many things.,3.Attr.Clause,（定语从句）,The little boy knows so many things,_,surprises him.,What,that,which,Try to use proper transitional words,1.,表示顺序：首先,然后,最后,2.,表示递进：况且,/,再者,3.,表示对比：一方面,另一方面,4.,表示并列,/,选择：既,.,又；要么,.,要么；既不,也不；不但,而且,first,，,then,，,finally,etc.,besides,whats more,in addition,，,etc.,bothand,，,eitheror,neithernor,，,not onlybut also,etc.,on the one hand,，,on the other hand,，,etc.,I think,the Internet is helpful,not,harmful as someone else thinks.,We all know that,the Internet,is very important,in our daily life.On the Internet,we,can read,news and get much information.We,can send,E-mails or make phone calls to our,family.We can attend the net school,read many books and even teach ourselves English.,In my opinion,rather than,As we all know,is playing,a more and more important role,Use better phrases to replace the common ones.,Practice Improve the passage,not only,but also,Besides,we,半开放式作文,【,写作指导,】,半开放式作文是近年来高考英语学科书面表达的一个趋势。所谓,“,半开放,”,是指试题,给出部分要点，考生自己再增加一些要点,。,考生,不仅要精确地表达所给信息，更加重要的是在自由发挥部分,，不可以随意发挥，要有自己独到的见解，要言之有物，言之有理，充分体现出思维的广度和深度。,How to write a good composition,？,1.,main points in a composition,2.,tips to make your composition better than others,3.,good handwriting,书面表达（满分,35,分）,-,2011,四川卷,最近，某中学生英文报开设了“,After-class Activities”,的栏目。请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。,1.,你校开展课外活动的情况；,2.,你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；,3.,为同学选择课外活动提出建议；,4.,为学校开展课外活动提出建议；,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,文中不得提及具体人名,校名及地名；,3.,稿件的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）,After-class Activities,Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.,5.,Para1,Para2,Para3,Discuss the following with your partner,1.What after-class activities are there in your school?,2.What after-class activities do you like most?,Why?(maybe three reasons are OK),3.what suggestions do you give to students about after-class activities?,What about schools?,4.What else do you want to say to make students take an active in after-class activities?,Combine the answers into paragraph1,1.What after-class activities are there in your school?,2.What after-class activities do you like most?,Why?(maybe three reasons are OK),Para1,Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more,popular in high schools.In our schools,there are,all,kinds of after-,class activities,for example,arts and sports.We enjoy them very,much.,I,like,playing football and reading stories,most,.,They,are,good for,me.,They build my body.,They enrich my knowledge.,They free me from the heavy work of study.,Combine the answers into paragraph2,3.what suggestions do you give to students about after-class activities?,What about schools?,Para2,Here I have some suggestions.,To students,youd better,choose the activities.,They interest you and suit you;To schools,they should organize more activities for students and leave students,more time for activities,when they give students,less homework.,Combine the answers into paragraph3,4.What else do you want to say to make students take an active in after-class activities?,Para3,Dear friends,please actively take part in after-class activities.,They will make your school life colorful.,They will improve your,learning.,A Composition From a Student,Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our schools,there are,all,kinds of after-class activities,for example,arts and sports.We enjoy them very much.,I,like,playing football and reading stories,most,.,They,are good for,me.,They build my body.,They enrich my knowledge.,They free me from the heavy work of study.,Here I have some suggestions.,To students,youd better choose the activities.,They interest you and suit you;To schools,they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities,when they give students,less homework.,Dear friends,please actively take part in after-class activities.,They will make your school life colorful.,They will improve your learning.,A Composition From a Student,Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more,popular in high schools.In our schools,there are,all,kinds of after-,class activities,for example,arts and sports.We enjoy them very,much.,I,like,playing football and reading stories,most,.,They,are,good forme.,They build my body.,They enrich my knowledge.,They free me from the heavy work of study.,Here I have some suggestions.,To students,youd better,choose the activities.,They interest you and suit you;To schools,they should organize more activities for students and leave students,more time for activities by giving them less homework.,Dear friends,please actively take part in after-class activities.,They will make your school life colorful.,They will improve your,learning.,.Replacement,.Combination,+;+;+;+,One Possible Version,Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our schools,there are,various,kinds of after-class activities,for example,arts and sports.We enjoy them very much.,Playing football and reading stories are my,favorites,which do me lots of good.,Besides,building my body and enriching my knowledge,they,also,free me from the heavy work of study.,Here I have some suggestions.To students,youd better choose the activities,which interest you and suit you;,To schools,they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.,Dear friends,please actively take part in after-class activities,which,will not only make your school life colorful,but also improve your learning.,Good writing is necessary,compare two passages and tell which is better,Summary,Tips to make some beautiful sentences,advanced words,different sentence structure or complicated structure,complex sentences,use proper transitional words,How to write a good composition,main points in a composition,tips to make your composition better than others,good handwriting,Homework,假设你是某校高三（,1,）班学生李华，将参加学校举行的主题为“,Lets Ride Bicycles”,的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列提示用英语撰写一份演讲稿，并呼吁同学们过低碳生活。,1.,汽车带来的问题（两个方面）,2.,骑自行车的益处（两个方面）,注意：,1.,词数,120,词左右；,2.,演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,参考词汇；低碳生活,low-carbon life,Good morning,everyone.I am Li Hua from Class 1,Senior 3.The topic of my speech is Lets Ride Bicycles.,Thank you for listening!,Proverbs,Rome is not built in one day.,Practice makes perfect.,